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posted by Lore_Master
These side affects were takeing a toll on the hero gradually wearing him down, the doctor took the hero in as his own careing for him and makeing sure he was brought up well, "Two year's have passed since that night." the hero thought to himself as he got up out of bett to start what seemed like a normal summer Tag "Boy where are Du it's time to start work!" excalimed the old man as he knocked on his door "Eh... I hate mornings." sagte the hero as he got up out of bett getting dressed to start another day. With the sun bareing down on them it seemed as if hell had found it's way to Siege "Are we almost done?" asked the hero in anoyence as he he levaraged himself on his shovel "Haha already tired boy?" laughed the old man still shoveling dirt, this was the hero's first Tag at work he was excited but little did he know it was digging graves in the blistering heat, the old man was always fond of the grave yard being he use to be a preist before he settled down, while the hero was shoveling he noticed an amulet sparkleing in the sun light underneath an old rotting baum "Hmm...? what's this?" he picked the amulet up looking it over, from what he could tell it seemed old with scratch marks on it and was all scuffed up, he stuffed it in his pocket for later. Tag turned to night it seemed they had been digging graves for eternity, walking back Home from a long day's work the passed Von his old house, "Hmm... what happened there?" asked the hero stopping for a moment "Oh that used to be some necromancer's Home some people say he died in the burning so no need to worry." replied the old man continueing to his house "Oh...." the hero couldn't help but wonder who the necromancer was "Why do I get this feeling as if I have been here before?" he thought to himself noticing the old man was half way down the road "Hey, wait up!" exclaimed the hero running after the old man. Opening the door to their Home they noticed a letter on the tabelle "Hmm? what's this?" the old man opened the note Lesen but is shocked "The....they are going to take my house away from me!" the old man started clutching his chest gasping for air "Doctor!" the hero cought the doctor before he fell to the floor "Doctor are Du okay?" asked the hero as he looked at him seeing he had just had a herz attack, the hero helped the old man to the bett sitting Von his bett side all night hopeing he was going to live. Worried if the old man was going to make it through the hero felt lost, the old man took him in and showed him what it was like to have a normal life for once being a father figure to him, he clutched his fist "I....I won't let Du die me!" exclaimed the hero thrusting his fist into the wall, the noise could be heard from a block away, the women who found the hero heard the commotion hurrying to the house worried, "Hello is is everyone okay?" asked the girl knocking on the door, the hero answered it with a depressed look on his face with tear's running done his beat red cheeks "He..." the hero stutered slightly trying to get the word's out "Who, what happened? asked the girl as she grabbed hold of the hero shakeing him "He....he didn't make it.." replied the hero as he fell to his knee's stareing at the floor as his tear's fell, "Who didn't make it?" she asked as she made her way around the house wondering where the old man was, she finally found him in bett as a cold breeze blew through her hair from the open window, she stood Von his bett side with shivers danceing down her spine "No.... it can't be.." she sagte soon as tear's rushed down her cheek as well, the hero entered the room and stood beside her "I.... couldn't do anything.." he sagte clutching his fist once again. Looking at the hero tear's flowing like river she grabbed hold of him, pulling him closer as she burried herself in his chest, he wrapped his arm's around her "Heh come on now don't cry one of us has to be strong here." sagte the hero as he looked at her beat red face, "... I know.... but he always took care of me." she replied stareing back at him. They headed to the küche sitting down at the table, the hero began Lesen the note "Dear Esher, We have reason's to suspect Du are harboring a demon with-in you're house hold, we the town church commity are comeing to claim you're house to further investigate." the hero fell silent as his herz began beating faster "That impossible there is no demon here... how could they even think that!" she exclaimed looking over at the hero.
Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if Du want to convey your thoughts accurately. Du also want your Schreiben to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is Mehr annoying than Lesen a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of Schreiben sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
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Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

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Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...
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posted by cutiegirl01
(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...
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posted by NormalcyIsDead
Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap


Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock


One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat


Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As Du bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap
posted by DxCFan123
Third Person POV
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Sadao walked up to God and asked him if he was eligible to be in Heaven. God just simply nodded his head. Sadao walked through the large golden gates and found himself walking through his town he lived in when he was alive. He found his way to his house, and swung open the door. Everything was how it was before. He started crying, remembering the memories he had with Kat here. He heard crying coming from his room, so he opened the door and saw a blonde girl curled up in the corner of his room, sobbing.

"K-K-Kat?" he managed to stutter out. The blonde looked...
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posted by dragonwriter
As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes vorwärts-, nach vorn the mind and body of an individual changes for either good oder bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years Vor Von a wise old man that fortold my future. He sagte "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's Lost Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him Mehr shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a safe, sicher distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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In this series of guides, I'll be Wird angezeigt Du the best techniques for Schreiben your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what Du may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, Du have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before Du decide on a plot, Du should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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posted by PhoenixRoyale
This is another poem that I have written. It was inspired Von some Kommentare about stuffed animals/plushies on Youtube being people's friends. Enjoy.
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The Stuffed Animal.
To some, they are stupid.
They are useless.
They are disgusting little balls of fluff.

Those people think that it's necessary
to pick on the innocence of others
for having a collection of their own.
They poke fun, they tease, they even insult.

They target that person's age.
Sometimes even their gender.
They think they need to grow up.
They think these fluffy plushies are meant for babies.

But to those innocent people,
the ones who are quite...
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posted by shenelopefan
La parte prohibida del parque

"La depresión es la que guía, la alegría es la que llega"

En la ciudad dónde yo vivía de niña, había un parque en dónde siempre pasaba las tardes con mis amigos. Éramos un grupito de niñas y niños que nos juntábamos a jugar en ronda, cantábamos canciones que no tenían sentido (casi nuestro propio idioma, de hecho) y recorríamos todo el parque jugando a las escondidillas.

Bueno, no todo el parque porque había una a la que los adultos no les gustaba que vayamos. Era un sector tan lleno de árboles que, desde afuera parecía una selva en medio de un parque...
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The room is silent, as always. Nothing can be heard, aside from the soft rasp of pencil on paper. Words take form, joining various thoughts into one whole. On the outside, nothing is different from the average writer. To find what sets me apart, we must look deeper than the surface.
Inside my mind, Bilder and ideas race about, sometimes colliding, sometimes not. This whirlwind is composed of everything I know, read, seen, heard, oder thought of. It is here that my greatest works begin to form.
To Zeigen how thw whiirlwind works, let us have an example. During practice for spring track, I noticed...
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If Du mates like it, comment, I'll make Mehr if anyone notices it =3

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''Oi, Du guys! What are Du doin'?!'' screamed a brown haired boy from the street.
''Mind your own business and go back under your momma's skirt, oder you'll get some too!'' replied the tallest boy on playground, probably the leader of the rest 4 boys.
5 of them were teasing one small boy, taking away from him candies and ruining his game on playground. The brown haired boy frowned with his black eyes and started walking towards them.
''You scum really have guts! 5 tall Hunde on 1 small...
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posted by dragonsmemory
The Eden Chronicles is the Fantasy series I am currently working on. As the series is in progress, I decided to add a club here, allowing you, Reader, to tell me your thoughts.
In Schreiben the series, I decided to document the entire history of Eden. I called this place Eden because it is where the spirits of dead Tiere and plants are taken. No humanspirit has ever been pure enough to come here. Eden is a true paradise.
The first book, A Little Bit Mehr Than Love, takes place toward the end of Eden's history. Later in the series, I hope to explain the past. Once I get caught up, I will then...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 3: Here It Goes Again.
Roxana woke up one night to hear a loud howl outside her window, she slided herself out of bett with her covers wrapped around her, she walked toward the window and saw a somewhat a large white wolf outside, watching her then it turned its head to hear other Wölfe howling, the white wolf runs off to follow the howl, Roxana felt like she knew that wolf for a long time, Roxana walked back to her bett and lies down, but she couldn't sleep, she kept tossing and turning but she couldn't sleep, she sat up, grab her wallet and pull out a Foto of a beautiful, pale-skinned,...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 1: Don't Change Me.
A young and beautiful succubus named Roxana opened her green eyes as she sees the sun flooded her dark room with lights from her windows, she sat up in her twin bed, the mattress was tan and her covers were Schokolade brown color, she pulled herself out of the bett and throws on her black tank top, then she slipped on her jeans on her long and beautiful legs, Roxana then walked in her bathroom and brushed her long red hair slowly as she stares at herself in the mirrior, she put her brush on the sink and walked outside, as she walks, she turns around as she feels like...
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We were builders. We were builders, fighters, scholars, but Mehr importantly, friends. When the Government took all our rights away, our food, money, our culture, we allied ourselves against it. But they had a machine. A machine that could sail the seas and air. It was called, The Oppresive. The Oppresive forced us underground, making us creatures of the very soil they walk on. But it is time for our revolution. We have a great machine, bigger than the Oppresive, and stronger than it. It will trample them like a boy tramples grass. No resistance at all, we are sure of it. We are ready. We have...
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posted by DarrenGruch
Ever since my family died down to be just me.... I`ve been alone since they died in a car accident. I got out fine (only with cuts and a migrane), but they died. I now live with my grandpa... but he doesn't get me..... I cut my self, dresss diffrently, and never really talk.

4 days after the funeral for my family.... I became Emo. But the Tag my Family died, something changed within me..... something good went rotten.
My Grandpa see's it, but ignores my pain and anger... only if that drunk driver that hit us was sober and never... spun out of control. Some Tag I hope his herz gives out and he dies in jail.

Does any one feel the same?
posted by noahnstar1616
"Are okay, V?" Francine was checking me for bruises.

"I'm fine."

"We're so telling the principal." Zoey grabbed my arm.

"No, it's okay. She didn't hurt me." I rubbed my arm where Mercury dug her nails in. She didn't leave permanent marks.

"What happened?" They both waited for my response.

I told them how Mercury knew that I felt something when Cameron was visiting me in the hospital. How she knew I was trying to get him back. How I saw her eyes glowing red, like a sea witch's eyes when angry.

"You know what this means, right?" Francine and I waited for Zoey's answer. "That Mercury is the sea witch...
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Jed was a part of the Rebellion against the Syndicate of Alien Beings (S.A.B.). oder like most enslaved races call them, the Monsters. In 2067, S.A.B arrived on Earth in Suchen of fuel sources for their machines, not expecting to find a whole planet that has been living for centuries unconquered. Caught unexpected, the S.A.B. slowly amassed their forces, while countries all across world united. North Korea, Russia, China, all those countries that were on the opposing sides during all the wars, united alongside all the other countries. With the whole world united, the U.W.O. (United World Order)formed...
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posted by DxCFan123
"Oh, Hey Sam!" I sagte as I found her in the hall while going to lunch. "How are you? Du seem upset. Something wrong?" I said. The edges of my rock floated up as I walked. Marie's jewelery jingled along my neck, ears, wrists and fingers. It really hurt to get my ears pierced, but the earrings are so beautiful!

"Nothing's wrong" she murmured and pulled her arms closer to her chest. She looked away from me, at the floor. "Ah, come on! Something's gotta be wrong! Trust me! I know! One time, my cousin, Valeria, accidently fell off her carriage and twisted her ankle. But, still, she told us she...
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posted by noahnstar1616
My herz rate increased, causing my herz monitor to start beeping erratically. Not at the sight of Cameron, but at the sight of Mercury.

Cameron must've noticed because he ran up to me and said, "Vanessa, calm down."

I kept my eyes on Mercury. "What's she doing here?"

"You should be greatful that I came to see you", Mercury said.

"Mercury..." Cameron turned to face me. "She drove me here."

"After he hit you, the police too his car away", Mercury said, grabbing my Fernsehen vision remote and changing the channel.

"Hey!"

"Don't worry about the television, Vanessa." Cameron sat down on the couch chair...
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