I was just sending this to Jamie Brittain cos he tweeted my friend and sagte I can send him my scripts and he'll read them =)
So just what I wanted in S4! Like the last ten minutes
EVERYTHING BELONGS TO THE AMAZING SKINS! UNFORTUNATELY NOTHING BELONGS TO ME- AS OF YET =)))
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ALTERNATIVE ENDING FOR SERIES 4.
WRITER; ANGHARAD WILLIAMS
SET IN; SERIES 4: EPISODE 8 (Cook has broken into John Foster’s Home looking for Freddie)
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SCENE 1; John Foster’s house
Cook jumps into the house through the window, but catches his hand on a nail.
COOK
Ah! Fuck! (shakes his hand to clear the blood)
Cook walks over to packed boxes and starts opening the box. He picks up a bag with a blood stained jacke in it.
COOK
Freds...
He puts the bag down and picks up another bag with Freddie’s trainers in it.
Shot zooms to see “Fredster” written on the trainer.
Lights are switched on.
COOK
(Jumps back in shock) Shit!
JOHN
(walks in holding a baseball bat) Let me guess. James Cook
COOK
(holding Freddie’s trainer in the bag and shoving it towards John) What the fuck have Du done?!
JOHN
She doesn’t Liebe you, Du know. It was the other one she loved- Mclair
COOK
I sagte What, the Fuck, have Du done to my friend?
JOHN
(walks closer towards Cook)
I took care of it. Du see Elizabeth needs saving- he wasn’t suppose to save her, neither are you- but I am.
COOK
(puts Freddie’s trainer down) All right listen Du tosser I don’t get what the hell is going on in that fucked up mind of yours but you’re gonna tell me where my friend is!
JOHN
Oh don’t be a fool Cook! We don’t have time for that! Now could Du please kneel down.
COOK
(laughs in shock) Du killed my best friend!
JOHN
Kneel down please- soon you’ll both be out of the way. She deserves much better
COOK
Freddie, my mate, my best mate in the whole world is the only, the only one Eff is ever going to love- I can’t change that and Du (chuckles) fucking hell, Du defiantly can’t change that
JOHN
Is that so?
COOK
(nods and grins)
John hits Cook in the stomach with the bat.
Cook groans in pain.
COOK
AH! FUCKING HELL!
JOHN
(steps closer to Cook)
Do I need to ask Du again? Kneel down please James
COOK
(steps closer into John’s face)
Fuck. You.
(He throws one of the boxes at John and runs into the corridor being pursued slowly Von John still holding his bat)
JOHN
James. James come back here. I thought killing that worthless piece of shit was fun but killing Du is going to be so much Mehr pleasurable
Cook is hiding in the küche as John enters clutching his bat tighter.
Cook comes from behind him and punches him to the ground.
COOK
(still hitting him) DON’T. YOU. EVER. TALK ABOUT MY BEST FRIEND LIKE THAT!! Du FUCKING BASTARD! PIECE OF SHIT! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU!! WHERE’S FREDDIE?! (screaming/crying) WHERE IS HE??!!
JOHN
(struggling to breathe)
Somewhere she won’t find him! She can Home now to me! She’s never going back there! She’s mine now! He can stay there instead of her!
COOK
(hits him again repeatedly until John is unconscious)
Cook leaves him on the floor and runs back downstairs and back out through the window he came in grabbing Freddie’s jacke as he leaves.
SCENE 2; At Effy’s Hospital in the woods
Cook has found a place in the woods where a hole has been filled in.
Cook is in tears clutching Freddie’s t-shirt.
COOK
FUCK FREDS! Why the fuck did Du go there?! (gazing at the floor) Du stupid bastard! You’ve fucking left me now! Karen’s been going apeshit looking for you- I’m sorry I thought Du skipped town. I should have believed Du didn’t— What the fuck am I gonna tell Eff? (kneels to the floor and clutches Freddie’s jacke tighter) I promise Freds I won’t take her (pause) she’s yours, she always will be, anyway it’s not me and Eff (crying more) it was never me and Eff. It’s always been Freds and Cook. I’ll get Du out of here now Freds. I’ll take Du Home to Effy.
SCENE 3; Graveyard (Freddie’s Funeral)
Cut to a few days later at Freddie’s funeral.
At the grave is Freddie’s father, grandfather, Karen, Pandora, Thomas, JJ, Emily, Naomi, Katie, and Effy. + a few other unknown faces.
Shot of Freddie’s coffin being put in the ground.
Effy is the only one not crying.
As the vicar speaks shots of Cook talking the police to John Foster’s house.
John Foster being arrested for Freddie’s murder.
Cook is arrested again but only for his Zurück crimes
Freddie’s body being found and Karen and their father identifies the body and breaking down.
Shot back to the funeral.
As the vicar leaves the others begin to follow.
Katie steps up behind Effy and holds onto her hand.
KATIE
(crying) Eff... Freddie was amazing- Du were the lucky one, he loved Du so much, just... I’m here if Du want me okay
EFFY
Yeah
Pause. Katie looks awkward as Effy looks down at the coffin.
KATIE
Du talk to him for a while yeah
Katie leaves Effy Von the grave and walks away as she follows the others out of the graveyard Cook arrives handcuffed to a police officer.
COOK
Allright Katiekins
Katie hugs Cook.
KATIE
I’m so glad Du could come- she needs someone Cook- I can’t help her
COOK
no one can babe
The police officer begins walking away pulling Cook with him.
KATIE
Cook...
Police officer pauses and Cook turns around.
KATIE
I’m so sorry. I miss him so much I don’t know how Du must feel- Du knew him better than any of us and I...
COOK
I know
KATIE
And Cook, I’m glad you’re my friend- Freddie was lucky to have someone like Du and so am I- I hope Du get out soon Du don’t deserve to be in prison. Du deserve a medal for what Du did for Freds
Cook slightly smiles at her. Katie walks away.
The policeman leads Cook to the grave Weiter to Effy.
COOK
Eff...
Effy turns around and shows no expression on her face.
Cook goes and stands near her.
EFFY
Do Du think he can hear us?
COOK
Freds can do anything Eff
EFFY
Yeah- that’s what I love. Do Du think he’s up there?
COOK
Yeah- he is (starts to cry) he’ll always be up there, looking after you
EFFY
Just like he promised (looks up at the sky then looks at Cook) Why are Du crying?
COOK
Why aren’t you?
EFFY
Freddie told me not to cry, he doesn’t like it when I cry. It fucks him up.
COOK
(chuckles) Look at us. Freds, Eff and Cook all together again
Police officer pulls on Cook’s arm to leave.
EFFY
Du have to go now right?
COOK
Five Mehr Minuten man!
Police officer shakes his head.
COOK
(walks over the grave, crying a lot) I fucking Liebe Du Freds (kisses his hand and places it on the grave) I’m gonna miss you, Du tosser. It’s not gonna be same. (looks at Effy) Don’t worry Freds I’ll look after her for Du (pause) and no not like that Freds. I told Du man-It’s Freds and Cookie. That’s it. Us against the fucking world.
The police officer leads Cook away as he passes Effy, Cook holds her hand for a few Sekunden before letting go and walking away.
Effy looks up at the sky and hears a Freddie whisper.
EFFY
I Liebe you. I Liebe you. I Liebe you. I Liebe you. I Liebe you. (Starts to cry) Freddie... Please... Please tell me you’re coming back. I Liebe Du so much. It’s my fault. Du shouldn’t be up there. Freddie...?
FREDDIE
(whispering in the wind) I Liebe Du
Effy laughs and turns to Cook who is nearly gone.
EFFY
COOK! COOK! He can hear us! Cook He can hear me!
COOK
Of course he fucking can! He’s Freddie.
EFFY
(smiles and turns back around to look at the sky) I was wrong Freddie Du don’t make me weak- you’ve made me strong. I’m strong now. I’m being strong. For you.
Shot closes of Effy smiling and spinning around in the graveyard as Cook smiles on.
Shot zooms out from the ground into the sky.
CLOSING CREDITS.
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A/N; YES I HAD TO PUT COOK/KATIE IN THERE! SO WHAT SUE ME! HAHAHA!
So I am back on fanfiction for a while now =)
oder maybe I'll keep scripting! Cos I do Liebe it <333
