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posted by alicia386
Chapter 2 – Southern Belle Rule #14: Never Drink Alcohol
Jazmyn Langston stood in front of her mirror feeling defeated. Her auburn hair was braided to the side, but there were still loose strands. She wore ripped, faded skinny jeans and a tight fitting Paramore t-shirt that barely fit over her belly button with black combat boots. Nothing in her closet made her look as if she belonged. The Bilder of the beautiful girl across the straße made her grit her teeth and change her outfit for the third time.
The girl across the straße wasn’t the only reason why she thought she didn’t belong in Brantley County. Everyone in the town dressed as if they were from a magazine. All the girls had perfect hair that wasn’t close to the frizzy disaster Jazmyn has to deal with every day. Their clothes were always neat and elegant. No one wore ragged skinny jeans and oversized graphic tees. When she walks down the street, she could feel scrutinizing eyes on her, judging her unkempt hair and sloppy outfits. It was awful being the odd ball from New York City.
Throwing her hands up in defeat, she settled for shorts and a low cut leibchen with a brown jacke that tickled to her knees when she walked. Her hair stayed in the braid because it would be too much work to redo it.
From the kitchen, she could her sister, Macy, humming while making breakfast. She smelled her sister’s signature blaubeere, heidelbeere muffins from her room. Her stomach growled in impatience. Hurrying down the hallway, she saw her beautiful sister with the phone in between her shoulder and her ear while eating a muffin. Her reddish brown hair was pulled into a tight bun and she wore minimal amount of makeup. Jazmyn never bothered with makeup. It seemed like a hassle. She had chaotic mornings from simply brushing her hair. There was no reason to add Mehr trouble to her mornings.
“No, I thought the money from the house was going to us. Du didn’t say anything about relatives, Martin.” Macy was livid at the person on the other side of the phone. “Well, I don’t care what Uncle Tony says. He was never there for mom. Yeah, whatever. Goodbye.” Macy slapped her phone down on the table.
“Whoa, calm down before Du break the screen,” sagte Jazmyn. She sat on the counter Weiter to the fridge.
Macy rolled her eyes. “As if I care,” she said. “Do Du know what they want to do with mom and dad’s house? They want to give it to Uncle Tony. Du know the guy from Missouri who we never met until mom and dad’s funeral.”
Jazmyn nodded her head. “Mom did leave most of her money to our uncle. She cared about him so I guess it isn’t too much of a surprise that she wanted Uncle Tony to have the profit from the house.”
It had been a couple of months since their parents died in a fire. Macy and Jazmyn were at a party and were spared from the flames. Their parents, however, were killed from the smoke in the air before the feuer burnt their bodies to ash. They couldn’t tell if it was their parents. The firefighters found their parent’s Gold wedding rings underneath all of their ash. Macy had cried for weeks while Jazmyn appeared unaffected. It disturbed Macy that her younger sister hadn’t shed a single tear when they heard the news. Jazmyn had wondered the same thing.
“Whatever, that scumbag isn’t getting a dime if I have anything to do with it.” Macy began dialing on her phone fiercely. She exited the room leaving Jazmyn alone with a plate full of muffins.

Hunter Henderson stood inside the principal’s office. The glocke for first period had run a couple of Minuten before. He could see students scurrying to get to class before the final glocke rung. He remembered why he hated high school. Everyone was so desperate to fit in and to get good grades. No one cared for real issues. The things a person in Brantley County care about most is what everyone thinks of them. People here care about their image Mehr than anything else.
He shook his head as Principal Stewart shoveled in his office. He was a round, tall man that loved Donuts and kept a stash hidden away in his desk. He had a baldhead that was covered up with a Lincoln-like oben, nach oben hat. His wife, Justine Stewart, was a part of Women of the South committee, the ones that organize the debutante ball every year.
“I don’t want any trouble out of you, young man,” the principal sagte as he handed Hunter his schedule. “You can’t act anyway Du want in my school. Do one thing and I’ll kick your butt out of this school faster than a eichhörnchen hopped up on caffeine.”
“Yessir,” Hunter sagte mockingly. He snatched the paper out of his hand and swung the door open to the main office.
The door hit something solid and he heard a low moan when he stepped out. A redhead was lying on the ground with her hand on her head. He bent down to help her up and felt bad when he saw her eyes shut in pain.
“Are Du okay?” he asked.
“No, Du just rammed the door in to my head like a maniac,” she said. As he steadied her on her feet, he got a good look at her. She had a white hemd, shirt that was low cut and shorts that reached above her mid-thigh. She had painfully bright red hair that was not dyed like most women in the south. “Do Du always do this to innocent Von standers?”
A smile tugged at his lips when he realized that she was not from here. Any southern women would have brushed it off and smiled, as if everything was fine. Some were Merida - Legende der Highlands enough to flirt with him despite the head injury. “Sorry, I didn’t see Du there.
“Ha, you’re telling me.” She gathered up her bag that she slung across her shoulder. Her raggedy old bag had buttons of various band names. “Next time, watch where you’re going.” She slipped Von him and out the main office to the halls.
He stood their stunned for a moment, stunned that he met a person like that. He gathered his stuff and rushed out into the halls after her. “Hey,” he greeted when he caught up to her, “I didn’t catch your name.”
“I know, that’s because I didn’t give it to you,” she said.
“I’m Hunter, if Du were wondering.”
“I wasn’t,” she sagte adjusting the strap on her bag. He held back a laugh as they continued walking. “I’m sorry,” she sagte after a couple of Minuten of silence. “I’m just having a crappy day. My name is Jazmyn.”
“Crappy day, huh? Mitmachen the club. Every Tag in Brantley County is a crappy day,” he said.
She peered to the side to face him. He could see a smile form on her porzellan pale face. “And here I was thinking Brantley was a cool place.”
“Sure, if Du like royal bitches and fried everything,” he sagte with a smirk.
She stopped in front of him. Her hair was unloosing from the braid she had plaited. “I have to go.” She pointed with her thumb at a door labeled Physics. “See ya around.”
“Bye,” he whispered as she closed the door behind her. For a brief moment, he could hear students growing silent as she entered.

Cara tilted her head to right as she surveyed the cheerleading tryout posters hanging in the gym. “Darling, they’re crooked,” she barked as a petite girl with limp brown hair scurried Weiter to Cara. Cara pointed to the poster in front of her. The girl rushed over to adjust the problem. “Better. Go see if Izzy needs any help.”
Cara smiled happily. She loved bossing the rising freshman cheerleaders. Since she was head cheerleader, they listened to every word she said. It didn’t hurt the fact that her family is known for building Brantley to the booming town it is today. She was grateful for not being a freshman. Everyone considers freshman of being the lowest in the high school social ladder. Even though she spent most of her first Jahr hanging out with the senior guys and making out with the handsome Biology teacher, it was still a miserable first year.
She flipped her brown curls behind her shoulder while walking towards Izzy. She held back an eye roll as she saw her best friend. It was obvious that Izzy was gaining weight. Her once thin hips were now about to burst from the ill-fitting skinny jeans she wore. She refrained from mentioning it. Cara knew how much Izzy hated the fact she was getting heavier. Like the good friend she was, she bit her tongue and smiled warmly as Izzy turned around holding a stapler and glue gun.
“Have Du seen the new girl?” Izzy asked.
“More importantly, have Du seen her hair, Izzy?” Cara giggled as she pictured Yankee wearing her messy hair in a braid with shorts the length of panties. It had taken all of her will power not to laugh in Yankee’s face. “Ugh, can Du believe she is my neighbor now?”
Izzy smiled, “Your life must be so hard.”
Realizing Isabelle was being sarcastic, Cara gave her an amused eye roll. “Ha ha very--”
Isabelle tugged at her Cara’s arm harshly, wildly pointing at the gym entrance. “Look who it is,” Isabelle half-shrieked, half-whispered in Cara’s ear. A tall, slender boy with brown hair flopping around on his head entered the gym followed Von five other boys in varsity jackets.
“Ugh, Du still have that crush on Tanner Hughes?”
Tanner Hughes was a senior playing varsity football. He was every college’s dream student and every girl’s dream boyfriend. Isabelle has had a crush on him since freshman year. All the freshman girls had gushed over Tanner when the school Jahr began. He had pearly blue eyes and a dimpled smile. The freshman girls melted at the sight of him and some even Lost their virginity. Cara didn’t want Isabelle to end up like the ones losing their virginity. Tanner Hughes was not worth a girl’s first time.
“It is Mehr than just a crush. I might be in love,” Isabelle sagte dreamily.
“Spare me the Liebe story, sugar,” spat Cara. “You need to get over this guy.”
“How? It isn’t as if I have offers banging at my door.” Isabelle fiddled with the bottom of her blue tank.
“You just let me handle that,” sagte Cara with as much sincerity as she could muster. “Besides, guys should be breaking Du house down trying to get to.” A loud glocke exploded in the gym. Sighs of relief rippled through the cheerleaders as they abandoned their jobs heading for the exit. “Time for lunch, Izzy.”
“You know what, Du are so right about the guys,” sagte Izzy as they exited the gym with Cara’s arm resting on Isabelle’s shoulder, the perks of being tall. “If Tanner Hughes can’t realize how perfect I am for him, then he doesn’t deserve me.”
Cara nodded along. “Who cares about Tanner? He is just another douchie guy sugar.”
“You’re right,” Isabelle agreed, swallowing hard. “Expect he has the most amazing smile Du have ever seen.”
“Izzy,” warned Cara once they entered the cafeteria. Students moved everywhere like ants. They were bumping into others, laughing with friends, and chattering without a care in the world. “I thought we agreed there would be no Mehr talk of Du and Tanner together.”
They walked over to a booth against the wall. It was their usual tabelle since in the beginning of high school when the other tables were filled. Cara and Isabelle didn’t bother with school lunch. Cara was able to convince one of the cafeteria ladies to bring Essen to their table. The woman would always cook a gourmet meal for them, which was a thousand times better than the dump they served.
Isabelle began chatting about her plans to travel once she turned 18. Cara was only half listening. Her attention was focused on Hunter Henderson who was strolling in with Yankee Weiter to him. Hunter was the one reason she had wanted to become Friends with his little sister, Savannah. Hunter had intrigued her since middle school when she saw him sketching in the back of the school Weiter to the flowers. He was so peacefully and reclusive in his corner. She watched him sketch, unaware of anything around him. He interested her Mehr than she was willing to admit.
She whispered an excuse before walking over to Hunter’s table. He had sat at a round tabelle with Yankee. She was laughing at something he said. It disgusted Cara to witness Yankee’s lame attempts at flirting. Putting on a beaming smile, she pushed the annoyance down and sat with them.
Yankee took one look at her and recognized her. She smiled, “Hey, Cara, I didn’t think I would see Du here.”
“Hello, Yankee,” Cara said, ignoring her anger. Yankee stared at her confused for a moment. Cara had already adverted her attention to Hunter. “I need to talk to you.”
Hunter held back a sigh. “Go ahead.”
Cara motioned with her eyes that she couldn’t say anything with Yankee there. He got the hint and told Yankee he would be right back. They walked in silence out the cafeteria and into the halls. Cara stood across from him with her arm folded. Hunter was leaning on a locker.
“So what do Du want, Cara?”
She could feel her herz quicken. For a confidence boost, she flipped her curls back. “Where is Savannah?”
“My sister,” he asked confused.
“Yeah, who else could I be talking about?”
“Sorry, I just didn’t know Du knew my sister.”
“Oh, she didn’t tell you?”
“No.”
Cara didn’t realize that she was pinned against a locker and Hunter centimeters away from her face. She could smell is usual apfel, apple scent and deodorant that covered the aviator’s jacke he often wore. Her herz sped up quickly as he leaned in closer and closer. She could feel her head leaning up towards him. Hunter had placed one hand on her hip and the other gently on her shoulder. She had her hands around his neck. It was funny how fast they had gotten into that position.
In seconds, their lips were smashed against each other, fighting for control. That is how it was with Hunter, Cara thought. He’s constantly fighting for something oder someone. She pushed those thoughts aside as he melted in the warmness of his lips. She tried pulling him closer Von grabbing at his shirt. He held her head.
The KISS ended as fast as it happened. He had pulled away. His pale blue eyes were wide and shining. He had light skin. The kind Du get when Du mama was white and Du daddy was black. She had never seen blue eyes on someone with light brown skin. On him, it looked hot. Tendrils of dark brown hair bounced in his eyes. She carefully brushed it away.
“We can’t repeat last summer,” he whispered. He started to back away. “I am not letting Du suck me in, again.”
“No,” Cara began. He was nearing the entrance of the cafeteria, “it won’t be like last summer, I swear.”
He shook his head as if he didn’t believe her entered the cafeteria letting the swinging doors swing, schaukel wildly behind him. Cara stood their paralyzed in spot. She didn’t know what to think. She didn’t know to do. Not liking the feeling of cluelessness, she shook herself until the image of them subsided, but it never truly went away.

When the glocke signaling the end of the school Tag rung, Hunter climbed into his car and sat there. He ran his fingers through his brown curls and tried to focus. Going Home was out of the question. He had accidently gotten Savannah drunk last night at the party. His parents were pissed beyond comprehension. It wasn’t his fault that he had Lost track of her. He had apologized a thousand times as he held Savannah’s hair while he threw up in the toilet. She had forgiven him and reassured him that it wasn’t his fault. He still felt bad.
He decided to drive around Brantley. Brantley didn’t offer much, which was good since he wanted to focus on his thoughts. The first week he got back, he had already gotten his little sister drunk and kissed Cara VanDere. He groaned at the thought of Cara. He remembered everything about her and that small week they had before he left. It was the most chaotic week of his life. During that first week of summer, he had loved Cara just as much as he had hated her. He most definitely did not want a repeat.
This was why he had wanted to stay away from Cara. She was a mess, but a beautiful mess that intoxicated him. If he was being honest with himself, he was a mess, too. That was why they had worked. They were both messes that were looking for a clutch. It had worked for a while before things turned ugly.
He shook his head. He didn’t want to think about Cara and him. He just wanted to drive away and leave his worries dangling on a cliff.
added by h3rmioneg
Chapter 4: My Stuff is Off-Limits So Hands Off

      James Rivers flipped over boxes searching for that one book. This book shouldn't have been this difficult to find. How could it disappear? No one knows about it but his wife and him. He knew his wife didnt want to gi near it lr the attic. He was positive Simone oder Brooke didn't come near the attic in the past week. They didn't know that he was alway watching their every move. A concerned parent was how he thought of himself. He was sure they would never do such a thing even when he told them about the attic. He surveyed the entire room....
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added by alicia386
posted by hgfan5602
When I'm with you
I feel like the world has melted away
Like there's nothing but you
The power's Wird angezeigt between us

I'm always speechless when I'm with you
But sometimes the silence is worth more
Can Du feel the eyes lock?
It's like the whole world has gone

We are the only ones
In this sweet endless heaven
And I always want to keep enjoying it
Tag Von day

When I'm with you
There's nothing else Du can do
We are the only ones who have this secret bond
Jahr Von year

We're Lost in this world
This deep, sweet large world
Where people from each country come to love
We're Lost in this world...forever
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As weeks passed the doctors had put Kyle on life support as he was getting worse. They were all there when Kyle woke up. "Kyle!" sagte Summer she sat Weiter to his bett and hugged him tightly. He squeezed her back, it wasn't very hard, but he tried. "you cant leave me!" she demanded "You CAN'T!" she cried and cried and cried, but she didn't let go. "I'm sorry" he whispred
"No! Youre NOT going! Du can't! I Liebe you! How am I supposed to-" she stopped and cried, she let go and went to her seat. Angus put his hand on James back, gestering for him to talk to Kyle. He knelt beside him. Kyle saw all...
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posted by vampirefreak_26
When 9 o’clock began to come closer I was wandering from my closet to my bed. Should I go oder should I just stay home? Why would I want to go, I don’t know anybody there, right? I don’t even know what to wear! Stupid thoughts, I knew very well why I wanted to go and it could be summed up in just one word, Gabriel. I wanted to see him and every time I did it became harder for me to resist him. Even if I wanted to which I didn’t, I don’t think I would be able to not notice him. The guy had a great body and those eyes of his! They seemed to be glowing, calling to Du to come closer and...
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Prologue: The Breakout

The dark figure moved quickly, careful to keep hidden from the surveillance cameras.

It was dressed in black robes, obscuring its face and features. Carefully, it navigated its way through the tall shrubs, keeping out of sight.

Tonight is the night, it thought menacingly as it ducked low behind a dirigible pflaume tree.

Tonight he would finally have revenge, sweet revenge against the blasted Culturians. Revenge against the blasted protagonists who bathed in victory and revenge against those who imprisoned the defeated.

It had only two things on it's mind: revenge and dominance....
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 24
    Trapped in a deadly game
    It was bizarre, it had about everyone I knew and learned from the visions, but I couldn’t rush in, we had to go one at a time. Although it was form Dorothy’s point of view.    
    The first page was brief, it basically explained it was Dorothy’s sort of diary, and she’d put some key notes and thoughts in it two. When we flipped to the other page it was of me, it took two whole pages. One page a picture of me smiling brightly at the camera, obviously young, and the...
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30 hours. That's how long I had to live. The doctors had warned me that this Tag would come about 3 years ago. But I didn't believe them. They've sagte it before, several times in the last 3 months, and yet it never did happen. But this time, everything was real. Reality had fianlly hit me. I was going to die. That was it. That was the last time I would ever doubt myself again. People surrounded the outside of my hospital room. But no, not my dad. He could care less. I'm only 17, geez Dad. The least Du could have done was call me oder send me an E-Mail oder something. But I didn't know until last...
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posted by alicia386
Crime

Chapter 5: Who sagte I Wanted to be Apart of This

      Two days later, Marco kept his promise to Jason. He sagte he wouldn't say a word to the girls. He wouldn't mention anything about Sammy oder D.B.E. He never sagte he wouldn't let them figure it out. It was hard on him to see Faye so clueless about the real world. If he didn't help her now, who knows what would happen to her and her friends.
      Simone's plan worked perfectly. Part one was to make Mr. Stone have a stomach ache. It was gross to hear when he was in the bathroom and then it was awful to smell once he came out. Then his...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Trudging along behind his group, Talow scuffed his worn boots against the packed trail leading away from his home. He had been gegeben a uniform, a flame gun and a sharp looking sword of his own; including a brief crash test on how to use them. He was at the back of the line, followed only Von the line of prisoners taken captive Von the troops.
“I am so sorry, I didn't expect them to do that.” Talow sagte to one man at the front of the captive line. He was referring to earlier in the Tag when the prisoners had asked to stop and rest, they had been greeted with the captain of the troop ordering...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
The first rays of sun beat down on the scarred land, baking and scorching the already dry soil. Small clumps of crops grew here and there where there was enough to hold onto. From the small village, a scrawny rooster could be heard announcing the morning as people left the shelter of their huts, thanking whoever had let them survive another night.

Talow was like any other fifteen Jahr old that was still alive and not recruited. He worked on the farm, if Du could call it that, picking the weeds and making sure the village would have food. Shoving himself off the thin blankets, Talow got ready...
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posted by 1999jacko
Alli was picke up and driven to hospital straight away blood still gushing from her face and arms, the tears mixed in with blood making her wounds stung even more. Then after a few hours of stitches, antibiotics bein pumped into her wounds andalusia tr blood being cleaned and scrubbed off her body, she finally lay in bett with no one around to comfort her but the silly nurses who try and cheer her up a bit but failing miserably. All of Alli's wounds were stinging and aching to the point where she could hardly Bewegen to reach her IPad, she slowly gave up and decided to just lay there and wait for...
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posted by alicia386
August 10

      Shea Wainwright was one of the many girls who screamed when they learned of the appearance of Derek Tonkin. He wasn't coming until Weiter week but Shea couldn't wait. She could finally claim that she dated a rock star. It was so obvious that he was going to end up dating her. She was the most beliebt girl in school. Why wouldn't a rock star, sterne choose her as his girlfriend. She entered the lunchroom with her fingers interlocked with Eric.
      As usual, everyone was in their own group. The jocks were flirting with the cheerleaders while the nerds kept themselves on the outskirts...
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posted by Annanonymous
........ Kairtlyn sighed. Normally she would get eighteen coins this Tag from selling flowers, but she got two today. She picked her blume basket. Nobody in Sderina would want Blumen now. They are celebrating the Dutchess Maira's birthday. As she walked, two guards pointed a her.

"She's the Duke's daughter!" one of them shouted. The guards began to chase her. She ran away, and slipped....
(literally 80 Minuten later...)

"There she was!" one of the guards said. She had fainted, and she was opening her eyes....
"What are Du doing with me?!" she shouted.
"We want Du to live at the Duke's castle......"

(To Be Continued.)
posted by Problematic129
Chapter 23
    The difference between
    I always knew being rich made Du poorer, for one, you’d most likely put your things first before anything else, but some people manage to keep compassion. My family was never rich rich, but we still had many luxuries, but they never helped our family.
    But not being rich doesn’t mean Du get a good life either, because in the end, nothing’s perfect it’s just nice oder good. Families break up, Friends betray, strangers steal, it’s just how the world works in some cases. We feel powerless...
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posted by SisterOfThalia
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This is my first full-length story that I've made.

Du know, I would post it here chapter Von chapter, but there's 23. And that would entirely cover up 'The Deadly Truth' (I know that should probably be underlined but my computer sucks and that isn't an option on here) chapters that are up thus far so I'm not doing that xD

Based off of the Percy Jackson series.

Note: This story kind of stinks, especially the first five chapters. Eve is a major Mary-Sue at the beginning, I think, but fanfiction.net won't let me change it so I can't really do much about it (plus I'm a sentimental weirdo who doesn't like to change things-- really gotta get over that). The Sekunde story, which I'll post after I get feedback on this, is WAY better. I'm on chapter 14 of that and it's already longer than the first and Von FAR Mehr descriptive and all. I blame myself for being younger when I started the first one :P
posted by E-Scope90
This song is about braking up with someone. Please Mitmachen my club E-Scope90 if Du like it. I'll post some Mehr if I get enough views.
Caysee
Oh Caysee
Casee, Caysee,
Can't Du see
Your Liebe isn't fit
For Du and me
Caysee, why won't Du understand
I don't want to take your hand
Oh
Caysee
Why can't Du find someone else,
Oh Caysee?
Caysee, don't feel so blue
Du can find a boy for you.
(repeat 2x)
Caysee, why cant Du see
You're just not the one for me.
Just please understand
Our Liebe isn't grand.
I don't wanna make a fit in front of the Musik stand
Caysee
Can't Du see
You're not the one for me
Caysee, oh Caysee
Oh, can't Du see???!!!
Du can never be...
the one....
for me...