Woooowwww.....Great storyyyyy.......<3<3<3<3<3

OMG I ACTUALLY DREAMT THAT ONCE! D: EXCEPT THE KID WASNT NAMED MICHAEL XD

But it was great! But please, use some spaces? :3 It hurts my eyes and i keep losing track on what line im on xD

Haha Helene :P Know were you are going through XD But I really liked your story :D:D

"uuuu i wanna marry you" (even i just met you)

hmmmh...what?

alexandra_ hmm the story is quite good but I think that the storyline goes too fast...
First, Alex has said that he doesn't crush on somebody very easily and second, everything happens so quickly... :)

alexandra you need a BETA :D

Great story! really
Rosel_15 : ohh please!! her story is great and you are always
not satisfied! Can you stop plss?
thnx (:

A Beta is one who reads through your story before you publish it, and tell you what to change

your story is ok

we can understand what you want to write in your story

so why is everybody complaining about others story
i couldn't write a story
because my english isnt that good
if it wasn't fast then she could write a book because it would be very long

alexnadra_ i liked your story