Realistic Fiction
Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip
Anne's point of view
I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.
He had kastanie hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are Du looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place in front of the Old Navy.
It takes about 5 Minuten for the whole group to arrive.
"So," Catie said, "What do y'all wanna do first?"
"Oh! I know just the place," Sammy said, taking the lead, with everyone trailing behind her.
It turns out Sammy was taking us to the Target.
Kelli starts to kind of glare at her and say, "Really?" but, I interrupt her and say,"Let's go in!" Before a fight could erupt.
I turns out that it was a really nice Target. The had a bunch of cool-looking clothes, they had some that only people on TV could pull off without being teased, plus some that only a humongous dork would wear. We each only had $30, though, so we had to spend wisely. I decide not to buy anything, since I Liebe Old Navy. So after that trip, Sammy only had $5 left. We had a good laugh over it, and headed over to Old Navy.
I sure hope we stay together, as friends. We seem to really get each other. I thought. Maybe this friendship WILL last.
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Thanks for reading! Please put your critique below!! - Sadie
Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip
Anne's point of view
I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.
He had kastanie hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are Du looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place in front of the Old Navy.
It takes about 5 Minuten for the whole group to arrive.
"So," Catie said, "What do y'all wanna do first?"
"Oh! I know just the place," Sammy said, taking the lead, with everyone trailing behind her.
It turns out Sammy was taking us to the Target.
Kelli starts to kind of glare at her and say, "Really?" but, I interrupt her and say,"Let's go in!" Before a fight could erupt.
I turns out that it was a really nice Target. The had a bunch of cool-looking clothes, they had some that only people on TV could pull off without being teased, plus some that only a humongous dork would wear. We each only had $30, though, so we had to spend wisely. I decide not to buy anything, since I Liebe Old Navy. So after that trip, Sammy only had $5 left. We had a good laugh over it, and headed over to Old Navy.
I sure hope we stay together, as friends. We seem to really get each other. I thought. Maybe this friendship WILL last.
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Thanks for reading! Please put your critique below!! - Sadie
Thursday
Tammie's best friend Hazel likes this boy named Donald. Hazel has been obsessing over him for almost a week now. I am sick and tired of hearing about Donald's butt! I don't know why she would do this but after school yesterday, Tammie told me that she and Donald kissed! Excuse YOU?! Hazel was mad as heck. I never seen smoke come out someone's ears like that. Lets just say that Tammie and Hazel probably won't ever be Friends again. Bad news is that Tammie will now be obsessing over him. Someone save me from the insanity of this building. Good news is that my mom finally got me a puppy. She swear she hates Tiere but I found her cooing to the new puppy. I have been thinking of names for him oder her. I don't know if it is even a girl oder a boy! What kind of mother doesn't know her own baby's gender. I have to look up how to tell the difference between a boy wiener dog and a girl wiener dog. See ya, awesome sauce blog! (the phrase 'awesome sauce' is very beliebt at my school.)
Tammie's best friend Hazel likes this boy named Donald. Hazel has been obsessing over him for almost a week now. I am sick and tired of hearing about Donald's butt! I don't know why she would do this but after school yesterday, Tammie told me that she and Donald kissed! Excuse YOU?! Hazel was mad as heck. I never seen smoke come out someone's ears like that. Lets just say that Tammie and Hazel probably won't ever be Friends again. Bad news is that Tammie will now be obsessing over him. Someone save me from the insanity of this building. Good news is that my mom finally got me a puppy. She swear she hates Tiere but I found her cooing to the new puppy. I have been thinking of names for him oder her. I don't know if it is even a girl oder a boy! What kind of mother doesn't know her own baby's gender. I have to look up how to tell the difference between a boy wiener dog and a girl wiener dog. See ya, awesome sauce blog! (the phrase 'awesome sauce' is very beliebt at my school.)
Chapter 5: Fight!!
The Weiter morning, eichelhäher, jay heard cheering. When he went outside he saw a horrible thing. The Kitsune was being forced to fight a giant lizard, while the Kitsune was still very injured.
"No!" eichelhäher, jay yelled as he grabbed a sword and ran toward the eidechse with his sword.
"What!?" Prince Cole shouted in surprise. The audience started booing as Nick saved the Kitsune.
Then the Guards grabbed the Kitsune and put her in her cage. eichelhäher, jay walked to the Kitsunes cage, and saw the citizens children pulling the Kitsune's tails and Ears as she was chained to the ground while the adults spit at her.
"Why do Du keep bullying her!?" eichelhäher, jay yelled as they stopped.
"Don't stop!" Cole yelled as he pulled out a messer and started cutting the Kitsune's arm's and legs. Than eichelhäher, jay pushed Cole and Blocked him from hurting her.
The Weiter morning, eichelhäher, jay heard cheering. When he went outside he saw a horrible thing. The Kitsune was being forced to fight a giant lizard, while the Kitsune was still very injured.
"No!" eichelhäher, jay yelled as he grabbed a sword and ran toward the eidechse with his sword.
"What!?" Prince Cole shouted in surprise. The audience started booing as Nick saved the Kitsune.
Then the Guards grabbed the Kitsune and put her in her cage. eichelhäher, jay walked to the Kitsunes cage, and saw the citizens children pulling the Kitsune's tails and Ears as she was chained to the ground while the adults spit at her.
"Why do Du keep bullying her!?" eichelhäher, jay yelled as they stopped.
"Don't stop!" Cole yelled as he pulled out a messer and started cutting the Kitsune's arm's and legs. Than eichelhäher, jay pushed Cole and Blocked him from hurting her.
1. Fantasy
2. Realistic Fiction
3. Globes
4. Rain
5. The Significance of Pens and Pencils
6. Good foods
7. Colors
8. Drama
9. Quotes
10. TV/Comic Characters
11. Engel on Earth
12. Being a unicorn!
13. Being a Guinea Pig.... ;D
14. Being a Dog. :D
15. Inventions
16. Hybrid/Mutant Animals
17. How to Make Duct Tape Roses
18. Winning a Nobel Peace Prize (What would your speech be!?)
19. Being a Snowman
20. Being Clay/Play Dough/Model Magic
21. Being Socks (YUCK.)
22. Writer's Block (It helps)
23. School
24. Turtles!!!!! (AWESOME!!)
25. Jokes
26. Dogs
27. Lightening
28. Storms
29. Sun
30. Planets
31. Space
32. Awesomeness
33. Horror
34. Biking
35. Nature
36. Monkeys
37. Trees
38. Leaves
Some of these things I prefer to write about while others hate Schreiben about it. That's fine! All Du need to brainstorm is a single word and start writing.
2. Realistic Fiction
3. Globes
4. Rain
5. The Significance of Pens and Pencils
6. Good foods
7. Colors
8. Drama
9. Quotes
10. TV/Comic Characters
11. Engel on Earth
12. Being a unicorn!
13. Being a Guinea Pig.... ;D
14. Being a Dog. :D
15. Inventions
16. Hybrid/Mutant Animals
17. How to Make Duct Tape Roses
18. Winning a Nobel Peace Prize (What would your speech be!?)
19. Being a Snowman
20. Being Clay/Play Dough/Model Magic
21. Being Socks (YUCK.)
22. Writer's Block (It helps)
23. School
24. Turtles!!!!! (AWESOME!!)
25. Jokes
26. Dogs
27. Lightening
28. Storms
29. Sun
30. Planets
31. Space
32. Awesomeness
33. Horror
34. Biking
35. Nature
36. Monkeys
37. Trees
38. Leaves
Some of these things I prefer to write about while others hate Schreiben about it. That's fine! All Du need to brainstorm is a single word and start writing.