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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a mantel walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When I got up to the surface my family wasn't there, I got out of the ocean and looked around. Then a man in a mantel came up to me, "Can I help you?" I asked slightly shaking a bit. Not because of the cold feeling Du feel when the air blows on Du after getting out of any body of water, but because of the fear I was feeling. He walked up closer to me, I dived into the water, and swam out to sea. Then I saw a fin, a hai fin, I screamed and swam back to shore. I was lucky I lived, I ran to my house but let out a loud scream when the man grabbed me. My family came outside and went pale, mom got the phone and called 911 but the last thing I saw and heard before the man knocked me out was, "Olivia!!!!!!!" And my parents and brothers running after me.

Narrators POV

The man came to the rough and tough city, where biker gangs, criminal activity, and the houses looked like total shit (pardon my language... but it's true) the sound of Motorräder rumbled around. But the old man soon came to a school, he walked into the school.

Jason's POV

I walked into class, "mr Johnson?" The teacher asked me, "Yeah?" I asked. "It's 4th period" she sagte angrily. "Yeah so what?" I asked and sat down, "you're loosing your education!" The teacher sagte glaring at me. "Yeah so what?" I asked again, "why were Du in so late?" The teacher asked me. "My Alarm clock didn't go off, I had to take my motorcycle to the shop, I had to get my hair done, and I had to get Mehr clothes so I can look cool" I chuckled. "That's all Mehr important than school?" The teacher asks, I nodded yes. "Who's he?" Cole asked, I turned around to see an old man in a cloak. "How did Du get in?" The teacher asked, the man walked up to me, "what do Du want?" I asked him glaring at me. "Even when he glares he's hot" Justine sighed dreamily, I flashed a smile before turning to the guy again who then knocked me out.

Narrators POV

The old man walked to a huge huge mansion where Du could hear screaming, the old man snuck through the back door.

Tatiana's POV

"I sagte I wanted a pony!!!!!!" I screamed angrily, "honey we looked for a pony" dad sagte to me. "Then why don't I have one?" I asked angrily, "the places where they sell ponies are going through a rough winter and they can't be brought to us" mom said, I let out a scream. Then a guy in a black mantel walked into the room. "Who are you?" I asked him angrily, "security!!!" Dad screamed, but he knocked me out and vanished before the security guards came.

Narrators POV

The man in the mantel came to the neighborhood where Cathy lived, the sound of loud screaming echoed through the neighborhood.

Cathy's POV

I ran after my cousin who was visiting, he had taken my bag of candy!!!! I screamed and screamed at him running and running. "Cathy stop being so loud!" Dad called, "then make Donny give me back my candy!" I called angrily. Dad came down, Donny gulped and gave me my Süßigkeiten back. "Thank you" I sagte but glared at Donny. "Now be quiet" dad said, but literally 3 Sekunden Donny took my hair brush and I was screaming and running. But then Donny and I stopped, there stood a man in a black cloak. "dad?!!!" I screamed, "no figure it out yourself!" He called. Then mom came back from work, she saw what was happening, she let out a scream. Then the man grabbed me "mom! Dad!" I cried. The last thing I heard before being knocked out was "Cathy!!!!!"

Narrators POV

The man in the mantel came to the town where Xander lived.

Xander's POV

I groaned in annoyance when My sisters let out a loud squeal from the room Weiter to mine. It's hard being the only guy in the family, I looked at a picture of my dad and I. He and I went hiking in the woods, that was the Tag before he headed into the army. Then 4 months later he was killed in while in battle, I felt some tears fall down my cheeks. He died when I was 6 and it was on my 6th birthday too, but ever since dad died it was just my mom, my sisters and me. Then there was a knock on my door, I opened it to see a man in a cloak. "Uhhh hello" I said, mom came running up quickly. Mom knows when we're in trouble. She let out a scream, the Sekunde I look at the guy I was knocked out.

Narrators POV

Now the man came to the village Lexi lives in, people looked at him suspiciously.

Lexis POV

my friends, Jane, Nevaeh, and Anna were over at the house for a sleep over. "I brought snacks" mom sagte coming in with chips and humus, fruit, pretzels, cotton candy, cookies, and crackers. "Thanks mom" I sagte smiling at her. "No problem honey" mim sagte and walked out. "So do Du still have a crush on Felix?" Jane asked me, I nodded yes, "then why don't Du talk to him?" Nevaeh asked me. "You know I'm nervous and can get shy when I even go close to him " I sighed. "We'll help Du out with that nervousness and shyness" Anna sagte smiling, "thanks" I sagte smiling. Then there was a knock on the door, thinking it was mom, I called "Come in!" But it wasn't mom It was a man in a cloak. He walked towards me, I was afraid. I scooted back, but then i was knocked out.

Narrators POV

The man in the mantel came to the Big beautiful house in the country where Cameron's dad and mom bought so they could go and preform in the country performance.

Cameron's POV

I smiled brightly as I took dance lessons from my teacher. I had finished Singen lessons so I'm doing my dance lessons. "excellent Cameron" mr Francisco sagte smiling, I smiled back. Mom and dad then came in, "now lets practice on the stage" mom sagte smiling. I gulped a big, I'm very afraid to go on stage Du know and I can't do anything about it. Mom and dad took me on a stage with no one there, they put Musik on but I was too scared to do anything. Mom and dad came on stage with me. I hugged them crying, "I can't do it!!" I sobbed. "It'll be Okay" mom sagte smiling at me, then a man in a mantel came on stage. He threw my parents away from me and knocked me out

Narrators POV

"Last house" the man in the mantel sagte as he came to a school, Asher's school.

Asher's POV

I smiled as I solved the hard math problem on the board, "you never fail to impress me Asher" mr Franchise sagte smiling. I nodded happily, but couldn't help but think about that girl at the pool. She always visits the pool, even in the winter with an indoor pool. Then the feuer alarm went off and I stint smoke. Everyone walked out, but before I got to the door I was knocked out Von some guy in a cloak
posted by Isabella_17
Is It True Du Lie?
Is It True Du Hate Me?
Is It True Du Want Him?
Is It True You're My Best Friend?
Is It True Du Enjoy Hurting Me?
Is It True Du Like Me Crying?
Is It True Du Talk Behind My Back?
Is It True Du Tell People Our Bussiness?
Is It True I Hurt You?
Is It True Du Back Stabbed Me?
Is It True Du Let Me Believe The Lies?
Is It True Du Let Me Call Du My True Bestfriend When Du Weren't?
Is It True.....?

This is A Poem Hope Yuh Enjoy It Btw Tell Me What Yuh Think And This Is Just About Me Gettin Hurt After Being Stupid Enough To Believe Her Lies She Wasnt A True Bestfriend
posted by AuthorForPooh
Her eyes were feuer red,
as if they were
lit from anger.

I dont understand
why Du are
mad at me.

Why Du shoot
those harsh words
at me.

Aimed like bullets,
piercing my soul.
And It cant heal.

I never can dodge them.
The words hit me,
and I fall back.

My Friends ask me:
"What's wrong?"
"Can I help?"

But they cant help.
Because I dont understand,
why Du are mad.

Why do Du have to do
what Du do to me?
Why does it give Du
joy to harm me?
Why?
Why are people bullies?
Why dont my Friends take action?
Why cant Du tell me WHY?
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She hastily pressed any buttons she could until she'd finally keyed in the number...
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"Echo! I'm so glad to see you!"

"Ahem," a voice said. Echo smiled and rolled her eyes, and took a step back. Asher smiled as he hugged me, and kissed my cheek. I laid my head on his chest.

"I missed Du too," I told him. He chuckled.

"Come on!" Echo sagte impatiently. "Let's go do something! Anything! I just don't want to deal with this mushy-teen-love crap." Asher and I rolled our eyes, but smiled. I told Grandma we were going to hang out.

"See you...
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Streetlamps, houses, gates, remotes, books, CDs and televisions. Brothers. Pairs. Each has a twin. In this chaotic place of materials the world has come to be, everything has a brother. But brothers are family. And family is connected somehow; if not Von blood, then Von what?

Energy.

Look hard. At everything that has a brother. A line of energy casts a connection between the two. The energy, with its harsh glares and cold looks creates the strongest and most complex bonds. Strong because of their brotherhood. Complex because of its invisibility. For there is power in invisibility. Cold, cruel power. The power to be a persecutor with no chance of being a victim. The power to twist and squeeze but not feel the wrenching pain of your twists.

Now, Du ask, what is left? Cruel, invisible energy. For a cruel, invisible world.







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This is a piece I wrote for an essay contest about a Jahr ago. It's extremely short because they wanted us to keep it around 500 words, but I thought I would post it anyway. I Liebe comments! Hearing what other people have to say about my stories is probably my Favorit part of writing, so don't be shy, tell me what Du think(: Also, if I made any mistkes (i.e. spelling, grammar, punctuation) please let me know so I can fix them, thanks:D


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please tell me what Du think.



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posted by ashesandwine
Ok... so this is my first time, so Kommentar but don't be bad;)Thanks Emmett4ever, Patrisha727, Just_bella, and everyone else for supporting me and liking my story.... This one is for you:D



How could I leave him? How could he leave me? We always knew that we were meant to be together, our Liebe was so strong, so beautiful, so pure.
I couldn't stand to think that we had to be apart, he was everything to me. I live for him just like he lives for me...





I heard a sound behind me and I turned around slowly... I just stopped breathing, he was so beautiful and I was so lucky that he wanted me. He must...
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“Do Du still want to know my secret?” he asked in a soothing tone. It didn’t help that his voice so soft that it made it harder to stay awake. “Sure.” I sagte moving closer to him.
“I’ve none Du before Du were born.” He paused a second. Probably to make sure I wasn’t going to freak out. “I was Friends with your mother before Du were even born before your mother met your father. I met her...
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"Starr Makenzie!" My math teacher Mr. Howards yells at me "Pay attention!"
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