Realistic Fiction
Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip
Anne's point of view
I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.
He had kastanie hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are Du looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place in front of the Old Navy.
It takes about 5 Minuten for the whole group to arrive.
"So," Catie said, "What do y'all wanna do first?"
"Oh! I know just the place," Sammy said, taking the lead, with everyone trailing behind her.
It turns out Sammy was taking us to the Target.
Kelli starts to kind of glare at her and say, "Really?" but, I interrupt her and say,"Let's go in!" Before a fight could erupt.
I turns out that it was a really nice Target. The had a bunch of cool-looking clothes, they had some that only people on TV could pull off without being teased, plus some that only a humongous dork would wear. We each only had $30, though, so we had to spend wisely. I decide not to buy anything, since I Liebe Old Navy. So after that trip, Sammy only had $5 left. We had a good laugh over it, and headed over to Old Navy.
I sure hope we stay together, as friends. We seem to really get each other. I thought. Maybe this friendship WILL last.
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Thanks for reading! Please put your critique below!! - Sadie
Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip
Anne's point of view
I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.
He had kastanie hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are Du looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place in front of the Old Navy.
It takes about 5 Minuten for the whole group to arrive.
"So," Catie said, "What do y'all wanna do first?"
"Oh! I know just the place," Sammy said, taking the lead, with everyone trailing behind her.
It turns out Sammy was taking us to the Target.
Kelli starts to kind of glare at her and say, "Really?" but, I interrupt her and say,"Let's go in!" Before a fight could erupt.
I turns out that it was a really nice Target. The had a bunch of cool-looking clothes, they had some that only people on TV could pull off without being teased, plus some that only a humongous dork would wear. We each only had $30, though, so we had to spend wisely. I decide not to buy anything, since I Liebe Old Navy. So after that trip, Sammy only had $5 left. We had a good laugh over it, and headed over to Old Navy.
I sure hope we stay together, as friends. We seem to really get each other. I thought. Maybe this friendship WILL last.
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Thanks for reading! Please put your critique below!! - Sadie
Sea around,
This is a place,
Nightmares are found.
Stinking bogs,
And tombstones black,
It is waiting,
To attack.
Enter now,
And Du will find,
Objects of,
The destroyed kind.
Bloody puddles,
Broken mirrors,
Headless dolls,
All to fuel your fears.
Around the corner,
Darkness waits,
For the Weiter victim,
And his fate.
Death and distress,
Blood and gore,
Normal things,
That we adore.
Twins in life,
Death as well,
Pale and ghostly,
We won't tell.
What had happened,
Late one night,
After she barked,
Before the bite.
Now we lay,
In watery grave,
Bodies empty,
Souls not saved.
Until the night,
We answer her call,
Haunt the living,
Until they fall.
