What do Du think of my drawing?

umn its good,you draw good...but maybe Du could use some better shading techniques then it will look even better.

9/10 tbh. Welkomen ('Welcome' in Dutch) back :)

I normally enjoy shitting all over bad art on fanpop, but this really isn't bad. The only problem that I have with it is how Du added shading on the hair but nothing else

it’s really awesome em somthing about the lips i don’t like

So, I didn`t really understand from what Du sagte - is this supposed to be realism oder Anime style, but for now I`ll assume that anime. It`s not bad. One thing that stands out a bit for me are eyebrows. I don`t know anything about this character, but males usually tend to have thicker eyebrows without as much curvature/sharp angles as females. Another thing that stands out (only for me) is the small nose. For Mehr masculine look usually nose is a bit wider at so called 'ala' area of the nose. But that`s Mehr my pet peeves about character not drawing itself. :) In Anime style it`s Mehr about character expressions and emotions, so there any proportions and too realistic looks can be forgotten.
About the drawing technique, shading is a bit weird in the hair and face insgesamt needs a lot Mehr shading. If not light crosshatching, then just a small blended shade would be nice. But Du can add it to your drawing anytime really.
But the composition is nice and base sketch also isn`t bad at all. 👍

100/10 bro!

It looks great

insgesamt it looks really nice! I wouldn't say it looks "realistic" though- it's definitely still very stylized and Du can see a lot of the Anime influence. A lot of the features are still very exaggerated- like the eyes and chin in particular- and that can make it a little difficult to tell what was done intentionally and what wasn't. It still looks really nice, though. Especially the hand.
You've got a pretty good grasp on proportion and placement so it still looks pretty solid even with the exaggeration.
I'm not a Fan of how you've approached the hair texture, though. I don't recommend drawing every single thin strand as Du have- it can look a little stringy and lose some of the form. I understand why Du would chose to do that as i's a pretty intuitive step, but I think Du would get a better result Von thinking of hair as different clumps and how they would respond to light. It would be a lot stronger if there were noticeable highlights and shadows in the hair. Other than that though it's pretty solid.

This doesn't have anything to do with the quality of this specific drawing oder anything but I cannot stress enough to Du how important it is to study the fundamentals of art and drawing. Don't skimp out on studying real-life anatomy, proportions, and value even if Du intend to keep drawing in a very stylized way. Du don't have to be a master at those things Von any means, but having a basic knowledge of the realistic figure and striving to further your understanding of it will also benefit your stylized art tremendously.
You're probably sitting there like "Yeah well duh I know that" but I've seen too many talented people fall short of their potential because they wanted to only draw Anime oder Cartoons to not say something.
Some resources I would reccommend:
Books
Andrew Loomis- Drawing the Head and Hands, Figure Drawing for All it's Worth
Jack Hamm- Drawing the Head and Figure
Burne Hogarth- Dynamic Drawing Series
John Vanderpoel - The Human Figure
Harold Speed- The Practice and Science of Drawing

Youtube

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Anyway I hope I didn't bore Du too much.
Happy drawing!