Please Kommentar your opinoin should i make Mehr oder do Du like it???

Hey, I wrote a fanfic but no-one seems to be Lesen it. I'm hoping it just cuz they can't find it. Please could Du read it and tell me what Du think?

It was a normal Tag in Destiny Islands.The sun was shining and the residents were as happy as ever.But when Kioka woke up,Destiny Islands had changed forever.Some of the ideas from this fic came from my Zurück fic but I'm ditching that one.

As the fallout occurs, the story closes on Zexion's reflection

The final battle of the story.

Xenmas reports something that forever changes everything.

A Tag that belongs only to LarSon

Axel attempts another assassination.

A huge sammelsurium, smorgasbord explodes in Twilight Town.

Zexion and Jason go on a mission together.