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Dying 4 U:

When the sun rises up in the sky,
I think about you.
When everything seems alright,
I hide the fact that,
I really do want you.
Don’t think I could live without you.
Nobody knows.
And I won’t tell them.

I can shake you.
I may break you.
But you’ll never know how I feel.
I’m playing hard-to-get.
Just don’t get upset.
When it burns my herz
to let Du go.
Gotta let Du know.
I’m dying for you.
Dying for you.

When Du try
to act
so cool.
And it doesn’t work out.
I, I think it’s cute.
But Du could never know.
Oh, oh, oh.
When Du flip your hair
out of your eyes.
But it just gets messed up.
I, I think it’s charming.
But Du can’t ever figure out.
No, no, no.

I can shake you.
I may break you.
But you’ll never know how I feel.
I’m playing hard-to-get.
Just don’t get upset.
When it burns my herz
to let Du go.
Gotta let Du know.
I’m dying for you.
Dying for you.

Can’t take it anymore.
I want Du Von my side.
When I’m alone at night.
Hold my hand.
Tell me that Du Liebe me.
Need you, want you.
Can’t live another Tag without you.

I can shake you.
I may break you.
But you’ll never know how I feel.
I’m playing hard-to-get.
Just don’t get upset.
When it burns my herz
to let Du go.
Gotta let Du know.
I’m dying for you.
Dying for you.

Dying, hurting, when you’re deserting.
Helpless, needless.
Want Du so bad.
Dying for you.
Dying for you.