Hello sad song fanpopers

Okay so I know this is proberly goin to sound terrible but I have come up with a verse and the chourus to a song that I am Schreiben and I want Du to say if Du like it and if Du can come up with another verse and a title. Thanks!

My bloods pouring to the ground
And Du don't even care.
I look at Du pleading
And Du just walk away.
Du ripped out my herz and soul
Burned them to ash
Now Du say Du Liebe me
Du say Du want me back?

Get the hell away from me
You've hurt me
Get out of my life
You've scarred me
Du were the best thing in my life
Then Du turned and walked away
Du say Du Liebe me
And still Du walk away