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This is my first attept at Schreiben Poesie so please tell me your honest opinion and how i can improve it.

"Life is a long journey with Infinite detours and surprises

Du can not get anywhere in life Von just going straight on the path.

The path of life is long and eternaly changing,

The greatest trial in life is life itself.

Don´t just mind yourself, let people in.

Being alone is being cruel to yourself.

There is nothing worse in life that being all alone."

Like i sagte this is my first try and i don´t even know if this can be caled a poem oder just gibberish.

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The class party was just about to begin and Maria had come early to help the out with setting everything up.
Maria was 17 years old and she hated to spend Mehr time with most of her classmates than she had to but this time she was hoping to meet Kevin so she had decided to go anyway.
The party started and Maria stood in a corner watching the others having fun and Wird angezeigt affection for their partners on the dance floor and felt Mehr alone than usual.
Kevin arrived around 20 Minuten after the party had started and he hoped that Maria were still there because she was the only reason he even bothered...
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