I agree with the Max X guy, Du have something but it needs some work. probly try not to sound exactly like the who ever your trying to sing and control your voice, Du sound like your trying to hard
Honestly, not bad... Could use a lot of work, but still not horrible oder anything. I think Du should try to put Mehr passion into it. Dont be afraid to SMILE, use your eyes to Zeigen that Du are actually FEELING the song and what it means.