So, let’s go over the underaged killer stories again in the Creepypasta world. Okay, so we got Jeff the Killer- Well, this was a fucking mistake. As Du know from… well, me, I am not a Fan of the whole “emotional teenager becomes an unstoppable killer because people are too stupid to fight off a messer wielding psychopath with a gun” creepypastas, oder E.T.B.U.K.B.P.A.T.S.T.F.O.K.W.P.W.A.G. Creepyastas This includes Jeff the Killer, all of his awful Fan creepypastas, Jane the Killer, Clockwork, and Eyeless Jack. And trust me, I’m going to touch upon those stories later on. So, when I read Ticci-Toby, I thought to myself “Eeehhhh”.
So, yeah, Ticci-Toby. The best way to describe this story is “It’s not terrible.” I will gladly say that this is my Favorit of the E.T.B.U.K.B.P.A.T.S.T.F.O.K.W.P.W.A.G. Creepypastas. The reason for this is, in all those other stores, they tried to make me feel sorry for the characters. However, I NEVER felt sorry for them. I never felt sorry for an Emo child who hated everyone, I never felt sorry for someone who kills men because a man killed her parents, and I DEFINITELY don’t feel sorry for someone who kills their parents for fun. Ticci-Toby is actually someone who I can actually feel sorry for. I mean, other than the fact that he is an anti-social kid who has a disease that makes him Mehr prone to injuries that he can’t even feel, and makes him really pale, his sister died in a car crash that he was injured in, and his father is a drunken abusive prick. So yeah, it’s a bit of a downer.
Another reason that I like Ticci-Toby Mehr than other killers is because he isn’t seen as an unstoppable god. He’s known for being very quiet and clumsy. I’m sure if he came at me with an axe, I could easily beat him just Von stepping slightly to the left. This might be pathetic, but when Du consider a killer who can stab their eyes out and still kill people, it’s nice to see a teenage killer who isn’t overpowered for once. Thank god for that. Ticci-Toby is also someone Du would expect to be a killer. He is a very anti-social person who doesn’t like talking to people, and his mental problems mixed with his abusive father doesn’t help much. When Du think of killers with a loving family and friends, Du wonder how they could even become killers. And that’s the thing, in reality, that is a lot Mehr rare to happen. With Toby, an emotional kid with no friends, and mental problems, is Mehr likely to at least have a few thoughts of murder.
Now, let’s talk about the major flaw of this story. The ending. WARNING, I WILL SPOIL THE ENDING OF THIS CREEPYPASTA! STOP Lesen IF Du WANT TO AVOID IT! So after Toby finally loses it, he goes and murders his father with a küche hatchet. Once his mother sees what he has done, he runs out of the house and into the woods…. which catches on fire. It is then revealed what has driven Toby to insanity… Slender Man. OH, COME ON! WHY WHY WHY! WHY THE FUCK WOULD Du DO THAT! THE STORY WAS JUST SO GOOD UP UNTIL THEN! Of course even the best of the emotional killer stories had to have a major fuck up somewhere, and Slenderman fit the bill on major fuck up. Why did he have to even be in this goddamn creepypasta. Du honestly couldn’t use the stress he was under all this time be the reason for him snapping. Du had to have this faceless, sharply dressed fuck be the reason!? Fuck it, Toby went insane cause of stress. This ending never happened.
So, yeah. Like I sagte before, Ticci-Toby is a pretty good creepypasta. It’s a decent creepypasta, with a few flaws. But trust me, those few flaws….. OH GOD! I’m sorry this is a much shorter review than usual, but, there isn’t really much to say about this. It’s just a crazy teen with an axe. Nothing new. But at least it’s better than this before. But, hey, that’s only my opinion. What’s Your Take.
So, yeah, Ticci-Toby. The best way to describe this story is “It’s not terrible.” I will gladly say that this is my Favorit of the E.T.B.U.K.B.P.A.T.S.T.F.O.K.W.P.W.A.G. Creepypastas. The reason for this is, in all those other stores, they tried to make me feel sorry for the characters. However, I NEVER felt sorry for them. I never felt sorry for an Emo child who hated everyone, I never felt sorry for someone who kills men because a man killed her parents, and I DEFINITELY don’t feel sorry for someone who kills their parents for fun. Ticci-Toby is actually someone who I can actually feel sorry for. I mean, other than the fact that he is an anti-social kid who has a disease that makes him Mehr prone to injuries that he can’t even feel, and makes him really pale, his sister died in a car crash that he was injured in, and his father is a drunken abusive prick. So yeah, it’s a bit of a downer.
Another reason that I like Ticci-Toby Mehr than other killers is because he isn’t seen as an unstoppable god. He’s known for being very quiet and clumsy. I’m sure if he came at me with an axe, I could easily beat him just Von stepping slightly to the left. This might be pathetic, but when Du consider a killer who can stab their eyes out and still kill people, it’s nice to see a teenage killer who isn’t overpowered for once. Thank god for that. Ticci-Toby is also someone Du would expect to be a killer. He is a very anti-social person who doesn’t like talking to people, and his mental problems mixed with his abusive father doesn’t help much. When Du think of killers with a loving family and friends, Du wonder how they could even become killers. And that’s the thing, in reality, that is a lot Mehr rare to happen. With Toby, an emotional kid with no friends, and mental problems, is Mehr likely to at least have a few thoughts of murder.
Now, let’s talk about the major flaw of this story. The ending. WARNING, I WILL SPOIL THE ENDING OF THIS CREEPYPASTA! STOP Lesen IF Du WANT TO AVOID IT! So after Toby finally loses it, he goes and murders his father with a küche hatchet. Once his mother sees what he has done, he runs out of the house and into the woods…. which catches on fire. It is then revealed what has driven Toby to insanity… Slender Man. OH, COME ON! WHY WHY WHY! WHY THE FUCK WOULD Du DO THAT! THE STORY WAS JUST SO GOOD UP UNTIL THEN! Of course even the best of the emotional killer stories had to have a major fuck up somewhere, and Slenderman fit the bill on major fuck up. Why did he have to even be in this goddamn creepypasta. Du honestly couldn’t use the stress he was under all this time be the reason for him snapping. Du had to have this faceless, sharply dressed fuck be the reason!? Fuck it, Toby went insane cause of stress. This ending never happened.
So, yeah. Like I sagte before, Ticci-Toby is a pretty good creepypasta. It’s a decent creepypasta, with a few flaws. But trust me, those few flaws….. OH GOD! I’m sorry this is a much shorter review than usual, but, there isn’t really much to say about this. It’s just a crazy teen with an axe. Nothing new. But at least it’s better than this before. But, hey, that’s only my opinion. What’s Your Take.