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posted by Funnygirl77
Where am I? What happen to me? Who are you? What have Du done to my sister and brother? These were the first Fragen that popped into my mind when I came to. The Boy who looked to be about 18 looked at me and smiled.
He took my hand, "all shall be answered in time." Is what he said, he sound older than I had thought him to be. He lead me to a room told me to sit and then close my eyes. I did as I was told, "You still haven't told me where I am, and where my sister and brother is, what happen to me, and WHO Du ARE? I sagte in a tone that sound way to irritated.
He nodded, "I am Mark Lane." That's the only answer he gave me. "Please close your eyes" I nodded "If it'll help" I said. I closed my eyes and he touched my forehead. A sharp pain hit me hard like a rock, I could fill myself slipping under, there was nothing I wanted Mehr the for him to stop touching me.
Then it was over, I was alone Mark was gone and, I wasn't in the room anymore. "Where am I" I shouted to the sky hope Mark would here me but there was no answer, I looked around unsure of what to do. Then I started to walk, no use staying in one place. I thought to my self, Where was I.
I stared to walk then run, I don't know why but I just knew I had to get out of that place and fast. I stumbled and fell, when I got up I was in a completely different place, "Where am I now?" I sagte out loud. My voice seemed to travel. "Welcome to town are Du new here?" I heard that voice before, the soft tone, the deep strong voice, and it still sound's friendly.
I turned around Ian? I thought, but how it can't be Ian died last a few months after I Bewegen to town he had cancer. It couldn't be Ian, Could it? I felt my self nodded, He smiled "well good thing Du ran into me, I been in this town my whole life."
I smiled, remembering the first Tag we met. "My name's Lynn." I sagte unable to think of anything better, "I'm Ian" we shook hands. The town looked different in fact, I don't even think this is the right town, but Ian's here. "So Lynn what brings Du here."
I Looked at Ian, where is here I thought, he smiled at me. "You look cold, do Du want my Jacket?" I held up my hand, "Im okay, I wouldn't want Du to freeze." He shrugged, "Naw I'm use to this weather." "ahh" I screamed, Ian looked at me. Then I past out, color's swirled all around me then I was back in the room with Mark.
He looked at me apologetically, "sorry I didn't me to do that." what did he do? How'd he do it? "Let's try it aging shall we?" He was about to send me back. "wait, what am I suppose to do, is there suppose to be some life lesson, am I suppose to save My family from that fire?" It was all coming back to me, my family the fire, me being the only survive.
Mark nodded, "I can't tell Du that, it would be against the rules." I looked at him, "what can Du tell me Mark?" "I'm sorry Lynn I-" I looked at him how did he know my name I didn't tell him. "Who are you?" I looked him in his eyes, and something clicked, I knew Mark, I had to. "Mark" I sagte in a much softer tone. "Do I know you?"
He bit his lip the nodded, almost like he wasn't supposed to tell me, "How do I know you?" His eyes watered "I-I can't tell Du that" I looked at, "What can Du tell me then?" His blue eyes seemed to swim, "I can tell Du very little. Du must find out on your own Du must remembered." I nodded, "I'm ready"
I closed my eyes, this time it didn't hurt, when I opened my eyes, Ian was looking down at me. "Are Du okay?" He helped me up, "I'm okay just a little tired, that's all." Ian nodded, "were do Du live?" I felt my face get hot, I looked away from Ian.
"Where's your family?" I felt the tears burn in my eyes. "Lynn, what happened to your family?" I fanily broke down and cried. "There dead, and I ran a way from my old life." Ian looked at me, "How old are you?" I looked away knowing that, he probably wouldn't like my answer, He answer for me "You look about 16 am I right?" I nodded, "Man!"
He ran a hand through his hair, "what are Du doing walking the streets alone? Don't Du know how dangerous that is?" He was yelling at me,me! I know for a fact, that he wasn't much older than me. realty slammed into me, the first time I was here I never asked Ian how old he was, I just assumed that he was a couple years older then me.
"Ian, how old are you?"
He looked at me "I'm about to be 19, how old do I look." He's lying a voice that sound like mark Told me. How do Du know I countered no answer. Mark I sagte but not aloud. Something was wrong, this was different the Ian I knew would never lie to me.
"Where are Du going to stay?" he asked me, I shrugged. "I guess i didn't think things-" He cut me off, "Hey Du never answered my question, How old do I look?" I smiled, knowing I could trust him, sort of. "You look 17" what was I doing none of this happened before, This really was different. what was I suppose to remember if everything was different?
Mark I sagte quietly if Du are listing, I need help, please. There was no answer, I was starting to think that this whole thing is a dream and that I died in the fire, but why would I dream up Mark? What am I to do.
Ian took hold of my hand, and everything went wolke in my mind. I jerked back, "What's wrong? don't Du trust me?" He gave me a small smile, that I couldn't resit, no matter how hard I try. I was starting to think that there's Mehr to Ian that meets the eye.
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posted by ZekiYuro
My Name's Jon,And This Happened To Me When I Was On Holiday In Seville,In The South of Spain.


I was having a coffee in a bar when a man came up to me.He was quite smartly dressed,and he looked very respectable.'Do Du speak English?'he asked.He definitely wasn't Spanish,but I'm not sure where he was from.'I'm very sorry to bother you,but I have a serious problem,'he continued.'I'm here on a business trip,and I've Lost my briefcase-it had my passport,my wallet,my money,my credit cards,my mobile,my address book,everthing.Could Du help me?I need to borrow 60 euros to get the train to Madrid-my...
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posted by ZekiYuro
OK,now the painting we are looking at now is Von the French painter Toulouse-Lautrec.
The painting is called At The Moulin Rouge.As Du probably know The Moulin Rouge is a nightclub in Paris.Maybe some of Du remember the film Moulin Rouge?In the 19th century,the nightclub was very famous for its beautiful dancers and singers.
Toulouse-Lautrec did a lot of paintings and posters of the Moulin Rouge.He especially loved painting the dancers.And in these paintings he sometimes included his Friends too.
In the middle of the picture there are 5 people who are sitting at a tabelle having a drink.The woman...
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posted by GreenLight24
 I'd wear that...
I'd wear that...
Author's Note: Hey everyone. I'm fascinated with villain psychology and bad guys in general...they always seem to be Mehr interesting and have better back-stories than the good guys...anyways, this is my first attempt at Schreiben a villain I created from scratch, so I'd appreciate any feedback, positive oder negative. IF U READ THE ORIGINAL BLACKTIE, THIS IS NOT IT. This is a very very very similar version. The only difference is that I've edited the beginning to make the character Mehr relatable...But fear not!, the awesomeness is unaffected Von this endeavor! Now, where was I? Oh yes, the story....
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posted by ttmrktmnrfn0830
One last dip, I thought. One last dip before we go.

My kids were packing up the stuff on the beach, and my husband smiled at me. God blessed me with a great family.

"I'm going to do one last swim before we go," I said.

"Denise, it better be quick," murmured my husband.

"It will," I replied.

My toes dug into the sand, before going into the salty water. I felt the numbing cold in my body as I jumped in. It felt refreshing and comforting.

But, then something was wrong.

I felt this throbbing headache after not even a couple of minutes. I held onto my head, pressuring it, but it felt even worse.

"Denise?!"...
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posted by PrinceLover1999
Angie hears her mom and stepdad fights. She sits there and cries..and hope it's over. Then she hears a loud gun pow!! She hurrys to the living room and see's her mom laying on the floor..with blood all over. She cries over her mom's bloody body...her mom looked at her and whisperd "help". She called the police and after she hung up. Her stepdad beat her..then rapped her. Then the police busted in. Her mom fighting for breath. Angie to weak to get up yelled "Help, please help" They came to resuce her, too. After her and her mom recoverd. The mom found a new guy. He only beated the daughter...everytime...
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posted by moolah
 This is Molly Stray
This is Molly Stray
When Molly Kisses: Info
Molly Stray
Favorite Color: Black
Animal: Black Panther
Career: Bar tender
Car: Red Convertible
Book: Harry Potter
Hates: Tyler Rock, smoothies, etc.
Loves: her brother, Jake; tea, Adie, her best friend, etc.
Doesn’t want ever: to be pregnant
Wants eventually: A hubby

Tyler Rock
Favorite Color: Black
Animal: Coyote
Career: Base Player
Car: Silver Volvo
Hates: Molly Stray, his sister, Kitty, etc.
Loves: his littler sister, Harry, soda, cigars, etc.
Doesn’t want ever: A child and a wife
Wants eventually: All the Filme in the world

Janice James
Favorite Color: Pink
Animal: Frogs
Career:...
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posted by Fangirl99
a song i wrote.



no,no,not this time. oh!


*instruments*


i aint gonna let it
happen again.No aint
gonna lets it happen!
not this time.

you.Cant tear me down.
i forgot about the tears
your not one of my biggest fears.
no,not anymore


hey,what happened,girl?
we used to be good friends.
oh,well.Guess all friendships
have to e-e-e-end.WOH!

you aint get put me down
no not this time.
you anti gonna push me
to the ground.
no,not this time.

hey,b!tch,take a look in the mirror
i see your lips moivng but all i hear
is blah,blah,blah!calling me names while
im signing la,la,la!when Du give it up.
when Du gonna learn that i dont...
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the summer night was making me sweet thru my trench coat. I was with the other coullge studnets they had made fun of my fear of demons if only they new what my life was then they to would fear the beast but i dot fear them i hate them its commoin like Hunde and Katzen demons and Engel evn half Engel will allways be enemies. we got to the hole were the suicidel children where suposed to have jumped down to kill themselves. "So jack" nathan began "is this what u were so terrified of " and his lackies all laughed under my mantel i felt the hilt of my kreuz daggers not Lesen to defend my name but...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
Tayce’s p.o.v

“Training time for Lilly” I sneered looking at the small blond. She nodded. “Let me get ready” She said. I shrugged and then turned to go, but was stopped Von Hayden. “She already trained today” he informed me, I nodded. “I know, but Rebecca wants her to have Mehr of it” I told him, he rolled his eyes. “Why is she being such a bitch?” he asked me I laughed. “It’s Rebecca, she sees her as a threat” I told him, he tensed up. The he turned to me. “You’re not being so bad” he said, pointing out that I’m usually a bitch. “She didn’t do anything...
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posted by RobPattzLover7
It was no place, it was like a palace. "This room is
covered with crystals," noticed James."I know, wait,
get that map out, see those symbols their on the floor
over there," explained Justin. "Those symbols are translated
in English on the map here," remembered James. "Ok, it says
weather your at 2 destinations at once the centre will always
bring Du hope and justice," recited Justin.

The Sekunde Justin sagte 'Hope and Justice' the bracelet
that William have him shone from the reflection, of the
crystals that glittered and flared, he then noticed the
crystal ball was in a box that had fingerprints...
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Why is foreshadowing important? I learned this lesson the hard way. In many of my first short stories—which I recommend as a medium to anyone testing the waters to see if they want to write fiction—I thought that I was being so crafty with my endings. I wrapped up the crime (or whatever) with...
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