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Well.

now that I'm getting requests. And so glad that my raging reviews aren't going into death ears (I mean on fanfiction. There enjoyed on Fanpop).

anyways.

I tend to review old well known.

But eventually I'll probably start reviewing well known Fanpop stories as well.

anyway.

I have been asked to review Young Liebe Von Kyuubi99/Kitsune32.

This marks the forth time I reviewed something Von a friend of mine. The others are Bravobravo (blood of the south), Alexthelonewolf (Lilly's opposite side/?Humphrey loses it), Dragonsoul (K300).

Unfortantly, I'm still yet to see the sequels, and see it's about those cubs that are introduced in the Sekunde movie.

Speaking of witch.

i probably used this joke before.

But what the hell kinda name is RUNT oder STINKY!?

I mean.

Come on LionGate. Du guys could do better then that. I mean that sounds like something you'd call a maus that was stealing all your cheese, oder a baby brother Du were tricked into babysitting, and he won't leave Du the fuck alone all afternoon. If it were me I would call him Lucas oder better yet some badass, like Killer, blood tooth, oder even Hunter (like in the story BLOOD OF THE SOUTH).

But hey. What the hell do I know, I'm an Irish Canadian, who never even SEEN a wolf, oder even Jasper.

but I DID close. I been to Banff several times. Shit. Du should see those mountains. Who knew giant rocks can be so... Beautiful.

Uhhhh.. Anyway.

onto the story.

not sure what to say.

I got kinda lazy and skinned though much of it.

But. Hey.

No sex.. As far as I could tell.

I'm getting tired of having to read though all these stupid over the oben, nach oben sex scenes. It's bad enough Sparatcus dose it.

but hey. I would STILL be the one recommending Sparatcus. It's focused directly on giving over the oben, nach oben battle sequences, while ripping off 300 styles of fighting. The black messager who Leonardis dramatically kicks down the well after saying the know world famish quote, has one of the best roles of Sparatucus.

But still. What wracked out time zone back then. Blood and murder was something of great enjoyment and practically legal, nudity is found everywhere Du go (in one episode a nude woman is used as a tabelle for food). And slavery is all the rage.

Game of Thrones is much the same. Murder comes easy back then, Du feel little regret towards your actions, because it's all people did back then. Kinda like the purge. Only, it's EVERY FUCKIN DAY! And not just the one occasion. But hey. Why would Du 'want' to kill. Shit! I would just steal flat screens, and hijack sports cars. The gun won't even be loaded, it'll just be for intimidating porposes, like in Kick arsch 2.

No wonder people only lived up to their 30's oder something.

But back to the story.

what can I say.

its a 'feel good' story for the most part.

Classic Liebe story.

Those are usually enjoyable in terms of Alpha and Omega fanfics.

Not sure if I have anything worse mentioning about the story. I will probably reread it at some point.

But all in all.

Thumbs up to the writer.

well. Till Weiter time.

ConnorNoiles/Canada24
Hey this is the first of i hope to be many chapters which i would like to post 1 a Tag and maybe 2 on weekends

one Tag on thursday in the middle of april i was walking along minding my own stuff when suddenly a car came flying out of no were and nearly hit me but bearly missing me i stood there speechless and then about 3 cop cars came out of the same spot the other car did and trampled me crushing every bone in my body blacking out i had died

unknown time later

i woke up feeling like 3 cars trampled me (which they did)bearly able to Bewegen i just lay there till i felt something lift me up onto its back and carry me off somewhere to weak to fight back i just stayed still and let what ever it was carry me to where ever it was going
Guys please enjoy it took me two hours to do this and this is based on what ive been through not the wolf parts but the story and for full effect for the story listen to Lucy. Bur skillet.


When Nathan woke up he remembered he was far from Home but didn't care all he knew was his life was a lie and when he was human he had his parents as a wolf he had kaitlyn now he has no one just himself. he wanted something to happen. A bär passed him nothing same as hunters.
he wanted anything but all he got was the pack finding him. After three days. " shadow we found Du are Du okay " Kate asked starting...
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verse 1:
i realised
i missed a day
electirc shock turned my head away
i then thought "is there something wrong"
with my burnin face
why the heck cant i feel the pace

bridge:
dont want to find out
just want to get out!

chorus:
tesla shock
tesla shocked
ive really been tesla shocked
ooooo tesla shocked
ow! shock me!

verse 2:
the lightning bolt
the shocked my mind
so sad i was to leave it behind
but my eyes had turned black as coal
im now Lost in a deep shock hole

bridge:
dont want to find out
just want to get out!

chorus:
tesla shock
tesla shocked
ive really been tesla shocked
ooooo tesla shocked
ow! shock me!

bridge 2:
circuitry
along configuration
shocking this
territory
knocks everybody out
tesla shock
the power is what its all about!

Solo

chorus:
tesla shock
tesla shocked
ive really been tesla shocked
ooooo tesla shocked
ow! shock me!
Hey guys, this is Brandt. I decided to do my own story apart from Wolfman32's(Grady's) original Life with Rose story.

Brandt's POV

The sun had just begin its rise as night turned into morning. I blinked at the sudden brightness that reached my on oben, nach oben of my cave den, I hadn't been able to sleep very well but that was a common occurrence these days. Four weeks. It had been four weeks since I had left Garth's pack; as well as my Friends Grady, Coy, Rose, and Star. It had been a personal decision of mine that I needed something Mehr than just taking orders as an omega.

I watched a beautiful light...
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PPSH-41
A mortar exploded in front of the boot and water from the channel sprayed up and into the boot and soaked the troops in front. and all at once it hit me......we were at war. the boot rowers plowed the boot right into the river bank and everyone jolted forward. the drop door slammed down into the sand and all the troops piled out onto the waste land of bodies that was the river shore. Many of the troops in the front were mowed down Von machine gun feuer coming from the buildings. Reznov, Demetri, and I all found a trench and hid there for a Minute to get a grip on the situation. we happened to...
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it is 1968 Humphrey and Sergio just left Gloria after the most bloodiest battle at the base.
Today they were at pleiku airbase waiting for the New guys to arrive then A c141 starlifter landed with the recruits with a Marine major Major cesar Robles (wolfman577) He was now in command of Sergio's Platoon (including Humphrey's).

Sergio'S pov
right when we left pleiku a c123 proivder blows ,then the control tower blows up, then a line of hueys blow up one Von one we all pull out our m16s,M60's,and Stoner lmg's and we drove off to saigon when we got there there were dead bodies on the floor with their...
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The third howl. Humphrey got up and ran faster than he ever had before to the alpha station.

"Whats the matter is someone hurt?!" Humphrey sagte painting.

He looked at the other alphas but did not see Kate. The others looked in shock.

"Where's Kate?!"

"Humphrey, Kate didn't make it, a hunter snuck up on them and killed her." Winston said.

Humphrey froze, he felt like a statue of glass that had been broken into a million pieces.

"No." Was all Humphrey could say.

Winston nodded.

Humphrey looked at thw only alpha that looked like it could speak.

"What happened?" Humphrey sagte with his eyes still huge from the suprise.

"Kate was shot Von a hunter in gras, grass behind her, we chased the hunter off but it was too late. She told me to tell Du to give all of your Liebe that Du gave to her to someone else. AKA, find someone else."
To help get into the Weihnachten spirit. There will be Mehr after this.


Kate: Deck the halls with boughs of holly,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Tis the season to be jolly,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.

Kate: Don we now our gay apparel,
Fa la la, la la la, la la la.
Troll the ancient Yule tide carol,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.

Kate: See the blazing Yule before us,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Strike the harp and Mitmachen the chorus.
Fa la la la la, la la la la.

Kate: Follow me in merry measure,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
While I tell of Yule tide treasure,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.

Kate: Fast away the old Jahr passes,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Hail the new, ye lads and lasses,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.

Kate: Sing we joyous, all together,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.
Heedless of the wind and weather,
Fa la la la la, la la la la.

What'd Du Wölfe think?
Note: This is not made up, and I Am NOT FUCKING with Du people!

Lilly: located In Boston Massachusetts on 12/4/11
How she was located:
Yesterday when I was in Boston, Massachussetts I was in a huge building with like a hundred different resterants all smushed togeather. It was soo crowded... then I saw a dog. IT was... it looked to be... Lilly in real life! I was about to pet her but a sample man hollered to me to try a sample so i glanced at him, then back at Lilly and she was faaarrrr away! Damm I should have taken a pic of her.
She was found only on that datum Von my knowledge
posted by TheOneTruekate
Demon Chapter 1: Desire to Kill



I was always misunderstood. Left out, ignored. As I walked out of my den, two Alphas were hanging around. The bigger one, Jett yelled out, "Hey look! Its that freak alpha Seth!" His friend Storm said, "Yeah!" and they laughed. I ignored them and walked away into the forest. Voices ran around in my head. "He's sp different! That freak! He doesnt have friends! He's dangerous! Dont go near him!.." All those words, are true. I'm a monster. I cant control myself, its very hard to try and hold it in. I cant go one Tag without killing something...or even someone. In...
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VERSE 1:
see the dark black wings in the night
and the death she brings through the light
she belongs in hell and its fires
sound the dying bell, job for hire

VERSE 2:
see her cut your throat
were your soul as a coat
this is when Du die
take Du for a ride, time to fly!!!!

chorus:
the angel!
who takes the dark
and puts out your spark
and you
DIE!
angel...of.....darkness!

BRIDGE:
the dark!!!!
the look in her killing eyes
savage fear in Du will rise
the kill of the angel!

VERSE 3:
see her dark black wings in the sky
they shake your blood and then Du die
feathers sharp and in your face
she can put Du in your place...
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posted by snazzywolve53
Autor note: this is how Jakob gets in the story. Its written from his point of veiw. Zmanz is jakob in the story. thats not his name and he isn't gay, just so Du know. This will be a very short chapter.

I was still on the stupid bus. Now that Dillon got off the asshole (Tony) was bugging the shit out of me! Finally after the one millionth mom, joke, and calling me gay, i got off the buss, and he chased after me! Shitt, Tony is too fast! I doged trees and ran into the forest, and he trapped me in a cave! He was about to tackle me and kill me when i fell in a tiny ditch, and it was bottomless! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Thud! he hit ground and passed out.
posted by Hybred98
Alright, before i get sing this song is about scar and humphreyalpha, i was a complet dick to colby so i want to make it up to him.

Hybred:
bury all youre secrets in my skin, come away with innocence, and leave me with my sins, the air around me still feels like a cage.
Love is just a camouflage for what resembles rage.
So if Du Liebe me then let me go, and run away before i know, my herz is just to dark to care, i cant destroy whats in there.
Deliver me to my fate, if im alone i can not hate, i dont desreve to have you, my smile was taken long ago, if i can change i hope ill never know.
I still...
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Morning had never seemed quite so hopeful before. The packs had merged after a relatively bloodless battle between the packs. Garth's Father, ever the traditionalist, decreed to his pack the the mating of Garth and Lily would serve as an acceptable marriage to solidify the merger. It came as no surprise that neither of them had voiced a complaint at the idea, with Lily all but bubbling with delight and Garth grinning like an idiot during the announcement. The cheers, followed Von the Moon Light Howl including all members of the newly formed pack followed the all around cheerful mood following...
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I woke up in a strange haze with Hank,Jonathan,Lily,Ashely,Buddy. But something was wrong it was the night me and Lily almost didn't marry her. The story is this I went out with a freind when I got back lily walked out with her mom and dad and said"so u leave me to go be with freinds eh?" I replied to her"I have been with u 2 months straight I need to talk to the guys""yea okay" she said. I slapped her in the face and she started to cry I stood their in shock with what I did. She ran off and i yelled to her "Lily....Lily come back I'm sorry" while we watched the past unfold I remember something...
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Humphrey was driving away from the motel and he pulled out salteys address and he carried kate inside and the slept in the spare bedroom. ~Next morning~ Humphrey was listen to the radio on his MP3: Do Du have the time
To listen to me whine
About nothing and everything
All at once
I am one of those
Melodramatic fools
Neurotic to the bone
No doubt about it

Sometimes I give myself the creeps
Sometimes my mind plays tricks on me
It all keeps adding up
I think I'm cracking up
Am I just paranoid?
Am I just stoned?

I went to a shrink
To analyze my dreams
She says it's lack of sex
That's bringing me down
I went to...
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posted by REDWolfleader
In the morning, she was still sleeping Weiter to me.I changed my clothes and got my hiking gear on.
"What are Du doing?"Kaila asked sleepily
"I told Du I was going on a hike,so come on."
"Ok"
After a few Minuten we came upon a valley,
"Is that your pack?"
"Yes!"she sagte running down the slope,
"Gotta Liebe excitement."I laughed to myself running down the slope also.I stopped Von a big baum and set my stuff down.I saw all the Wölfe in the valley running toward us. I then took an at-ease pose.Three Wölfe decided to try to kill me but with the amount of adrenaline in my blood they couldn't catch me....
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posted by Red_Pyramid206
This ones a little sad...

Chris' point of view now

Katie and I woke up to another beautiful Tag and to my beautiful girl. Damn, I would go crazy if something happened to her. Little did I know, I was in for a crazy day. "Morning hun." Katie said, Küssen me. "Did Du like my new moves last night?" I then remembered. I forgot Wölfe have that "scent" down there that makes the guys 'big'. Damn, Katie's was good. Where did she learn 69 too? I sat up and stretched. "Yeah, Du were awesome last night." I said, Küssen her. "Hey, I'm going to shower, Du wanna Mitmachen me?" Katie said. I nodded. I opened...
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*I wake up in the lodge wondering what happened last night*
“Hello apfel, apple Inc at the door”a person says
I Freeze terrified because I was a wolf not human if they seen me…Death!
“We need to talk about your ipawds 2”the man outside says
*I hold my breath thinking im going to get killed as I open the door*
“what the? A wolf is in a lodge”the man from apfel, apple inc says
*I Trotted up to the Wolfbook*
“Very unique Macbook Upgrade to…Wolfbook?!”he says
*I Zeigen him a powerpoint explaining about everything about the ipawds and wolfbook’s and that I made it*
*He turns his back thinking*
“ok...
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Devil's roar part 2: Futuristic brothers.

The squad monitors padded towards a huge rectangular computer screen. The monitor's job was to monitor the safety, and health of all Devil's roar squads. The screens were divided into eight bars. Each had eight circular segments, all seperated Von a centimeter and glowing blue. Each one was the signal of a squad member... WHen one was empty and flashed red, that member was dead. ANything else, the member was live and ready. The status of the squads and batlle being fought, was on the oben, nach oben left corner of the screen. ALso, the squad leader's name was displayed...
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