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The critic game!

ok! so here it goes:
post a picture Du drew and the person below Du will give Du a critic on your art
also if you'd be so kind could Du also give me a critic id Liebe it and i will also critic Du as well
so have fun and learn!
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Liebe your artstyle. It's really unique. Great job!
msbass posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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oh thank Du so much!
smartone123 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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what do Du mean could use some work?like whats wrong?
smartone123 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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ShiraKishi said:
For this drawing,40/100? Maybe,right?
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For this drawing,40/100? Maybe,right?
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um did Du read the rules? your suppose to critic it and also post a peice Du did yourself so some else can critic it
smartone123 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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I see.Sorry
ShiraKishi posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Read your Profil wall,is written clearly there.Thanks for your feedback.
ShiraKishi posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
dontmindmeyo said:
Yours is gorgeous! I absolutely Liebe your colouring/shading style! Only thing that feels a bit off is the way the neck is bent. I don't really know how to explain it, but it's not anything major. Everything else looks awesome though.

meh
im not the best artist out there but Hey ive really improved from when i first started so i guess i'll post
yeah she's not really an Anime character but and the quality is kind of :/ but
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Yours is gorgeous! I absolutely Liebe your colouring/shading style! Only thing that feels a bit off is the way the neck is bent. I don't really know how to explain it, but it's not anything major. Everything else looks awesome though. meh im not the best artist out there but Hey ive really improved from when i first started so i guess i'll post yeah she's not really an Anime character but and the quality is kind of :/ but
posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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thank Du very much XD yours is cute the bodies proportions are good but the shoulders are abit weird and the clothes lack movement and wrinkles.Also shading would be good.work on those and it would help Du alot XD
smartone123 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
msbass said:
My drawing of Gilbert ^.^
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My drawing of Gilbert ^.^
posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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the lines are clean,the Farben are nice and the drawing is well put so nice work there.Though this isnt a original drawing its a copy right,if not then nice work and the only other thing i think it would need is fundamental shadows at the least.Overall nice work just fix the shaodw problem and experiment with your own sstyle if Du want to improve as an artist
smartone123 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Thank Du a lot for your kind critique. I understand what Du mean about the shadowing. This drawing indeed does not have the greatest shadowing but it is a lot better when seeing it on the actual paper. My scanner couldn't clearly bring out the little shadowing I had used. :/ But again thanks a lot about your kind words ^.^ And ofc I will try to improve my skills!
msbass posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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@SketchWreckThank Du so much for your kind critique; I understand about the problem with the shadowing...it was better on paper but my scanner messed it up a little, Weiter time I will make it Mehr intense...
msbass posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
SketchWreck said:
So here's mine! ^^

The one on the left is Light and the one on the right is L, both from Death Note. :))
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So here's mine! ^^ The one on the left is Light and the one on the right is L, both from Death Note. :))
posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Srry If it's too fresh. This was a fanservice drawing >/////< but still, im very proud of it and it's one of my best works. :))
SketchWreck posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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its pretty good man! the body movements have ife and the clothes have good wrinkles and the shadows are nice.I think the neck and chins is what id work on but since its Anime its forgivable.Nice work always improve man XD also i Liebe L
smartone123 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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I Liebe the movement of both Light and L~ Great job on that. Du could work a little bit Mehr on making the line work cearer. But definately the drawing is pretty good~
msbass posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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