Twilight-Serie Article: My Twilight Review

posted by Robssesed

Ok so I'm not too good at reviews but lets see what I got.

Twlight:
The start of Twilight is the Cullens hunting I think that is a gret start but what could have been another great one? Maybe one of Alices visions oder Bellas nightmare? Then Bella digging a cactus I Liebe it! I think it is something Du woud do to have a little bit of Home with Du and phil calling I Liebe Du both but we have a plane to catch sutch a typicall guy! Thenn when Bella was with charlie and they were talking about her hair growing so funny! Then when Bella hit Jake with the truck and didn't give a damn that was also funny. At school Jessica was so jaulous<- soz bout spelling. When she seen Edward in Biology Du could feel the tension from then on. The baseball scene Weiter then..... With Rose and Emm so funny and cute but when the three others come up well Du cant help but scream. Then the ballet scene soooo scary but I was so realived when Edward turned up and felt so sorry for him when he had to drink Bellas blood. The hospital was such a sweet scene. And finally PROM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 The best scene ever it was soo sweet!!

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Renn and Jakes Life: Renn's Birthday Flashback Part 1 out of Part 3

posted by WritenOnTheSand

( Some of Du who have read my Zurück chapters know that in Renn and Jake's Life Chapter 23, I mentioned events of Nessie's "17th" birthday. I decided to write a chapter on the story of that event. I hope Du like it! )

I woke up and noticed that it was still dark outside, but I didn't care. Today I, and my family would officially consider me an adult. It felt so good, that I was just jumping with excitement.

I was tired of them making decisions for me. I wanted so bad to be free, and this was my chance.

I glanced towards the window, and could see just barely the reddish tint around the edges...

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the new Begining ch5

posted by sh0rtiinedward

i didn't know what to do when i saw Jacob in front of my house, so as soon the car stop i got out but as soon he saw me he took off running to the woods, i follow him for 2 Minuten until he stop.

"I came to fix everything, Bella call me to come and talk to you, but now Du have things Mehr important" he sagte very angry and with tears in his eyes, i never saw him like this.
"Jacob I'm sorry, mom never told me anything, and nothing is Mehr important than get all thing straight up with you" i sagte to him as i try to hug him but he Bewegen right away.
"You know what Rennesme, i have to go, go and have...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. Two~ [SIX]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Two
BuffyFaithfan1
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[SIX]
    I ran inside, and the receptionist told me room 10 but to wait a few hours until the doctor told me I could visit him. I went to the waiting room and sat down. The news was on, and I listened as they talked about the Wal-Mart we just fled.
    "Thanks Tammie, it seems that a young girl and her boyfriend have went into this Wal-Mart and murdered innocent people. We have Mehr from this survivor Haus Triggsom. Haus?"
    "Thanks Jim, yea I was attacked and...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death [SIX]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
BuffyFaithfan1
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[SIX]
"By killing you."
I jumped up and started walking backwards, how could I trust Tabra if he was going to kill me!?
"What?" I asked.
"I mean, I'll call them up and bring Du to them, after they think I'm back on their side, we pull out the big Pistolen and kill them before they kill us."
OH MY GOD, BIG SIGH OF RELIEF!!! Am I right? "Oh," I sat back down and we fished out our game plan.
Two hours later, we had a good, solid plan that will work perfectly...if they buy the fact that Tabra is "back on their side". It seemed like a good plan, and even though I knew that I'd be the main subject in this little cat-and-mouse game of deadly horror, I knew it was the best thing to do.
I looked at Tabra as he asked me if I was up to doing this. I looked him in the eye, and said, "Yes, I am."

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Hello, My Name Is: Death [FIVE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
BuffyFaithfan1
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[FIVE]
"Oh my god!" I sagte and backed up into the wall.
"Don't worry! Don't worry! I'm not a member, I used to be, but I'm not anymore. Once I saw how...how evil they were, I couldn't stay. They told me all they do is bring justice among the world...and once I got there, they served themselves with murder. I couldn't stand that. I was only a member long enough to have this brand branded on me...and then I fled the place like a bat out of hell!"
I couldn't believe Tabra was a member of the Death Clan of the Fallen! I mean,...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death [TWO]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume One
BuffyFaithfan1
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[TWO]
Okay, so around a half Stunde later, my friend Tabra finally got here. I'm feeling a little bit Mehr at ease, but I'm still holding the gun when he entered.
"Are Du okay, Cydnee?" He asked me, sitting down on the couch Von my feet.
"Yea, I'm fine. Just feeling the aftershock of almost getting a messer impaled to my face." I sagte and looked at him. "How are you?"
"I'm doing good actually. But, I'm really worried for you, Cyd." He saw the gun and his eyes widened. "What are Du gonna do with that gun?"
"Use it."...

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the follow up to a beautiful death part 6

posted by xroylex

"so Du whole name is renesme? and nothing els?"
i smiled. " my name is renesmee carly cullen black but most people just call me nessie for short"
"so Du single?" eichelhäher, jay asked.i thought he was ment to be shy?
"jay Du just carnt go asking Zufällig people if there single oder not" sam mock punched his arm "but are you?"
"guys leave her alone if she dont wonna answer she doesnt have to" i gave a nervouis chuckle
"thats allright and yeah i am" i admitted as i tried to supress a sigh.
"wow really? i mea no offence but that shocks me cause your fiiiiiiine" eichelhäher, jay spaced the word out placing his hands on the...

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Renn and Micah's LIfe Chapter 3.(A Continuation of Renn and Jake's Life)

posted by WritenOnTheSand

Nessie Black

I sat at the küche counter, gazing at the ring on my finger. I'm not ready to take off the ring Jake gave me, not yet. I know if Will sees it that he will be frustrated with me, but my herz still can't let go of Jake.

It has been the hardest thing for me to make Will think I Liebe him. Kisses with no meaning, words of love, that on the inside I am taking back. It is like Jake is stuck to me. Imprinting is really powerful, because it is sure causing me physical strain.

I look over and see Micah appear. He is wearing his cute blue feety pajamas. He also has his treasured blanky in his hand....

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A Youtube Script(episode three)Dead Soon

posted by moolah

A Youtube Script:
Episode Three:
*Dead Soon*
(Jasper’s P.O.V):
*Thinking*
I never thought about how short a life span is.
And Bella’s was very short.
Mine was everlasting.
Forever.
I couldn’t be trampled.
I wished I could.
And I certainly do not blame Edward for wanting me dead.
I would want me dead too.

(Black Screen)
*Reminder: this is two days after the accident*
Alice’s P.O.V:
Bella: Ever since the accident Edward’s been freaking out.
Alice: Well I’ve been *vomits*
Bella: Ali what’s wrong with you? *worried*
Alice: I’m not sure but *vomits*
Bella: Du have got to Carlisle. *pats her back*
Alice:...

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A Life Of Death Part One

posted by a-jforever

Ok heres the start of my new fanfiction. Enjoy.XX

I dropped the gun to the floor. I was thirsty enough not to care about what Kate would say; she needed to get a life. I mean she seriously needed to get a life. She lived off Lesen about the deaths her crew committed. I sprung out of the baum landing neatly on my feet.

“Who...” The woman asked.

“Shhhh...I won’t hurt you.” What a lie I thought to myself trying to keep the smile off my face.

“What...what do Du want of me?” She stuttered. I instantly flashed to her side, taking her hand leaning closer to her.

“I won’t hurt you.”...

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The beginning ( Part 7

posted by a-jforever

I havent gepostet this in ages I realised so here we go. Please Comment.XXX

Jasper’s POV

“What did Rosalie say earlier?” I asked my eyes narrowing.

Alice met my eyes, sinking her gaze deeply into mine before looking away.

“Oh never mind now.” She sighed standing up.

“Alice?” I asked I didn’t like it when Alice kept things from me.

“It doesn’t matter Jazz.” She sagte happily getting to her feet.

“Ok then.” I sagte letting the subject drop.
She took my hands swinging them back and forward.

“Are Du ok?” She asked, a small smile playing around her lips.

“Yes....why?” I asked...

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A Youtube Script(Twilight) Episode One:Bashing it out

posted by moolah

Our leads in this episode, Kristen Stewart as Bella and Robert Pattinson as Edward

A Youtube Script:
Episode One:
*Bashing it out*
Bella’s P.O.V:
When life gives Du lemons what do Du do?
I make sacrifice.
For my friends.
My family.
My Edward…
Like Romeo and Juliet sacrificed their Liebe for each other.
With the killing and stuff…
Anyways, I have the remote here. I’ll press play so Du can see…

*One Jahr ago*
Edward’s P.O.V:
Edward: When Bella says bye, please don’t complain.
Emmett: Yeah. Whatever, Edward.
Jasper: Like Em said.
*Two Minuten later*
Bella: Why’d Du do this?
Edward: Oh I didn’t.
Bella: *smacks his arm* really?
Edward: Yeah, last time I checked.
Bella: Oh just...

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Young Love.CH.2

posted by decullen

12 Years later

I'm almost 18 and its almost graduation.Its Edwards turn for a sleepover.I cant wait.I wish I could tell him that I Liebe him but I don't want to wreck our friendship.I heard a knock at my bedroom door.I opened it,the most perfect man was standing in front of me.

"What are Du doing here?"I asked and finished packing.

"I came to see if your ready."He sagte and gave me his crooked smile.I got Lost in his eyes we got closer and closer until our noises were touching.

"WHAT ARE Du TWO DOING UP THERE!"We heard Alice and Jasper shouting up the stairs.They were one of those couple who were...

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Past Searching Part 1

posted by a-jforever

Here's my new fanfic. Enjoy.XX

Her lips trembled as I began to pull back. “Please Alice; Du know it’s only for two days.” I sagte searching her eyes, my hand running carefully along her back.

She was speechless.

“You know I hate to be away from Du too, but this is something I have to do alone, you’ve inspired me to find out Mehr about my past but I have to do it alone.” I sagte moving my hand to brush the length of her cheek.

Her beautiful face was washed with pain and sadness was rolling over me like waves. I almost gave in and told her I was going to stay with her but she spoke,...

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Fell Apart Ch.4

posted by DarkStranger

the funniest thing is, that I don't know why it took me so long to write this chapter. I didn't wanted to write today, but when I read all the comment's, I changed my mind. So... hope Du like it :)
xxKatie

Still Edward POV (when Bella leaves)

It took two Sekunden to understand what Bella said. And one Sekunde to stand up and follow her.

The trees where merged, I saw only face on Bella, in front of me. My subconscious was playing with me. I could not understand what is real what is not.

I suddenly stopped. I took a deep breath, trying to smell Bella. But I only stint animals, and their blood.

Panic...

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Tears of Love: Chapter six: Lies

posted by Andressa_Weld

Nikki’s POV
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After he kissed me, I looked at him for a minute, a long minute. He looked into my eyes and we stood there looking for each other in a peaceful silent.
I looked at his amazing body and I thought he could be an underwear model.
-I’m so lucky! – I sagte and passed my hands in his abdomen and he laughed – you’re probably the hottest man in the whole world!
-Nikki, you’re beautiful too, dear! – He whispered in my ear and ran his hands in my hair.
-Thank you! – I sagte and he smacked me – but there’s a problem.
-What’s wrong, dear?
-I can’t remember...

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The beginning ( Part 6

posted by a-jforever

Sorry I havn't gepostet this story in so long. I've been buzy. Hope Du enjoy.XX Please Kommentar on improvement

Emmett’s POV

The Tag was over. It wasn’t so bad, if I say so myself. Other than Gym which Jasper hadn’t turned up for. I guess it was too much for him, poor kid. We did dachs him on about it a bit though, and it got on his nerves. Maybe I would see if he wanted to wrestle to take his mind off things. I grinned to myself scaring the little girl walking Weiter to me. I joined Alice and Rose in Edwards Volvo.
“Where’s Edward?” I asked.

“Funny. I was gonna ask Du the same thing”...

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Fell Apart ch.2

posted by DarkStranger

E.POV
week ago

Carlise asked me to oversee the Vampire in NY. They were coming closer Forks. They pose a threat to all, especially to us. We were afraid of volturi.

It was difficult to stand out with the family, even a week. Bella.. I imagined her sitting Weiter to me. I imagined her smiling and laughing. It may sound crazy, but I missed her so much, though only an Stunde has passed when I saw her. Her brown hair. I missed her brown eyes when she was human. I missed her blush and herz beat. But all these things have nothing against my presence with her. I increased speed. Finally I saw NY. It was...

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True lies,Teen Girls(Chapter Three)

posted by moolah

Rosalie

Alice’s P.O.V:
When I called Bella’s cell it rang and rang. Finally she picked up, “Hello?” “Bella. It’s Ali, what’s taking so long?” “Remember Jessica Stanley? Well she’s in here.” “Cool. What’s taking so long?” “I just told you, ‘m talking to Jessica.” I snarled, “Well hurry up, we have to get Home before the guys….” I grinned. “Remember?” “Yeah, I remember. I’ll be right out, Alice.” She hung up and Rosalie looked over at me, “What?” I shrugged.
Bella’s P.O.V:
“Well, Jess, It was nice talking to you, thanks for talking to me, I have...

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The beginning ( Part 3

posted by a-jforever

Hope Du like it XX

Edwards POV

It was just another normal day. There was a new girl, who every male was already picturing them with. She had long brown hair and muddy brown eyes. She went Von the name of Isabella although she preferred Bella. I didn’t really see what was so special about her. She was looking at us but we didn’t pay any attention. I was surprised to hear her asked the other human girl, Jessica, who we were. “Who are they?” Bella asked throwing a glance in our direction. I looked from Jessica to Bella who quickly dropped her gaze. Jessica giggled, looking at the table....