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Hey do Du like this poem i did about alice and jasper's love?

these two were insepreable
the trust and Liebe in his eyes
made her feel safe, sicher
when she smiled
it brightened his Tag
the thrill of the adventure
the adventure of Liebe
was making alice and jasper
fall ever so passionetly inlove
Liebe is like the wind
Du cant see it
but Du can feel it
Liebe folowed jasper and alice
because they were destined for eachother

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TEAM-EDWARDxxx said:

I Like it...

But is okay i guess.. maybe sum Mehr stuff bout like Vampire haha that would be interesting..

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Du could just go to the request a peom Frage and say that u kno! but thanx! for the tip

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Little_Cullen said:

Liebe it. Punctuation a bit funny, but the actual Schreiben is really cool. I especially like the bit about he makes her feel safe, sicher and her smile brightens his day. I Liebe it. Keep it up!

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thank-u so much

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twilightgirlNo1 said:

i think its great but some of the lines could be a little better.

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twilight0girl said:

it's a perfect poem about them.

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it's a perfect poem about them.

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Twilightpup said:

Its really good , Du should make one about Bella and Edward

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emilyemmett said:

That is really good!! Du should write another one!! Maybe about the meadow oder Jacob and Renesmee oder something!

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sessa123 said:

Its not bad, i always thought a poem used to jus have to rhyme but narr its really gud maybe fix up some little thing and maybe have a good thing to rhyme bout, like werewolves, Vampire anything LOL KEEP IT UP HUN XX

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zXwolfgirlXz said:

aww i like it

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Brysis said:

It´s cute ♥

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LovelyDragon said:

Ya, I like it. Some of the lines could be a little better, but it's really cool. :)

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