Schreiben Article: I Raised Myself Not To Cry**sniffle**

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posted by VampirePrinsess

Mommy... Johnny brought a gun to school,
He told his Friends that it was cool,
And when he pulled the trigger back,
It shot with a great crack.
Mommy, I was a good girl, I did what I was told,
I went to school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold!
But Mommy, when I went school that day,
I never sagte good-bye,
I'm sorry Mommy, I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry. When Johnny shot
the gun, He hit me and another,
And all because Johnny, Got the gun from his older brother.
Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I Liebe him very much,
And please tell Chris; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crush.
And tell my little sister; That she is the only one now,
And tell my dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now, And
tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best; Mommy, I'm not
the first, I'm no better than the rest.
Mommy, tell my teachers; I won't Zeigen up for class,
And never to forget this, And please don't let this pass.
Mommy, why'd it have to be me? No one deserves this,
Mommy, warn the others, Mommy I left without a kiss.
And Mommy tell the doctors; I know they really did try,
I think I even saw a doctor, Trying not to cry.
Mommy, I'm slowly dying, With a bullet in my chest,
But Mommy please remember, I'm in heaven with the rest. Mommy I ran as
fast as I could,
When I heard that crack, Mommy, listen to me if Du would,
I wanted to go to college; I wanted to try things that were new,
I guess I'm not going with Daddy, On that trip to the new zoo.
I wanted to get married, I wanted to have a kid,
I wanted to be an actress, Mommy, I wanted to live.
But Mommy I must go now, The time is getting late,
Mommy, tell my Chris, I'm sorry but I had to Abbrechen the date.
I Liebe Du Mommy, I always have, I know; Du know it's true, And Mommy all
I wanted to say is,"Mommy, I Liebe you."

***In Memory of The Columbine Students Who Were Lost***
Please if Du would,
Pass this around,
I'd be happy if Du could,
Don't smash this on the ground.
If Du pass this on,
Maybe people will cry,
Just keep this in your heart,
For the people who didn't get to say "Good-bye."
Now Du have 2 choices,
1) Repost and Zeigen people Du care
2) Ignore it and Du have just proven Du are a heartless mole

Problematic129, Nice-Guy and 29 others like this

Dearheart I kinda wish there was a third option. When I read this a while back, I admit it was sad and touching (despite the fact that the poetry wasn't the greatest, lol), but it's been passed around SO many times and become so, [i]so[/i] cliche that...well, I guess I'm a "heartless mole" now. :-/ Go ahead and bash me if you want. *never really appreciated chain-email-guilt-trips to begin with...* EDIT: Woah. Uses the word "Mommy" way too much, lol. 24 times! Sheesh! "Mommy blah blah blah mommy blah blah blah mommy mommy MOMMY blah blah blah..." Wow, I feel really mean now... *laughs nervously*

Sweet_Pants It is sad, but doesnt change my opinion on it. I always thought there was another way, as all.

VampirePrinsess Well if its ur option than its ur opinio so i cant blame u........

BrittanyAM It was beautful but sad it made me cry and no i cant pass it on cuz i'm too shy i would if i wasn't shy and no that dosen't make me a (heartless mule) cuz i wouldn't pass it on but it will all ways been in my heart and stay there (forever)!!!!!!

Cammie This has really saddened me, both the poem and the smart-arse heartless comments from some. Cliche? That's a really friggin interesting word to describe innocent people being slaughtered by wackos. Thank you for posting this.

Twilightzook I agree with BrittanyAM.

Cinders This is a chain letter. Touching as it may or may not be, it is not original work. Soapboxes are meant for original poetry and writing, not for chain letters. If you want to post this in the forums of a more appropriate spot, than I fully support that, but I don't think it belongs here if it isn't original work. I'm sorry to be blunt, but I'm getting really tired of seeing so many people posting chain letters and unoriginal work as soapboxes. MajorDork got a lickin' for doing that, and at the time I supported it, but if you only enforce a law sometimes, it's not fair to the people who suffer the consequences if others can get away with it.

SkyHedgehog that was beautiful

Heya WOW

inexplicable ... so sad...

Jakeluvr101 Whoa that wa so amazing i luvd it

twibabe2 it was woundful love it

HecateA its nice, but I think some of the beauty of the work gets taken out of it when you say things like "tell my daad I wont go to the zoo", "tell Chris I had to cancel the date" and "tell my teacher I won't be going to class today".

dramarama That was beautiful...made me cry. People today have a very odd interpretation of the word cliche. It may be a recycled theme, but feelings can never be cliche. btw people have used the word cliche so much lately that it in itself has become 'cliche'.

EmzLovesCheryl This is beautiful, it made me want to cry.

ladycountry omg it's so sad.i like it

PoweredKaoru that was sad, and since it says mommy so much it sounds like a little kid(around 5-9) is saying it, which makes it even more sad.

luna-lefright wow how sad!!!!!

krissynaytowhow wow thats thesadest thing i ever heard well not as sad as my grampas funeral

hotlia Awww

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Extract

posted by ellie_bellie135

This is a short extract from the story I'm Schreiben (Symbus). If Du could please give me some feeeback on my style of Schreiben and possibly some things I could improve it would be a big help. Thank you. :D

‘This is Princess Alyssia Renesme of the feuer Kingdom.’ He paused pointedly. ‘I’ll sell her to Du for 300 Gold pieces, and I think we both know that’s generous.’
‘You bastard!’ Alyss screeched.
‘Do Du think I’m a fool? There’s no way in hell that’s her. But I’ll give Du 50 silver pieces for her…We’ll have some fun anyway, wont we, love?’ He winked and chuckled....

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Still of the night ch.16

posted by TeamRosalieHale

16: Memories

As fast as master had made up it’s mind to wait until they were mortal again, it decided to send IT out to get her again. IT was not pleased with this decision, though IT did not let IT’s emotions show. Although IT was not fully healed, Dr. kran sagte it would be safe, sicher for IT to attempt another mission.
At the same time IT was preparing to leave again, Alice had safely reached the Denali clan and the carriage trooped on without Michael though Tristan, Jack, and David didn’t seem to care. Rosalie kept to herself though Jack stayed close.
Shortly before they crossed the border...

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A Wednesday in May

posted by inexplicable

It was a Wednesday in May.
All of us had assembled today once again to study for the math testpaper on the Weiter day. Our math teacher had funnily enough had nothing against
it to come to school on her free Tag off toward twelve o'clock. All of us just sat at our places and listened to Mrs Dörte as she explained the substance to the written test. Only I could not. I sat in the last row at my usual sitz and looked from the window on the falling raindrops which pounded against the window. I thought back to at that time. It had been a Jahr now. Until now the Minute exact. It had been on May 26th...

ONE DIRECTION ♥

posted by mrszaynmalik13

Don't Du Directioners Think It's Just So Annoying when Du are trying to convince a friend that 1D are the best boy band that ever lived and they just laugh in your face?

Hi, My Name Is Isabella, I'm Fourteen and i am in Liebe with 1D! However, I didn't always Liebe them...i actually hated them at the beginning. When they were in x factor, i couldn't stand them. I thought that they were just a waste of Weltraum and that they were just completely useless. I was sooo happy when they came 3rd and not 1st. A few months later, Amy, My Best friend, asked me if i liked one direction. "No, They are the...

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Who Will Du Be

posted by para-scence

I do not own this. I did not write it, and I do not know the author. I just really like this and wanted to share it.

Who will Du be
when faced with the end;
the end of a kingdom,
the end of good men.

Will Du run?
Will Du hide?
oder will Du hunt down evil
with a venomous pride?

Rise to the ashes,
rise to the winter sky,
rise to the calling,
make heard the battle cry.

Let it scream from the mountains
From the forest to the chapel.
Because death is a hungry mouth
and Du are the apple.

So who will Du be
when faced with the end?
When the vultures are circling
and the shadows descend.

Will Du cower,
oder will Du fight?
Is your herz made of glass?
oder a pure snow white?

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For That Special Someone...

posted by hikaru13

tell me why i miss you
why did i have feelings for you?
i wish i could answer these Fragen on my own,
but i cant.
honestly, they only thing that i want right now is you.
i dont know why i still miss you,
i dont understand why i really want another chance
what i really dont get is why Du wont let me Zeigen Du that ive changed
back then i didnt know any better
after going on intercession, ive grown alot
in all honesty, yesterday really made me think about things
it opened my eyes, and changed the way i felt.
i didn't really know you,
i wanted to get away,
now, i realize i was wrong, and im sorry.
i hate that we dont talk anymore
i wish we still do.
i hope Du read this,
and forgive me, so we can start over again.

Hi, my name is Hikaru.
What's yours :)

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global warming

posted by MocingJay

I intend to bring up a term that I am sure that Du have all already herd of. Global warming. It is slowly, but surely killing us all! We need to unite as a team to stop global warming and save the world. Global warming is heating up the earth because of some people's bad choices, should we suffer because of that? NO! Global warming is killing inoccent Tiere and people, we could save them. Global warming is caused Von pollution and over usage of electrisity. Start today. Turn off lights when Du leave the room, don't leave anything on that doesn't need to be on. Start helping today. Save the world Mitmachen me. Be happy. Help me create a better place for everyone.

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Schreiben

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Schreiben Zitate

posted by IloveMyLord

Schreiben is the best way to talk without being interrupted.
Jules Renard
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.
Cyril Connolly
Writing is not a genteel profession. It's quite nasty and tough and kind of dirty.
Rosemary Mahoney
Writing makes no noise, except groans, and it can be done everywhere, and it is done alone.
Ursula K. LeGuin
You may be able to take a break from writing, but Du won't be able to take a break from being a writer.
Stephen Leigh
For me, Schreiben is exploration; and most of the time, I'm surprised where the journey takes...

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weird pencils

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A life worth living

posted by TeanRose424

I was sitting on my bed; my legs were in my chest, my arms wrapped around them. There was a thunderstorm tonight; i've always loved thunderstorms. There was a flash of lightning and my room lite up around me. I smiled; the thunder was next. It was a huge clapp of thunder. Thunder was always my Favorit part of thunder storms because it was louder than life. There was another flash of lightning; i saw a dark figure outside my window lite up Von the lightning.

I was scared. I didnt dare move. I sat without movement; maybe it would go away. But he didnt go away. He tapped on the window; i saw...

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The inspiration for Masked Liebe Book Two: The Class Of Gardening And Liebe

posted by xSoulOfFury

I NEED inspiration for this book. I cant say why, because it will ruin the last book but the school has been rebuilt,and theres a new gardening class, and Haru-Kun, Kariko-Kun, and Shimura-Chan are falling into love, could Kariko finaly fall for Haru, oder could it be Haikuga-Kun? Haru could have his herz torn into pieces, oder turned into gold. And Shimura, being the only lesbian in the school could have problems with Liebe too. Karuga-Chan (a new character introduced as a Japenese girl found lying on the strand after a violent storm) changes all of that. Life when thrive this Jahr in Dojenskei Koukou (Dojenskei High School). All these Fragen and Mehr will be answered in the garden of Hinjou, the Garden Classroom. Be waiting, Both the first chapter of the first and Sekunde book are being worked on. (PLEASE give me good names for the third and fourht book, and the main name for the Sekunde series, such as Burning Passion Book One: The Flame. (oo, I might use that) Byes!)