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ok so im riting a story and it starts out after renesmee and jake are married, read and Kommentar i no its alot.

When I was done and looking descant I sucked in a big breath and descended the long staircase, Jacob saw me and the instant he did his whole face lit up. It looked like just seeing me changed his day, from a bad one - one of stress, of anger - to the best Tag of his entire life. He ran up to me and scoped me up into his arms. "Where did Du go?" he yelled even though I was in his arms still. "I wake up and saw that Du went there, I thought Du ran away!"
    I almost did, I thought. No it was wrong to make his Tag worse, I'd tell him about the baby after the thing with Sam got worked out. "I couldn't sleep." I sagte then tried to smile weakly and failed. I jumped out of his arms and ran to the bathroom. He came after me, probably too stunned to say anything, and waited in the corner as I was violently sick.
Thats all i got im not done tho
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fantastic! keep it up!
briza posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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OMG, did u write tht, i Liebe it :)
Life_sucks posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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add me and please if Du dont mind send me the finish product
mizzsalvatore12 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
 pinkfluby114558 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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4433girl said:
GREAT JOB SO FAR I CAN'T WAIT TILL Du FINISH. IT'S REALLY GOOD
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disneyminniejd said:
WOW that is really good. And i am not just saying that to be nice it is really good lol.You should finish it and let people know because i want to read the rest and i am a HUGE twilight Fan (TEAM JACOB!!!!!!!):D
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Michelle-Bieber said:
I think it's really good Du should totally keep Schreiben :)!!!!!!!!!!!<3
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Castiel4ever said:
Keep writing. It's good!
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Dayli said:
Oh great job, please keep Schreiben super cool. I'm a Fan of the series and cant get enough...
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im a huge Fan too,I want more, Mehr more! but idk y SM is Schreiben abut Bree Tanner
pinkfluby114558 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Omg i sagte the same thing i mean Bree was just a character that took what like 2 pages on the book? i mean she is going to be Schreiben Mehr about Twilight she needs to finish Midnight Sun... my opinion. but let me know when Du write Mehr on what Du are working on right now..
Dayli posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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yaya
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