murderer oder peacelover

Ok, so the first two bits of my version of Into the Wild are done, and here's Chapter Two, though its not as long as the others.


“Wait!” Rusty gasped.
Bluestar looked at him.
“What if I… considered it? What would happen?” Rusty couldn’t help asking.
“We would meet Du here at sunhigh tomorrow. We would take Du back to our camp and if Du still wish, Du will get your apprentice name and stay in the apprentice den, along with Graypaw.”
Upon this, Graypaw perked up. “No! No, no, no! Kittypets can’t be warriors; they don’t have it in their blood, in their soul…”
Bluestar intervened....

When Firepaw woke up," Even though Bluestar sagte not to go out of the camp, i will still." He walked out of the apprentice höhle, den and got some fresh kill. Once finished, Firepaw headed out to annoy Windclan." Hello Tallstar." He sagte politely once at Windclan camp. "What are Du doing here." Tallstar snarled. ok for the plan, say I want to Mitmachen the clan because I got banished. Tell him to sent me out to hunt and then to let my dog friends, Spike, Dodger, Hector, and Steve, out. "Oh I was banished from my clan of eating prey befor the kits and elders could, can I Mitmachen Windclan?" He meowed to Tallstar....