Helden des Olymp The Ruins of Rome

LeosGirl posted on Jul 24, 2012 at 11:13PM
Authors: LeosGirl and Book-worm

Summary: The demigods are back! The Greeks are coming to meet the Romans but will they work together or fight against each other? Each demigod has their own problem:
Has Percy moved on from Annabeth?
Is Piper going to lose Jason to Reyna?
Is Reyna going to choose Jason, Percy, or neither?
Is Leo really Sammy?
Does Hazel still love Frank or is she going to fall in love with Leo?
And Gaea. The worst of all.
Is Rome going to prosper? Or is it going to crash and burn as we know it? Are we looking at the ruins of Rome?
There's only one way to find out:
Read on!

Characters: Percy, Annabeth, Grover, Jason, Piper, Leo, Reyna, Connor, Travis, Clarisse, Chris, Thalia, Octavian, Frank, Hazel, Rachel, the Camp Counselors, and more.

Disclaimer- Unfortunately for book-work and LeosGirl they don't own this story or the characters, Rick Riordan does): But we do own the plot and some ideas of the story and it makes up for it!

CHAPTER I
ANNABETH


An hour. That's how long I have till I find out if he loves me or not. Even with ADHD the hour doesn't move fast enough. Part of me says he still loves me and can't wait to see him, but the other part of me says that he's forgotten you and you should just get off this mother-ship.
Shut up. I told it.
He loves me. He's gotta remember me...right?
Stop it, I told myself, Thinking like that will-will just break your heart.
Thankfully, Piper walked up.
"You okay?" she asked.
"Honestly, no. I'm about to find out if Percy even remembers me, let alone love me."
Piper nodded.
"I'm sure he-" she started, but she was cut-off by a metal-on-metal screech coming from the engine room.
Leo ran out of the room, that was pouring out smoke.
He was covered in oil and soot. His eyes were red from the smoke. He was coughing and cussing up a storm. To sum it up, he looked like crap.
"Hey, Repair Boy! Shouldn't you be doing your job?!" shouted Piper
"Shouldn't you shut up, Beauty Queen?!" he shouted back.
"What's wrong?" I asked, trying not to inhale smoke.
"Some-" started Leo
"Language!" shouted Rachel
"person," Leo said, glaring at Rachel, "threw a lug wrench in the engine! The lug wrench stopped some gears, the radiator is about to drop and-"
"English!" everyone yelled.
"We're gonna crash!" yelled Leo, "Is that clear enough for ya?!"
"Everyone, grab on to something!" shouted Grover
"Listen to the goat!" shouted Piper
"SSSAAATTTYYYRRR!!!" he shouted as the ship made a steep dive to the ground.
"What in the name of Hades is that?!" shouted Leo
"It's an-" started Jason
"AQUADUCT!" I yelled.
SPLOOSH!
When I came to, I was sprawled on the ground and soaking wet.
Great, another thing to remind me of Percy! I thought
I looked around.
Everyone was the same way.
I tried to get up, but I immediately fell back down. A burning pain started in my ankle and went up my left leg.
Rachel saw.
"Medic!" she called.
Next thing I knew, I was on a stretcher.
"Yup, you sprained it, sweetheart." said an Apollo kid.
I kicked him. With my right leg, of course.
"Oow!" he shouted
"Sorry, sweetheart." I said through clenched teeth.
"Point taken." he grumbled.
"Well, welcome to Camp Jupiter!" said Jason
"Has anyone seen Grover?" I asked
"Found 'em!" said Travis as he threw Grover onto the ground.
"Food!" Grover bleated, coming to.
Piper handed me a set of crutches.
I got up, it hurt, but not as much as missing Percy.
Then I heard it.
A Hunter's horn.
A group of girls ran in. They were wearing white and silver hunting parkas and had their bows drawn. Multiple wolves ran beside them.
The Hunters of Artemis. Thank gods.
A punk rock-looking girl walked up to me with a beautiful white wolf beside her.
Thalia.
"What happened to you?" she asked
"Crashed. Aquaduct. Ankle. Pain." I tried to say while wincing from the pain.
She seemed to understand.
"Dang." was all she said.
"Come on," said Jason, "I wunna show you guys my home."
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When I saw it, my heart stopped for a couple of seconds.
Oh man, the architecture was beautiful!
It took me a minute to see the thousands of Roman soldiers, waiting for the order to kill us or not.
A scrawny, white boy walked up, I knew him from Jason's stories.
Octavian.
He glared at me.
I gave it right back to him.
"Kill them while you can! There Greeks!" he shouted.
"No! They are friends, not enemies!"
I knew that voice.
And there he was.
He looked stronger. His black hair gleamed in the sun, his sea-green eyes sparkled, he flashed me his best 'I'm a trouble maker' smile.
Like the Wise Girl I am, I stood there, gaping like an idiot.
"Well, Wise Girl?" he said opening his arms.
I through down my crutches and ran for him.
I didn't even feel the pain.
All I felt was happiness to see his beautiful face again.
He wrapped his arms around me.
I sighed.
Percy!
It was really Percy!
I didn't want to let go for fear of losing him again.
He pushed me away and then kissed me.
Oh, how I missed that.
I didn't want to, but we broke apart.
"Oh, Seaweed Brain! I missed you SO much! All I could think about was-what are you wearing?!" I said, just noticing his new clothes.
He blushed.
Adorable, I thought.
"Ummm, it's a toga." was all he said.
I laughed.
A girl with long black hair and a warrior-like quality cleared her throat.
She had a weird look in her eye.
Annoyed? No. It was more like- more like jealousy.
"Sorry," Percy said "Reyna, this is Annabeth. Annabeth, this is Reyna."
The girl, named Reyna, softened at Percy's words. She liked him, and I had no doubt that she wouldn't fight for him, but that's okay because if she wants a fight, I'll give her a fight.
I DON'T THINK SO!, I thought.
He's mine!
I held out my hand.
"Hi, Reyna. I'm Annabeth, Percy's girlfriend." I said
She tried to intimidate me by squeezing my hand, hard.
It didn't work.
"Hi, Annabeth, I am Reyna, praetor of Camp Jupiter and Percy's colleague."
She's going down, I thought.
She glared at me.
I glared right back.
"Okkaayy," said Percy breaking us apart, "Why don't you go see Jason, Reyna?"
Reyna softened, again.
Another guy she can't have.
She left to go find Jason.
"Let's go for a walk." said Percy.
We talked forever.
He told me about what had happened the 8 months he was gone.
How terrible. I thought.
I told him about everything that happened up till now.
He looked worried.
"What is it?" I asked.
"Nothing." he said.
He was so faking.
"Percy...?" I asked, sternly.
"It's just...how would a lug wrench get in the engine?" he asked, suspicious.
"Somebody probably just dropped it." I said, trying to keep my voice from wavering.
I was worried now, too.
"I don't know, Annabeth. Sounds weird to me." he said, shaking his head.
"What do you mean?" I asked.
But I knew what he meant.
It wasn't just an accident.
The Argo II was sabotaged.

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Vor mehr als einem Jahr IStandCorrected said…
big smile
300TH COMMENT!!!!!!!!()
Vor mehr als einem Jahr IStandCorrected said…
big smile
NEW PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr IStandCorrected said…
surprise
@kkw he threaten to kill you!?!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
@ISC LoL
Go to page 9
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Heritage112 said…
blush
@ Lordchaos: didnt u say u where 13???
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
^ik thats what I wanna know...
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Heritage112 said…
big smile
hmmmmmm we have a mystery "TELL ME WHAT YOU KNOW CHAOS'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hOPEFULLY THAT DOES NOT OFFEND HIM/HER/OTHER!!!!!!!!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
I'm a he and that age is fake and I'm too tired to change it!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Heritage112 said…
wink
oh ok thank god I thought you were an other ( alien) from another plant PPHHEEWW I was wrong thank god
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
^^oh. Glad thats cleared up.
^ wow. Really? Aliens? LOL
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
Wow you people are simple minded!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Heritage112 said…
smile
Is that a compliment or an insult I no no which 1 so yeah and ur probs in year 7 right?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
I already finished year 7. And now that wasn't an insult nor was it a compliment. Tell me who's the smartest here?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Heritage112 said…
big smile
Me im in year 8 so yeah Im smarter
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
Tell me. Is the future actually the future?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
Youre both smart.
End of discussion.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
Nope! Tell me is the future really the future?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Heritage112 said…
rainy
1. The indefinite time yet to come: will try to do better in the future.
2. Something that will happen in time to come: "The future comes apace" (Shakespeare).
3. A prospective or expected condition, especially one considered with regard to growth, advancement, or development: a business with no future.
4. futures Business Commodities or stocks bought or sold upon agreement of delivery in time to come.
5. Grammar
a. The form of a verb used in speaking of action that has not yet occurred or of states not yet in existence.
b. A verb form in the future tense.
adj.
That is to be or to come; of or existing in later time.


So in a way yes and no I can say that what ill be doing in an hour is the future, but once that hour passes, then its the past, because the future is something that has not happened yet









HAPPY NOW!!!!!!!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
No. My thoery proposes that the future is the present cause we don't know what the future holds in store for us, and when we do know it would already be the present!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Heritage112 said…
blush
I think mines better
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
Nope. I sent my theory to Stephen Hawking, it had many flaws that I corrected
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Heritage112 said…
angry
so? I care about this WHY?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr fireyes said…
cake
@ISC,so you like minecraft? Cuz really its great I don't have the Pc vrison but I have the Xbox one.
@Heritage112,happy b-day!!! Here's some cake and cookies! (::) (::) (::) (::) (::)
Vor mehr als einem Jahr jberagon17 said…
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
*rolls eyes*
A theory doesnt make it true and good job on that, but are we really having this arguement?

Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
mischievous
Yes, yes we are.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr book-worm said…
Haha you guys crack me up!!!!! But you confuse me to! I thought I knew what you guys were talking about until I read what heritage had then I got all confused O.o
Anyways heres your chappie!

Chapter 6 
Chapter VI  
PERCY 

When I was looking for Annabeth I walked past the Field of Mars and you would not believe what I saw. 
I saw Connor spying on Reyna. 
I had forgotten he like her. 
I snuck up behind him. 
"What'cha looking at?" I said really loudly. 
He jumped. 
"Um....looking for Travis." he said. 
"Look here he comes!" I said and pointed to where Travis was walking up with an arm around Katie. 
"Hey Connor, hey Percy." said Travis 
"Hey Travis," I said "Hey Katie." 
She waved hello. 
"What are you looking at Connor?" asked Travis "Um....nothing" lied Connor
"Uh huh." like me, he didn't believe him. 
He looked through the bushes by where Connor was spying Reyna. 
"Oh." said Travis with a sly smile when he saw Reyna. "Dude why don't you just asks her out?" I asked him. 
"Who?" asked Katie. 
"Connor has a crush on Reyna." said Travis. 
"Dude!" exclaimed Connor "Not cool!"  
"Percy is right," said Katie "just ask her out. She'll say yes."  
"How do you know?" asked Connor suspiciously. 
"Because I'm a girl, and if I was her I'd say yes."  
"Maybe," Connor finally said "I'll think about it"  
"Okay, see you later guys, I gotta go find Annabeth." I replied. 
 Annabeth was still mad  after this morning when I called her jealous, so I had to think. 
Okay, Percy, I thought How can you make Annabeth not mad at you anymore, and hook Connor up with Reyna? 
Then, I got an idea so genius, you would've thought Athena herself came up with it.  

Two hours later, my plan was going into play. 
And what is my genius plan? 
Easy: 
A double date.  
So simple, so easy, so genius that no one would even suspect that it was a plan.  
I was feeling pretty good about myself when all of the sudden my dreams came crashing down. 
"No." said Connor 
"Please?!?" I asked him "I need a way to make things between Annabeth and me cool again, and if we went on a single date there would be too many awkward silences! Please Connor?" 
He sat there for a while, thinking things over 
"Fine," he said "But only this once!!!" 
"Thanks man! Now you go ask Reyna and I'll go ask Annabeth" 
He glared at me for a second and then said "I'm gonna get you for this Percy!" 
But I wasn't scared. 
I could get protection from his brother. They always do their pranks together. 
They tried doing them apart once, to prank each other and...well, lets just say it didn't work out very well. 


On my was to look for Annabeth, I ran into that one new kid...What's his name? Oh yeah, Leo. 
"Hey Leo!" I called out. 
He turned to look at me "Oh! Hey, Percy! What's up?" 
We started walking towards each other. 
"Looking for Annabeth. Have you seen her?" 
"Nope, but Jason or Piper might have, if you want to ask them." he said 
"Okay. Do you know where they are?"  
"Yeah, they're aboard the Argo ll." 
"Okay, thanks!" 
"No problem" he said "Oh, forgot to mention, be careful when you're looking for Piper and Jason, you might walk in on one of their make out parties." 
I laughed. 
"Thanks for the warning!" 
"No problem, and don't forget, Piper's a charm speaker. She can make you do some crazy stuff. Trust me, I speak from experience!" 
I laughed again. 
"I know where your coming from, I had a few bad experiences with Drew. Lets just say shes lucky Annabeth didn't kill her." 
Leo laughed at that image and I did too. 
Annabeth fighting Drew was one of the highlights of last summer, after the war was over. 
"Well see ya!" I said 
"Yeah, see you later!"  


When I got to the Argo ll, I set out to find Jason and Piper. 
It wasn't very hard, I heard them in the middle of a screaming match. 
"I TOLD YOU THERE IS NOTHING GOING ON BETWEEN ME AND REYNA!" said Jason 
"THEN PROVE IT!" yelled Piper. 
I walked into the room just in time to see Jason go in for a kiss. 
I let them hold it for a second then cleared my throat. 
They looked at me, embarrassed. 
"That may be the most entertaining thing I've seen all day!" I said with a bit of smugness in my voice. "It's like you guys are a soap opera or something." I said while trying not to laugh. 
Piper started to glare at me. 
Finally I couldn't help it. 
I started laughing. 
Piper stared at me for a second then said "I wouldn't be laughing Percy, I'm a charm speaker." she said it kinda proud like. 
"You know, I've gotten really good at resisting charm speak." I said 
"Oh, really?" asked Jason with a bit of wonder in his voice. They shared a glance and I quickly focused on the wall behind them. 
I discovered that if you don't pay attention to what the charm speaker is saying then you can resist it. 
"Percy, punch yourself in the stomach." 
At least, that's what I think she said. 
I'm really good at tuning people out after my first year at Goode. 
I looked at Jason's face, he looked impressed. 
Piper looked flustered. 
I think she really layered on the charm speak for that one. "Before this gets out of hand, do you guys know where Annabeth is?" I asked 
"I think she went down to New Rome to look at the architecture." said Jason 
"Thanks." I said 
"Anytime." he said and waved good bye. 
"See you guys later." I said, then I saw the glare Piper was giving Jason.
Or maybe I'll just see Piper!, I thought as I walked away.  

When I got to New Rome, I started to look for Annabeth. 
I found her by the forum. 
I walked up behind her and put my arms around her and turned her around then trapped her in a hug. I smiled. 
"Hi!" I said 
"Hello." she said. 
I frowned, then I smiled again. 
She probably was thinking I was bi-polar. 
"So, I have an idea. Why don't you and I go on a double date tonight?" I asked 
"With who?" she said. 
I could hear the curiosity in her voice. 
"Connor." I said vaguely. 
"And?" she pressed. 
"Well, it depends who he asks." I said 
"Who do you think he will ask?" she said 
"Probably Reyna" I said. 
For some reason I thought she would get mad, but she didn't. 
She actually seemed kind of excited that Reyna was coming. 
Weird. 
"Okay!" she exclaimed "Where we're you planning on going?" she asked 
"I was thinking the beach. There's this nice little ice cream shop right there and then we could watch the sunset." "Sounds good," she said "Did you tell Connor that?" "Uh....no I don't believe I did. Is that a bad thing?" I wondered out loud. 
"Maybe." said Annabeth. 
"Alrighty then!" I said as I took her hand. 
"Should we go find Connor and tell him or walk around New Rome?" I asked. 
She weighed the possibilities in her head. 
"I like the New Rome idea better." she said. 
"Me too." I said and we walked off.  


A couple hours later, I went to go talk to Connor to see if he asked Reyna. 
"Yep." he said. 
"Really?" I asked, I didn't think the kid had it in him 
"Yep" 
"Okay good," I said "Then I need to talk to her." 
"Okay, have fun with that." he said then he walked off. 
I asked a few people then headed off the praetor houses to see Reyna.  
I knocked on her door. 
I heard her ask who it was and I said it was Percy. 
She opened the door and yanked me inside. 
"Whoa!" I said 
"Sorry, I don't usually let people in." she said 
"It's cool, it's cool." I said "So about tonight," I started 
"Who is going to watch the camp while we're gone?" she asked me. 
"I was thinking we could ask Jason to. The people already know him and he's a good fighter, I figured he would be our best bet." I said 
"Good idea, did you talk to him about it yet?" 
"That's why I came to see you, I didn't want to go ask him by myself so I thought, maybe, you could come with me?" I asked 
"Sure, do you want to go now?" she asked 
"Sure, why not?" 
We left the praetor house and started walking to the Argo ll. When we got there I yelled loudly "JASON!!! WE NEED TO TALK TO YOU!!!" 
I figured if the guy was making out with Piper, he would appreciate the warning. 
He came out from what I assumed was the kitchen with a sandwich in hand, "What's up?" he asked. 
"We need you to watch the camp tonight." said Reyna. 
I felt like we were asking him to babysit or something. 
"Why?" he asked suspiciously. 
"We're going into town." was all I said. 
He looked like he wanted to ask more questions but didn't. "Okay," he said "Is that all?" 
"Yes." said Reyna 
"Well, actually" I said kind of slowly, "We need to discuss this praetor deal-" 
"We can discuss it later," said Jason "Let's just figure out this quest first okay?" 
"Sounds good, thanks." 
"Oh and Percy?" 
I turned around. 
"Yeah?" 
Thanks," he said "For protecting my camp while I was gone..." 
"No problem, thanks for protecting mine." I said 
"It wasn't that hard, Camp Half-blood can take care of its self. They're good warriors, all of them. Besides its not like they had any major battles while you were gone, not like here." he said. 
I nodded. 
"Still, thanks, for being there for them." I said. 
He nodded. 
"Your a good guy Jason, I want us to be friends" I stuck out my hand. 
"Yeah same for you." he shook my hand and Reyna and I left while Jason went back to his sandwich.  
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Around 8:30 that night, after evening mess, we left camp in the hands of Jason and went off into the big bad world. 
We all had our weapons on us just in case. 
As we left the city boarder and went pass Terminus, we watched the valley disappear. 
"Well alright, you guys ready to have some fun?" I asked, Reyna smiled Connor whooped and Annabeth just laughed. 
I took her hand and lead them to this ice cream shop I saw when I was going on the quest with Hazel and Frank. 
I asked them about it later and neither of them knew so I decided to find out. 
We walked inside and immediately I was attacked by the smell of candy and sugar. 
We went up to order and decided to get what they called "The Tub". 
Its a sink full of tons of ice cream and toppings. 
We ordered one of those and went to go sit down. 
"So..." I said "How have things been at Camp Half-Blood?" "Pretty good," said Annabeth, "We have more campers then we know what to do with and were running out of space to put them all. The Athena cabin has been working on designing a new wing of cabins and rooms to put them all." "Another one?" I asked incredulously 
"Mhmm. The flow of campers coming in has slowed down a little bit though, so hopefully we will have enough to build it before we have a problem." she finished 
"Wow." I said "That's insane! I can't believe I've been gone long enough for that to happen." 
I started to feel sad inside but I didn't show it. 
"How is my mom?" I asked 
"Shes really good. She is almost done with her novel and hopes to send it out to a publisher by the end of the month." said Annabeth 
"How is Chiron?" I asked
"Chiron?" asked Reyna 
"He's our trainer at Camp Half-Blood." explained Connor. "Oh." she said 
"He is also a centaur." I said. 
I saw her tense. 
"Not all centaurs are bad," I said "Especially the Party Ponies." 
"He's been pretty good. He's been worried about you, we all have. Even Mr. D even though he won't admit it." 
I felt bad, I didn't think about how worried everyone would be. 
"Who's Mr. D?" asked Reyna 
"Dionysus. He's the camp director." I said 
"You have a god as a camp director?" she asked incredulously 
"Yep," I said popping the "p". 
I couldn't believe I was about to ask my girlfriend this, but I had to know, "And....how is....Rachel?" I asked Annabeth. She actually didn't get a sour expression or a sour tone. "She's awesome. She is getting used to the whole oracle thing while at prep school and showed up at camp about a month ago." 
"Who's Rachel?" asked Reyna 
"Our oracle." 
She didn't seem to believe us. 
"No, really who is she?" 
"Our oracle," I said again "Why didn't she come?" I asked "Chiron didn't want her to spout a prophecy in front of the Romans. He thought it would just creep them out. Jason agreed he thought the Romans might attack her. Rachel didn't take the news of being left behind very well." Connor said 
I thought I saw something out of the corner of my eye. 
I nudged Annabeth and turned slowly to look and see what was there. 
What I saw, absolutely terrified me. 
It was Kelly the empousa. 
"Hey Annabeth?" I whispered 
"Yeah?" she whispered back 
"Didn't I just barely kill her last summer?" 
"I think so." 
"Great, thanks." 
I nudged Connor and Reyna under the table and gestured towards Kelly. 
"Oh great" I heard Connor grumble. 
"o 
"Okay, let's split up and take her from all sides. There's no way she can take on all four of us." said Annabeth 
"Yeah, but she and three others can." I said. 
Just as I said this, 3 other empousa walked in and sat with Kelly. 
"Percy!" Annabeth said accusingly, then punched my arm. "What?!" 
"You have the worst luck ever!" 
"You think I don't know that?!" 
"Okay guys, let's stay calm." said Reyna "Let's just all take one okay?" 
"I'll take Kelly." I said 
"I'll take the one on Kelly's left." said Annabeth 
"I'll take the one on Kelly's right" said Conner 
"I guess that means I'll take the last one." said Reyna 
"Good luck guys!" I whispered, then left the booth where we were sitting and headed towards Kelly. 
She heard me coming and stood up to meet me. 


"Well," she said "I haven't seen you in a while." 
"Same here." I said as I put my hand on Riptide. 
I didn't pull it out yet. 
"How have you been?" she asked with fake interest. 
"I'm still alive. I consider that to be a good sign." I said "How've you been?" I asked. 
We started to circle each other. 
"Same." she said "Come now Percy, we both know we're just toying with each other. Let's just get this over with." she said "I couldn't agree more" I said as I pulled out Riptide and the second I pulled it out, I made a slash towards Kelly. 
All I managed was a cut on the arm. 
She hissed. 
"You've gotten faster." she said through clenched teeth "Either that, or you've gotten slower," I said as I made another attack. 
I heard the others fighting behind me. 
I slashed at her while avoiding her hits. 
The fighting behind me stopped, so I figured the others had killed their empousa. 
This just made Kelly mad. 
She attacked with renewed force and so did I. 
I don't know how long we fought but I let my instincts take over and the next thing I knew, Kelly was gone and I was scratched up and bruised. 
I turned around and the others were fine. 
Annabeth and Connor looked confused. 
"What happened to your Achilles curse?" asked Connor 
"I lost it when I crossed the Little Tiber into camp, it's a Greek blessing so it couldn't last on Roman soil." I explained Annabeth punched me, again. 
"Ow!" I said. 
She had hit me right on a cut. 
Connor pulled some nectar out of his jacket and poured it on my cuts. 
"What was that for?" I asked 
"For not telling me you lost your curse!" said Annabeth 
"Well we haven't had much time to talk." I said 
"Maybe we should fix that!" she said as she took my hand. 
I stared into her eyes for a second, and then said "Come one, let's go back before someone else from our past attacks us." 
And with that we left the ice cream parlor and headed back to camp.  
   


 

Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
Nice nice. Okay we're near the popular conent
Vor mehr als einem Jahr book-worm said…
Do you think that one was long?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
smile
^^^^*huffs* fine. This is hopeless. Im done playing peacemaker
^^^awesome! :D
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr LORDCHAOS said…
Yes, frankly a little TOO long. Just saying. I theorized that the longer the chapter the more the fans spam!

Check this short funny phineas and ferb video!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
great post
i wish they were all this long!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
smile
@corrected: Book-worm went all out on this chappie and it was awesome!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr book-worm said…
Sorry guys I tend to ramble on about details/: I've been trying really hard not to!!!! I'll work on it!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
@book-worm I thought it was great. I like the details. I need to add more to my writing.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr book-worm said…
Haha thanks Leosgirl, but if I had the time too add in all the details I could have, it would have taken you guys forever to read it
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
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@book-worm: Lol!!!! Don't you hate it when your teacher is going on and on and on about something with so many details that when they're done your like "What were we talkin' about?" Lol!!!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr book-worm said…
@leosgirl-Haha yes!!!! I thought that's what would happen here so I was like 'okay book-worm, don't become a teacher' it's okay when teachers do it about their personal life and then they waste class time but....when its actually about school your like ugh!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
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*GASP* :O

Book-Worm and Mad Hatter are the official definition of AWSHUMNESS. :D

This page BETTER be at the TOP of the popular content list. ^.^

Oh, and happy birthday Heritage!! :D :D :D

Here is some cake!! It's FUDGE FLAVOURED! :O

*Happy Dance*

XD

~ Phoenix
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
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@book-worm: Lol!!!!! I know. Last year I had this one teacher that would literally take 30 minutes to answer a question so during class we just keep asking her questions. Lol!!!!!!

@phoenix: Thanks! Mad Hatter! Lol! I hope its on the popular list soon. And I just started reading ypur forum and it is SO AWESOME! I haven't commented on it yet cuz I'm still trying to catch up. Lol!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
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Popular Content for The Ruins of Rome!!! :D

OMG. :O

NO WAY.

You read my story?! O.O

*Faints of happiness*

XD

Thanks!! :D That just made my day!! :P

~ Phoenix

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Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
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@Phoenix: Lol!!!! Its way awesome. I love it.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
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Thanks Mad Hatter! ^.^

Your story is AWSHUM!! :D

I'm, like, OBSESSED with it!! XD

LOL. xD

~ Phoenix
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
Lol!!!! Thanks.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
@book-worm
the more details the better
thats what makes u a better writer than the rest of the people on fanpop
plz dont remove the details
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
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^^Just telling the truth :)
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
@phoenix_stone
ur welcome!
im the one who got leosgirl to read ur story when i was advertising it everywhere lol
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
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@corrected: I owe you a thank you for showing me the link. Lol!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
k lol
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
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@corrected: THANK YOU!