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posted by Elizabeth90luv
I, Stella Bonasera, criminologist from New York’s crime lab have to inform Du that due to a severe medical problem I won’t be able to present on today’s court and testify against Antonio Vasquez, the primary suspect for Anne Blaire’s murder. Responsible for my absence is Mr. Vasquez, who shot me with a machine gun right outside the back entrance of the crime lab. The video of the security cameras can Bestätigen it.

As a matter of fact, I want to present through this letter all the evidence that I have collected with the help of my experienced team. I swear to the bible that I will tell the truth, the whole truth and nothing but truth. For further information, the other crime investigators who are present on this court can answer all your questions.

On June’s 16th, a left arm was found in a rubbish bin on the east side of Central Park. At first place, the victim’s DNA didn’t have any hits in CODIS (Combined DNA Index System) and its fingerprints weren’t in IAFIS (Integrated Automated Fingerprint Identification System), so we weren’t able to identify the victim. The only thing that we were able to learn out of this arm was that it belonged to a white female. The other hand was found in a recycling bin in Chelsea University. Finally, after searching the whole building, the rest of the body was found in a cupboard inside the university’s library. The victim was identified immediately after finding its ID card in one of its pockets. The official cause of death according to the lab’s forensic surgeon was asphyxiation due to strangulation. The two arms were cut after the death of the young lady with a special chain saw. The defensive wounds and the bruises on the victim’s arms were post mortal too. Also, traces of saw dust were found on our crime scene and drops of blue paint were found on the vic’s clothing. However, any of our evidence indicated that the cupboard was the primary crime scene. In addition, some drops of paint were found in all the way from the library’s entrance to the cupboard. Also, the door’s lock was broken and all those evidence showed that the body was transferred to the library. After processing the evidence found, the team realized that only the “MNYL Furniture factory” was using the specific chain saw, paint and saw dust.

In the factory, everything was normal except for the president’s office, where drops of the victim’s blood were found, as well as the chain saw, perfectly cleaned but positive for blood. The president had a strong alibi, but on the chain saw, we found a fingerprint of our suspect, Antonio Vasquez. The security cameras can Bestätigen the fact that he was on the factory on 02:30, near the time of death. The security camera inside the president’s office confirms that our suspect met the vic but it was destroyed Von Mr. Vasquez, just before the victim was killed. The suspect was an employee in this factory, so he knew how to use this chain saw and as the family of the vic said, he was recently dating with the victim. The fingers of our suspect were a perfect match with the bruises on Anne’s neck. The dead body was transferred to the bibliothek with a red truck which belonged to the suspect, that was found positive for blood. However, we couldn’t find out how the dead body was transferred to the cupboard without leaving any blood on the corridors of the library. One of the arms was found in the garbage bin and the other one in the Central Park, just because the killer wanted to trick the police. “Without a body there is no crime, so no punishment” sagte the suspect. Here in New York’s crime lab we take this as a confession.

I hope that my testimony will be helpful for the dispensation of justice. The Videos from all the security cameras and all the evidence will be gegeben to the court Von other crime scene investigators, who can Bestätigen what I have just sagte and of course they can answer to your questions.


Yours faithfully
Stella Bonasera
CSI Level 3
CSI Assistance Supervisor
What It Really Means To Write For Money - Andy Guerdat via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by ZekiYuro
My Name's Jon,And This Happened To Me When I Was On Holiday In Seville,In The South of Spain.


I was having a coffee in a bar when a man came up to me.He was quite smartly dressed,and he looked very respectable.'Do Du speak English?'he asked.He definitely wasn't Spanish,but I'm not sure where he was from.'I'm very sorry to bother you,but I have a serious problem,'he continued.'I'm here on a business trip,and I've Lost my briefcase-it had my passport,my wallet,my money,my credit cards,my mobile,my address book,everthing.Could Du help me?I need to borrow 60 euros to get the train to Madrid-my...
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posted by DietCokeGirl
This is written about the perfect silence only found in the dead of night, and the feelings it inspires.
The Titel comes from the Beschreibung a friend of mine gave when we were stuck in the middle of nowhere at midnight and I found it sort of beautiful.
Enjoy (I hope) :)

Weighted air and winking stars,
darkness draped, tension wrought.
This night, this hour, is ours.
Silence chimes unspoken thoughts
that choke my mouth.
Silver moonbeams in glittering outline
surround you, and in our youth
this night, this hour, we intertwine.




I'd Liebe to hear what Du like oder hate.
Thanks for reading.

DietCokeGirl
posted by ZekiYuro
OK,now the painting we are looking at now is Von the French painter Toulouse-Lautrec.
The painting is called At The Moulin Rouge.As Du probably know The Moulin Rouge is a nightclub in Paris.Maybe some of Du remember the film Moulin Rouge?In the 19th century,the nightclub was very famous for its beautiful dancers and singers.
Toulouse-Lautrec did a lot of paintings and posters of the Moulin Rouge.He especially loved painting the dancers.And in these paintings he sometimes included his Friends too.
In the middle of the picture there are 5 people who are sitting at a tabelle having a drink.The woman...
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Why Script Testing Is Essential For Screenwriters Von Corey Mandell via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by GreenLight24
 I'd wear that...
I'd wear that...
Author's Note: Hey everyone. I'm fascinated with villain psychology and bad guys in general...they always seem to be Mehr interesting and have better back-stories than the good guys...anyways, this is my first attempt at Schreiben a villain I created from scratch, so I'd appreciate any feedback, positive oder negative. IF U READ THE ORIGINAL BLACKTIE, THIS IS NOT IT. This is a very very very similar version. The only difference is that I've edited the beginning to make the character Mehr relatable...But fear not!, the awesomeness is unaffected Von this endeavor! Now, where was I? Oh yes, the story....
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posted by ttmrktmnrfn0830
One last dip, I thought. One last dip before we go.

My kids were packing up the stuff on the beach, and my husband smiled at me. God blessed me with a great family.

"I'm going to do one last swim before we go," I said.

"Denise, it better be quick," murmured my husband.

"It will," I replied.

My toes dug into the sand, before going into the salty water. I felt the numbing cold in my body as I jumped in. It felt refreshing and comforting.

But, then something was wrong.

I felt this throbbing headache after not even a couple of minutes. I held onto my head, pressuring it, but it felt even worse.

"Denise?!"...
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posted by PrinceLover1999
Angie hears her mom and stepdad fights. She sits there and cries..and hope it's over. Then she hears a loud gun pow!! She hurrys to the living room and see's her mom laying on the floor..with blood all over. She cries over her mom's bloody body...her mom looked at her and whisperd "help". She called the police and after she hung up. Her stepdad beat her..then rapped her. Then the police busted in. Her mom fighting for breath. Angie to weak to get up yelled "Help, please help" They came to resuce her, too. After her and her mom recoverd. The mom found a new guy. He only beated the daughter...everytime...
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posted by moolah
 This is Molly Stray
This is Molly Stray
When Molly Kisses: Info
Molly Stray
Favorite Color: Black
Animal: Black Panther
Career: Bar tender
Car: Red Convertible
Book: Harry Potter
Hates: Tyler Rock, smoothies, etc.
Loves: her brother, Jake; tea, Adie, her best friend, etc.
Doesn’t want ever: to be pregnant
Wants eventually: A hubby

Tyler Rock
Favorite Color: Black
Animal: Coyote
Career: Base Player
Car: Silver Volvo
Hates: Molly Stray, his sister, Kitty, etc.
Loves: his littler sister, Harry, soda, cigars, etc.
Doesn’t want ever: A child and a wife
Wants eventually: All the Filme in the world

Janice James
Favorite Color: Pink
Animal: Frogs
Career:...
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posted by Fangirl99
a song i wrote.



no,no,not this time. oh!


*instruments*


i aint gonna let it
happen again.No aint
gonna lets it happen!
not this time.

you.Cant tear me down.
i forgot about the tears
your not one of my biggest fears.
no,not anymore


hey,what happened,girl?
we used to be good friends.
oh,well.Guess all friendships
have to e-e-e-end.WOH!

you aint get put me down
no not this time.
you anti gonna push me
to the ground.
no,not this time.

hey,b!tch,take a look in the mirror
i see your lips moivng but all i hear
is blah,blah,blah!calling me names while
im signing la,la,la!when Du give it up.
when Du gonna learn that i dont...
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the summer night was making me sweet thru my trench coat. I was with the other coullge studnets they had made fun of my fear of demons if only they new what my life was then they to would fear the beast but i dot fear them i hate them its commoin like Hunde and Katzen demons and Engel evn half Engel will allways be enemies. we got to the hole were the suicidel children where suposed to have jumped down to kill themselves. "So jack" nathan began "is this what u were so terrified of " and his lackies all laughed under my mantel i felt the hilt of my kreuz daggers not Lesen to defend my name but...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
Tayce’s p.o.v

“Training time for Lilly” I sneered looking at the small blond. She nodded. “Let me get ready” She said. I shrugged and then turned to go, but was stopped Von Hayden. “She already trained today” he informed me, I nodded. “I know, but Rebecca wants her to have Mehr of it” I told him, he rolled his eyes. “Why is she being such a bitch?” he asked me I laughed. “It’s Rebecca, she sees her as a threat” I told him, he tensed up. The he turned to me. “You’re not being so bad” he said, pointing out that I’m usually a bitch. “She didn’t do anything...
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posted by RobPattzLover7
It was no place, it was like a palace. "This room is
covered with crystals," noticed James."I know, wait,
get that map out, see those symbols their on the floor
over there," explained Justin. "Those symbols are translated
in English on the map here," remembered James. "Ok, it says
weather your at 2 destinations at once the centre will always
bring Du hope and justice," recited Justin.

The Sekunde Justin sagte 'Hope and Justice' the bracelet
that William have him shone from the reflection, of the
crystals that glittered and flared, he then noticed the
crystal ball was in a box that had fingerprints...
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How To Know Whether Du Are An Intuitive Writer oder A Conceptual Writer - Corey Mandell via FilmCourage.com.
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Becoming An Adult: How To See The World Differently - John Bucher via FilmCourage.com.
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Why 99% Of Stories Are Meaningless - Alan Watt [Founder of L.A. Writers' Lab] via FilmCourage.com.
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Kate: Unique, Gorgeous
Katy: Amazing, Great
Ivana: Beautiful, Nice
Sasha: Cool, Adorable
Amy: Sweet, Kind
Karis: Friendly, Lovely
Kayley: Smart, Charming
Kim: Determined, Fun
Chloe: Talented, Extraordinary
Kourtney: Dedicated, Loyal
Jess: Generous, Hilarious
Louis:Funny, Childish
Liam: Nice, Kind
Harry: H-O-T
Aarron: Funny, Cool
Joe: Loyal, unique
Shelby: Strongly Determined, Pretty

I KNOW THERE ISN'T A LOT OF NAMES, BUT THE WHOLE POINT OF THIS IS FOR Du GUYSS TO GIVE ME YOUR NAMES AND I ADD THEM TO THIS Artikel AND THE Liste WILL GET BIGGER AND BIGGER...X
I think that the most important lesson I learned from my mentor, Autor Arline Chase, concerned foreshadowing. Here is the Zufällig House Webster’s definition of foreshadow: to Zeigen oder indicate beforehand. In other words, to provide some hint, clue, oder indication of something that is going to happen.

Why is foreshadowing important? I learned this lesson the hard way. In many of my first short stories—which I recommend as a medium to anyone testing the waters to see if they want to write fiction—I thought that I was being so crafty with my endings. I wrapped up the crime (or whatever) with...
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