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posted by lilacool

Little raindrops shiny,silver,
Dropping silently into the river.
A girl sitting quiet,alone,
Her smile is fading,her hope is gone.
It faded really long ago,
That sounds sad,i know.
She quickly wipes away a tear,
It's her secret so no one can hear.
She secretly cries every night,
It's her fate,so she cant fight.
She touches a raindrop and goes back inside,
She is so lost,she's losing her pride.
All she asks for is a friend,
Someone to be there and understand.
So help her to make her dream come true,
There's always something Du can do.

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lilacool aww,thanks!i'm sure u hav other talents!every1 does! *smiles*Thanks a lot,really!i'm glowing!And blushing!

Milena96 heey this is veryy awesomeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! congratssssss youre a real talent!!!!!! you should write a poem book!! i will really buy it!!!!!!!

Magy25 So cute. Loved it. When can we I read the next one??? xD

renesmee13 its good =) i like it keep up the good work!

Missadorable1 awwwwwwwwww that was so cute and sad i write poems too but yours expresses how your feeling deep inside. it was sooooooooo beautiful in other words it really was no lie amazing job.:]

Nikkiee Awww Thatss Well Good Keep Writing Peoms I Love The Way You Expressed How You Felt It Wass Amazing Could You Write Mee Onnee Lol!! x [;

lilacool oh my god thanx so much guys u r all soooooooooooooooooooooo nice! Luv guys!Feel free 2 chat with me if u want and i'll reply i promise!Hugs guys

goblinqueen24 oooooooh nikkiee had an awesome idea i loved it could you write me one. back story (if you want to write a poem about me): im a wierd little 12 year old punk girl. im funky and i have some good friends. but i also feel lke im getting used by all the peopl ethat seem so nice to me. im a young closeted bisexual and my life is full of painful choas and drama. messege me if you do it:) p.s. your really really good!

vampiregrrl999 ur an awesome poet, i can totally relate to this, it feels like me!

team-jacob-er wow everyone seems to love it. this poem goes for me ttoo its so sad but yet so expressive that poem touched my heart wow amazing =D great poem 10/10

team-jacob-er oops by mistake i pressed the sleepy icon soz

lilacool thnx! =))) i luv u peace 4ever

heheiamme this is great it has alot of meaning i know how that feels..lonely i love it :)

iceprincess7492 oh my.... that was.... wow!!! That's all i can say.... like a few others who've commented before, i too must admit that i feel the same way and i do write too, but not poems... they never come out good... this is truly one of the most heart-felt soul touching poems... keep up the gr8 work!!!

lilacool thanx so much,mates i feel..important..like i matter..thnx,seriously

serasavage Awesomehttp://images.fanpop.com/images/emoticons/smile.jpg

lilacool aww thnx

Liepe That was really good, and I mean it. I wish I could write poems like that...

lilacool =)

1-2vampire great, absolutely fantastic, expressing a feeling through words is a hard thing to do, sometimes its virtually impossible. YOu "nailed it" should I say. If ANYONE feels like they have no friends, you have to be confident, dont be shy, dont curl in on yourself, you must keep your head up high and dive a look says, yeah, you don't like me, so what? I'm me and it's all I can be, you have a problem with that? I used to feel exactly like this, but I found that I was sick of being so shy, so I just went to this one girl that was bullying me and said "You are doing my FUCKING head in! You got a problem with me? I haven't done anything to you! I'm strange, yes, but do you even KNOW me? Do you, really? I don't care if you don't like me, but keep it to youself and stop giving me a fucking hard time!" this was in front of all her mates. She didn't say anything. No one gives me a hard time any more. People know who I am now, as the crazy, random girl that likes to have fun. Not the shy freak. You have to just put your foot down and stand your ground. Confidence is the key to everything. Please take my advice.

shomill It's good. It has a lot of heart and feeling in it.

Bookaholics Nice, I like the imagery at the beginning a lot. The rhyming is a little odd, but it works. Just an idea, but you might want to vary the worlds you use a tiny bit, it gets a little repetitive.

animelove30 beautiful! IT SHOULD BE PUBLISHED!

hannah_vampire I LOVED that so much I write peoms That come from my heart but everyone doesnt get it and its all so much like me and its freaky cause to me it seems about me my friends pretent and its hard to trust and pick out who are the real friends and so much drama in live but I loved it , Little raindrops shiny,silver, Dropping silently into the river. A girl sitting quiet,alone, Her smile is fading,her hope is gone. MY smile is there but it fades and my hope is high but it does go. I sit alone and quiet wondering who i should trust and talk to but Iknow that I can do stuff because there was one true friend who Told me everything and i have to keep my head high. But that was Beautiful, awsome ur very gud..

annalia wow that was amazing. made me a little emotional there. that describes me perfectly sometimes. really beautifull.

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