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posted by Shebird

How I got there, I don't remember. Being the only one there, I couldn't possibly find help. Nothing but the cold dead silence. Nothing but white pulsing throughout-throughout what? What could I call something that wasn't there? It wasn't nothing nor was it solid...Space. That's all it could be, Space. Just ongoing Weltraum never ending. No horizon. No vanishing point. Nothing to see except white. It was all just space.

I was seeing through my mind, yet I still felt that burning sensation. Tears just welling up behind a thin layer of skin around my eyes. I began to Bewegen foward, not walk, run,...

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An Author's Voice

posted by 1-2vampire

Every book Du read has a different style of writing. It's the way people write, the way they paint that image in your head. No voice is the same. No voice should be copied. If Du do not come up with your own style, then how will Du come up with your own, unique plot?

Du don't need to think about this "voice". When Du write, it automatically comes to you. Don't try and make a good voice, because it will come out all wrong.

It will come naturally to you, and then if it is good, then Du know Du have a natural gift. Some people have to tweak their style a little, but never a lot.

This may sound a bit confusing, but when oder if Du ever get to that stage, you'll understand.

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Hi, I really need an opinion on my writing.

posted by YugiMuto

Hey, I need honest opinion on how I write and where I need to improve, this is a part of one of the stories I've written. Thanks to anyone who can help. =)

Fallenfeather wove through a dark, leafy forest, sunlight just barely filtered through. He walked confidently through the spiralling trees, all of his sense trained to catch the deer in the clearing ahead. As the Schokolade brown wolf neared his goal, he sunk lower and stared with bright cerulean eyes at the swift-footed dear ahead of him. His muscles tensed as he prepared to leap after the small deer when suddenly a silver shape charged...

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Liebe bites Ch. 6

posted by Funnygirl77

Robert was throwing pebbles at Jasmine's window, trying to wake her up. He couldn't sleep so he thought he would wake up his Girlfriend Jasmine. Yup him and jasmin hooked up after Kisa disappeared, but that doesn't mean they gave up faith. Robert's determined to find Kisa even if he spends the rest of his life doing it. jasmin on the other hand knows that Kisa is still out their she calls it her "best friend telepathy". Both Robert and jasmin have been through some ruff times. They had their ups and Downs, but their still holding on. So is Kisa's Mom, her dad However doesn’t believe his...

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Were is the Indians Voices?

posted by tori865

bring pride to the natives!!no Mehr over see

bring pride to the natives!!no more over see

Mostly all African Americans complain about how they were miss treated.But they werent the only one who got miss treated back in those days the Indians were two.Unlike the Afrian Americans we came to their land and took over what they prased and worshiped .We broke up families and homes for the africans and the natives.The African Americans how ever, were brought here and they werent the only slaves white people were slaves two its just that we were able to get away better so ive been told . Today in 2010 we see African Americans being woreshiped but Du dont see any Indians being woreshiped...

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Still of the night ch.26

posted by TeamRosalieHale

26: Dark Horse

Jack and Rosalie were sitting outside, away from the cave, away from everything else. The moon was high and bright, full. The forest was silent. “So quiet” Rosalie said.
“Still of the night” Jack answered, leaning her closer on his body. She turned her gaze to the sky. Jack followed it, seeing the sky littered with thousands, millions of stars, and the moon like a giant eye that watched all down on earth.
“What really happened with David and John?” she asked Jack. His reaction was about what she had expected: his body turned stiff, his eyes found something above...

Crappy Poems.

posted by I_love_Mikey

Black

When Du keep jumping on a cracked stone,
Keep jumping on a thin bridge,
keep twisting the ropes,
You're bound to make the stone crumble,
destined to rip the bridge off the ropes,
and then,
and then,
you take a dive,
let go of your strife,
and end your life,
Somewhere where it ain't paradise.
It's black.

Control:
I can't believe I feel like crying,
I can't believe Du feel like dying,
I can't believe I don't know what to say,
this is definitely a bad day

For the last few months,
I've been confused,
Of who I am,
And I've Lost my friends
I've Lost myself

I'm Frozen in a picture,
Stuck in the past,
Seen, observed,...

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I don't have a Titel yet...HELP! (Pleasepleaseplease)

posted by alice_cullen_12

The little colored lights on their bodies are their chakras, BTW

Goodbye, old movie theatre. Goodbye old school. Goodbye house. Goodbye any memories I have of my parents. Goodbye, childhood, I thought sadly. I had been an illegally emancipated teenager until I was fifteen, when my Aunt petunie, petunia and Uncle Mitch whisked me away from my beautiful California to New England. I sagte the name scornfully. They were taking me to their hometown, Lynnfield, Massachusetts. They’d lived there since they were kids. Apparently, I was supposed to care about the story of how they were “high school sweethearts.” Seriously. My parents died when I was twelve, and I was...

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Dear Diary

posted by emmett

Because of Du I can’t sleep at night
Because of Du I won’t be alright
Because of Du I let myself down
Because of Du I don’t fit in my skin

C: And now I write Dear diary
But do Du even wanna know?
How come Du never write back?
I don’t think paper understands
I write Dear Diary

Today I fell in Liebe –
But he ain’t good to me
Maybe I’m the one that’s gotta change
But love’s about two people,
Who’re so in Liebe that they’re the same

C-

And now ooooohhhh I’m no supposed to be jealous
Ooooohhh I should let Du go to be free
Maybe someday I can see Du again
Every moment away hurts, I should get over me

C-

Today I fell in
My herz almost stopped
It’s so complicated keeping up with things
Everybody’s getting in my head

Maybe tomorrow… I’ll fall in love
Maybe… again

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Thanks For Not Being An OMG Fan :)

posted by HarryPLover

"I don't know Usher,I just want a girl that won't break my ear drum when she sees me."

Justin Bieber was kind of tired of his "OMGJ(Oh My Gosh Justin) FANS.Justin was really looking for someone to spend time with that wasn't overly obsessed with him.But unfortunately a lot of those girls didn't exist in the line outside this stadium.

There was about 150 girls outside ready to buy tickets for Justin's "Bieber's World" tour.Austin,Texas was Justin's first stop and he really excited about tonight but yet, he was lonely.

Valentine's Tag was coming up and Justin was still single.Don't get me wrong,Justin...

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Ghost

posted by PrinceLover1999

Where am I. I felt so alone in the darkness along the shadow of coldness. It was only me in the house, my parents where gone on a datum for a couple of hours.My sis was gone to Emmi's house. Soon I felt a cool chill down my back, than suddenly felt a cold rush past me. Could it be a ghost?
I felt, scared no one with me, so I ran out the attic, don't know how I end up there. Went to my room locked the door, I cutt the t.v. on, so I can get my mind off of what just happend. Suddleny, I heard a crash, down staris in the living room. Oh, no, there might be bugarlars in the house.With bravery,...

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Life (Short Story; Part One)

posted by twilight_23

This is something I just wrote like ten mintues ago, and I didn't Bearbeiten it very much, so sorry about that. I'm debating whether to go further with this oder not, so opinions are great. Anything Du have to say is welcome(: Also, if I made any mistakes (i.e. spelling, grammar, punctuation) please tell me so I can correct them, thanks:D

“Finally, Friday.” I thought as my alarm clock woke me up. This week’s almost over, just one Mehr day. I dragged myself out of my warm bett to turn off the loud buzzing noise generated from my alarm and got ready for the Tag like I always did. I dreaded the coming...

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"Sometimes Goodbye is a Sekunde Chance."[Ch.3]

posted by HarryPLover

"Juan Sanchez"

Have Du ever felt so bloated that Du felt like the buttons of your pants would just completely explode if Du were to even lean down?
Well that's exactly how Juaney and I felt.We sagte grace for the Essen and prayed to God that he would bless that Essen to our bodies and that's exactly what he did.Juan and I had never felt Mehr full in our lives;and maybe racing to see who could eat Mehr the fastest wasn't such a big help either.
Luckily because of Juan being a total fitness dude and him passing that on to me,Juan and I wore the same size in almost everything,except jeans but other than that,I...

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Broken: Prologue, 6 Months Back

posted by genyva

I dragged all three of my suitcases down the stairs at once and nearly killed myself in the process. I misjudged a step and went tumbling down after my fifty pound suitcases. Wow. Perfect.

After taking on the stair-obstacle course, I dragged my bags across the floor and out the front door. Great, it was raining. Well, raining was an understatement. It was raining damn rocks. Big, huge, hard rock drops. The porch was my only cover at the moment but, of course, my car was parked out in the street. With the raining rocks.

"Dee?"

Shit. Fighting with my sister, I could handle. Falling down the...

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Shoulder Lake Camp

posted by werewolflover

Shoulder Lake Camp has been closed for ten years.The camp counselors who worked there,say it's because of persistent flooding.But that's not true.The real reason it closed down,was because of the creature.The creature that lived in Shoulder Lake.I know,for I was there.I was there the first and last summer,Shoulder Lake Camp was open.
It was June 1st,1999.I was twelve years old,and my mother had signed me up to go to the new camp that had opened.Shoulder Lake Camp.I was sitting on the front porch of my house,waiting for the bus to take me to camp.I was excited.Never before had I been to camp.I...

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That week Chapter 8

posted by dragonrider

The Weiter Tag - Eric's perspective

It was a new day. A Tag not to embarrassed. A Tag to make something new. A Tag to get my device back. Athena walked up to me in the cafeteria and put Delor on the tabelle "Here. Du dropped this when Du ran out," she said
My face turned scarlet " T-Thanks Did Du turn it on?" I asked. I knew if she turned him on I would be screwed
She nodded "Yeah but it wouldn't tell us anything. It called Tom a dumbass,"
My burned because I hid in my laughter. That was funny. "Okay then bye," I snorted out
She looked at me weird "Bye. Also Eric?" she asked
"Yes?" I asked
"If...

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That week chapter 6

posted by dragonrider

That same day- at Home Eric's perspective

If I was causing stress for her I might as well just left when I could. I cared for her. I even took care of her when she took ill in the future.
I remember it so well. I was walking into my house when my dad stopped me "Son, your mother is sick. Can Du take care of her while I go to work?" he asked
I didn't have to answer I went straight into the bedroom. I saw her lying on the bed. She was pale white and her hair was all frizzy. I sat kneeled against the bett "Mother what's wrong?" I asked
She smiled weakly "Oh Eric. It's the horrible choice I made...

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Song: Painful!

posted by viju

Something I want Du to say
That Du Liebe me
Something I want Du to feel
That Du hurt me
Someday I want us to fly
When you’ve loved me
Nowdays I want Du to cry
cuz you’ve hurt me

(Chorus)
When I think about it
Those days were so beautiful
But when I think about now
They are soooooooo………..

Painful…….they made me cry
Painful……. I want pain to fly
Painful……..these days are so much
Filled with pain………..

I want this pain to runaway
I want to be happy
I want someone to take away
This pain from me

(Chorus)
When I think about it
Those days were so beautiful
But when I think about now
They are...

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the crystal night

posted by cullens-rule

The crystal night

Chapter 1 a discovery

“I’m back” I called as I walked into the dark hallway of the house I called home, “hey hun’ how Du doing?”
“I’m fine” I replied. My mum was probably doing paper work so I didn’t want to drag out the conversation. My mum, Lorinda-Ann Trinity, looks nothing like me, she has blonde shoulder length hair and small sapphire blue eyes, a little on the short side. She wears lots of rings and she normally dresses in jeans boots and a blouse. She’s one of those mums who isn’t too fussy, but is fussy enough to want to always know where you...

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i think i need help :S please look!

posted by 1-2vampire

right. ohkay. my best friend is dying. but in some way i knew it was going to happen. through my poems :S yu may b like urgh heres a fuking fake goodbye but please im not joking! HELP ME! :'(

ohkay, i wrote this poem a Tag before my frend started Schauspielen weirdly and another a Tag before she found out she had pancreas cancer.

poem number one:
Closest of strangers,
Time takes it's toll
Keep close to your loved one before they can fall.
No Mehr of the laughter
Only the clock ticks away
Ever so slowly the thread shall fray
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly their smile fades away.

poem number two:
Nearer and nearer death comes along
Through the path where it doesn't belong
Don't waste your time
Keep close and shine
Be there until their Smile is long gone.

:( im not faking, PLEASE tell me what is happening to me. :( i gtg Livane's waking up.