Hey.. mmm.. i am not a pro oder really a musician.. and i tried making a song for my girlfriend.. and i'm planning to send this, sing this on our 10th monthsary.. hehe.. i was wondering if Du could rate it? opinions? reactions? thanks!

Crazily Beautiful Impact

I.
At 3 in the afternoon
Musik starts playing with a lovely tune
Heard the bells tolling
With my best suit at the wedding
And when I glanced outside
There, I saw Du riding in a trike
Such a pretty lady – who would’ve guessed
With her bang-up sunlit dress

Pre-Chorus I:
Right there I knew
It’s you
It’s absolutely you
Rocking my herz again and again
So, yeah let’s begin

Chorus:
Du shake me up
Du fill me up
Du picked me up off the ground
And like an angel, Du flew
With me to the clouds
Du crushed the walls
Du cushioned my fall
Gone are the coldness in my heart
A brand new story’s about to start
Unafraid, stimulated, now a chance-taker
And that’s a fact
With Du in this crazily beautiful impact

II.
As our gazes locked in contact
In a teilt, split of a Sekunde Du got my herz hi-jacked
Injected your mirages in my head
Stitched the holes in me with your thread
It just seems so unreal
Sweetly enticing’s what I feel
Love’s warhead detonated
Explosive attraction now has started


Pre-Chorus II:

Disturbance spreading inside
Sadness died
Ripples out through my life
I’m falling now in ecstasy
Come on baby, fall with me

(Repeat Chorus)

Bridge:
A supernova within this dark sky
An Angel – Jäger der Finsternis descended in this existence of mine
Forever changing
My reason for living
Instantly engraving
Your name in my being
Reviving the dying Liebe in me
For Du have come finally…

(Repeat Chorus)

This crazily beautiful impact
This crazily beautiful impact
This Crazily
Beautifully
This crazily beautiful impact