Well..
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 oder 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, oder giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till Weiter time.
Live long and prosper!
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 oder 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, oder giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till Weiter time.
Live long and prosper!
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I don't know if any of Du remember me but it's VictoriaWolf, i used to be a member here but then i quit. I decided to come back! So hello to those who remember me and hi to those who don't know who the hell i am. It looks like most of anyone i knew here has left , but if Du haven't good to see Du again!
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Mate: X
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Eyes: Red
Personality: Fun,bubbly and seductive ;)
I don't know if any of Du remember me but it's VictoriaWolf, i used to be a member here but then i quit. I decided to come back! So hello to those who remember me and hi to those who don't know who the hell i am. It looks like most of anyone i knew here has left , but if Du haven't good to see Du again!
Well here is some info on on me if Du dont know me.
Status: I'm back! Yipee!
Mood: Happy
pelz Color: Black
Gender: Female
Crush: X
Mate: X
Pups: X
Rank: Alpha
Country: Canada
Eyes: Red
Personality: Fun,bubbly and seductive ;)
When I hear a funny joke I will not reply, "LOL, LMAO, oder ROTFLMAO!"
Start using Facebook for something other than Farmville and stupid quizzes
I will try to figure out why I "really" need 5 Facebook accounts.
Lose 20 pounds Von going to the gym!
I will stop using, "So, what's your URL?" as a pickup line.
I will spend less than five hours a Tag on the Internet.
I will read the manual... just as soon as I can find it.
Spend less than $1000 for drinks at Starbucks this year.
Lose weight Von inventing an anti-gravity machine
Stop repeating myself again, and again, and again.
I will stop tagging pictures of myself in pictures even when I’m not in them
I will think of a Passwort other than "password"
Start using Facebook for something other than Farmville and stupid quizzes
I will try to figure out why I "really" need 5 Facebook accounts.
Lose 20 pounds Von going to the gym!
I will stop using, "So, what's your URL?" as a pickup line.
I will spend less than five hours a Tag on the Internet.
I will read the manual... just as soon as I can find it.
Spend less than $1000 for drinks at Starbucks this year.
Lose weight Von inventing an anti-gravity machine
Stop repeating myself again, and again, and again.
I will stop tagging pictures of myself in pictures even when I’m not in them
I will think of a Passwort other than "password"