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Should I keep on making short stories? (Please no rude Kommentare :))

The Not So Worm
A Short Story Von :YoshiStar
One Tag when I was at least 2 oder 3 years old I was outside with my dad. I saw something through the gras, grass and I picked it up. At first I thought it was a worm. So I waved it in the air and said: "Look daddykins a worm!"
And my dad said: "Holly S***!!! That's not a F***** worm! That's a gras, grass snake!"
And so I said: "OH" and droped it. And walked back into my house and ate some erdbeere ice cream...

Please tell me what Du think. Should I continue oder no? And please no rude comments:)
 YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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kittencutie119 said:
No
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Thank Du for answering:) I really apreciate it:))
YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Your welcome. With a little moe practice, Du could eventually get a little better wth progress
kittencutie119 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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thank Du sooooo much! This helps alot:)
YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
JudyNails said:
I think Du should!
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Thank you!:D
YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
Shadowmarioking said:
LOL that is a hilarious story wished that'd happen to me XD

go ahead, continue :D
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I'd be glad to!:D
YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
IHWTA said:
That was.... A really short, short story...
Kind of... random...
I say no. No offense of anything.
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Thanks anyway:) None taken BTW
YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
YOUTH-UNLIMITED said:
It's not actually a story.these are the lackings of this story.try to correct your faults and practice more.
1.the story doesn't got any meaning
2.the story doesn't got any moral
3.the story doesn't got any climate
4.the story doesn't got any message and aim. So...if Du can overcome this faults and practice more,you will be able to make great stories.good luck:)
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Thank you:)
YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Du are most welcome:)
YOUTH-UNLIMITED posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
hellokittygirl2 said:
i think yes u should make it little funny and scary
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I will:))
YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
Brandey said:
Hm...It's kinda strange,I don't know what to say.
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Same.
mitchie19 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Well its kinda Mehr like a strange event that heppened in my life...I should have mentioned that:)
YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Ok than :)
Brandey posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
dreamfields said:
If Du enjoy writing, then continue. The Mehr practice Du have, the Mehr details Du will include. Nobody sits down and writes a masterpiece on their first try. The story was really short, but it gives Du a start to build on. Have fun!!!
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Thank you:))
YoshiStar posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Your welcome :D
dreamfields posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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