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Do Du like my story so far?? Be honest, I want to know what yall think:

Olivia and Elliot exit a restaurant together. Olivia has her arm around Elliot.

“Thanks for dinner. El,” She says. They continue to walk down the street, heading towards Olivia’s apartment. They walk in silence. Elliot slips his arm around Olivia’s waist.

“El, I think Kathy would not like Du holding me like this,” she laughs. She laughs, and Elliot pulls himself closer to her.

“Who cares what Kathy thinks,” he whispers. Elliot then kisses Olivia on the lips. They KISS for a long time in the street.

“Dad?” Elliot whips his head up, only to see Kathleen, his daughter.

“Oh my gosh, Dad. Du are cheating on mom? With Olivia?” Tears well up in her eyes. She begins to turn away, but Elliot pulls her back. He opens his mouth to speak, but Olivia does instead.

“Kathleen, your father has had a couple too many drinks, he has no idea what he’s doing.” Olivia assured Kathleen. She steps towards Kathleen, but she shrugs her away.

“Yeah, I bet he did, but Du are letting him KISS you, which means Du want him to!” She yells. She runs off, heading towards home.

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Ok yall....how should I continue this...
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Eline_K said:
I like it!

But just one question: how did Kathleen suddenly end up in the same straße near Olivia's apartment? New York is a big place to just run into someone.
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Yeahh. im gonna fix that soon. thanks
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beachchick said:
this is a good story for anyone who reads this... this chickis my best friend so u should tell her to continue this because the dreamshe had about this was really great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(yes she has dreams about tv shows!)
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Thanks L!
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ur welcom
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Midnight_love15 said:
It is really good! Please continue writing!
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