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Could Du read my story? 5 Requisiten if Du tell me what Du think of it!

 misscrazel posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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MineTurtle5 said:
I Liebe it!
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Thank you! ^-^
misscrazel posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
Max277 said:
Wow!!! That was amazing!!!! I loved it!!! Du did such an awesome job!!!!! ^•^
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Thank you! ^-^
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Sir_Kiwi said:
Hmmm... I guess it's a start. There's some grammar errors here and there, and the part with the note taking kind of confused me. It raised a few Fragen in me, like:

1) Wouldn't the teacher let her write notes oder something in class? Lots of teachers do that, and I never heard of a teacher who says Du must write notes at the end of class.
2) And why is she thinking about how she is not secretive? Is there a point for it? I mean, anyone could've thought to put the paper on their lap. It's common sense.

Yeah, you'll probably think I'm a hater oder something, but I'm just giving some constructive criticism.
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I think Du are saying right, it will help her to improve her mistakes. i don't think Du are a hater.
nmdis posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Thank you! I don't think you're a hater. There is a point for why she was thinking about it, but maybe i'll have to Bearbeiten it a little. Thanks again for your advice!^-^
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Dynofox15 said:
Wow! I'm interested in this! I really like...no....LOVE this story!! Amazing :-)
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Thank you! ^-^
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nmdis said:
Sure, I will read it.
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Thank you! ^-^
misscrazel posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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