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Ok hi im not goood at peoms but im not sure if this one is any good can u plz tell me??

im here
im there
im everywere
everywere but your heart
wich is the place
i want
and need to be
Du smile
i smile
and that almost makes my day
but when Du look at me
it makes my week great
but if Du told me Du loved me?
that will make my life brilliant
but now ill just watch you
as i wait for my lifes dream come true...

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LOL thanks so much
twilight_lover9 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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vampirefreak_26 said:
Du are great, I hope Du will put Mehr peoms.
gose I totelly loved this one.
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ScottishChic said:
For someone who isnt good at poems tht was gr8 but u did kind of lose the magic at the end... sorry honestly im no good at poems either but jst work on the end bit a little, i think its from "it makes my week great" u shud try n improve.
Sorry, didnt mean to sound rude but the rest of it was brilliant!!!!!!
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thanks so much
twilight_lover9 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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um... is tht a sracastic thanks???
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countrygirl2008 said:
that was great.
Du seems to have the gift to write naturally.
it had a few miss spellings but it was great!
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Abilei said:
I agree with the first person to comment.
I can write poems and to me it was pretty good.

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MrsRadcliffe said:
That was great, although i think at the end it was a little off, but 4 a person like me who is good at littleture, i dont think i could write a poem like this :]
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Robertmanyac said:
Thats a really good peom better then what i've heard witch is only a few but still
sorry not a really good speller
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lilmisstwilight said:
its mint how long have Du been Schreiben poems lol
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Elzybells said:
honestly that was brill. i Liebe Schreiben poems 2! uv got guts 2 Zeigen it on this website! but ye well done :) i find bella and edwards relationship magical and i Liebe Schreiben things about it 2 i Liebe Schreiben songs about it i cant get enough twilight!!! :D is it ok if i add u
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 honestly that was brill. i Liebe Schreiben poems 2! uv got guts 2 Zeigen it on this website! but ye well done :) i find bella and edwards relationship magical and i Liebe Schreiben things about it 2 i Liebe Schreiben songs about it i cant get enough twilight!!! :D is it ok if i add u
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i Liebe your picture
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thx
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