Realistic Fiction
Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip
Anne's point of view
I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.
He had kastanie hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are Du looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place in front of the Old Navy.
It takes about 5 Minuten for the whole group to arrive.
"So," Catie said, "What do y'all wanna do first?"
"Oh! I know just the place," Sammy said, taking the lead, with everyone trailing behind her.
It turns out Sammy was taking us to the Target.
Kelli starts to kind of glare at her and say, "Really?" but, I interrupt her and say,"Let's go in!" Before a fight could erupt.
I turns out that it was a really nice Target. The had a bunch of cool-looking clothes, they had some that only people on TV could pull off without being teased, plus some that only a humongous dork would wear. We each only had $30, though, so we had to spend wisely. I decide not to buy anything, since I Liebe Old Navy. So after that trip, Sammy only had $5 left. We had a good laugh over it, and headed over to Old Navy.
I sure hope we stay together, as friends. We seem to really get each other. I thought. Maybe this friendship WILL last.
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Thanks for reading! Please put your critique below!! - Sadie
Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip
Anne's point of view
I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.
He had kastanie hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are Du looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place in front of the Old Navy.
It takes about 5 Minuten for the whole group to arrive.
"So," Catie said, "What do y'all wanna do first?"
"Oh! I know just the place," Sammy said, taking the lead, with everyone trailing behind her.
It turns out Sammy was taking us to the Target.
Kelli starts to kind of glare at her and say, "Really?" but, I interrupt her and say,"Let's go in!" Before a fight could erupt.
I turns out that it was a really nice Target. The had a bunch of cool-looking clothes, they had some that only people on TV could pull off without being teased, plus some that only a humongous dork would wear. We each only had $30, though, so we had to spend wisely. I decide not to buy anything, since I Liebe Old Navy. So after that trip, Sammy only had $5 left. We had a good laugh over it, and headed over to Old Navy.
I sure hope we stay together, as friends. We seem to really get each other. I thought. Maybe this friendship WILL last.
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Thanks for reading! Please put your critique below!! - Sadie
Well, this is a song I wrote.
I've heard it wrong
There's been a mistake
There was a time when I won and I knew it
We will go on and on and on and on
There will be no Mehr mistakes
For the future
We will fight through it all without complaint
We are the winners, my friend
And we'll fight through it all in the end
There's no time to lose it
Cuz we are the winners
Well, I know that it's been a great day
We've done it all
We've been the best we can be and Du know it
We are the winners, my friend.
I've heard it wrong
There's been a mistake
There was a time when I won and I knew it
We will go on and on and on and on
There will be no Mehr mistakes
For the future
We will fight through it all without complaint
We are the winners, my friend
And we'll fight through it all in the end
There's no time to lose it
Cuz we are the winners
Well, I know that it's been a great day
We've done it all
We've been the best we can be and Du know it
We are the winners, my friend.
I write what i feel and try to
make them seem so-real to
you, but all Du want from me
is honesty.
as i write out the facts
Du act like Du don't really
care where my herz truly is.
Let me tell Du where it
is, it's in the honesty of my
poetry, deep inside my herz
it's the only thing that reveals
the emotions deep down inside
my soul.
as i hold onto the emotions
that creates honest Poesie
that i write, i see Du looking
at my private diaries understanding
who i want to be.
Du look at me and Du
seem to know what i'm
feeling as i'm revealing
to Du the emotions that
comes from within my
soul.
as i hold the key to this
honest Poesie that i compose
Du seem to believe every-little
detail that i have to say to you.
make them seem so-real to
you, but all Du want from me
is honesty.
as i write out the facts
Du act like Du don't really
care where my herz truly is.
Let me tell Du where it
is, it's in the honesty of my
poetry, deep inside my herz
it's the only thing that reveals
the emotions deep down inside
my soul.
as i hold onto the emotions
that creates honest Poesie
that i write, i see Du looking
at my private diaries understanding
who i want to be.
Du look at me and Du
seem to know what i'm
feeling as i'm revealing
to Du the emotions that
comes from within my
soul.
as i hold the key to this
honest Poesie that i compose
Du seem to believe every-little
detail that i have to say to you.
