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crimsons pov

"Mom what do Du mean dads dead isnt he?" I looked around at everyone they knew something that I didnt. "You always was a ignorant little girl." I heard Vegeta say. 'Wait wasnt your hair black?"Trunks sagte looking at me. "What do Du mean was it is isnt it?" Bulma held up a mirror and sure enough my hair was the shade of crimson just like the mark on my hand."Mom whats going on?" I looked at her."Your dad will tell Du its his responsiblity." I turned around and dad was in the door. "Dad whats happening to me and how are Du alive?" He sighned. "Listen Crimson when Du were born Du was well lets just say Du was half dead. Du wasnt breathing but your herz was beating.I summoned shenron he wouldnt help Du but his sister the Crimson dragon took pity on Du and granted the wish to heal you. On one condition when Du turned 18 Du would be the gaurdian of the dragon balls she would create.We exceppted. All that happens is the wishes goes past Du before their granted and these are harder to find then the old ones.Plus they can only be used every five years except your able to summon and grant a wish any time.Thats why the mark appeared to let Du summom her and your hair turned crimson.Also without knowing it Du brought me back to life." My jaw littilarry dropped so did Trunks,Goten,Pan and pratically everyone that wasn't their when I was born."As always Kakorats daughter is stronger then both my children its pathetic." Vegeta muttered. "I'll take that as a compliment Vegeta." "I got one Frage for Du Vegeta why did Du never bring back planet Vegeta?" I said. "I honestly have no idea." He said. I shrugged.



(That night)

I was out on my balcaney looking at the stars. Then Trunks walked out. He sat down beside me on the railing. "Listen Crims I really like Du and Du almost forgot about 17 why are Du staying with him?" I looked over at him and sighed. "I don't know really its just I missed him and I thought every thing could be how it was before well Du know." "You have other options." He sagte looking at me. "Trunks." "I'm serous Du dont have to be with him Du do have other options then just him.Like someone that knows Du better that would always be their for you.Like me." "Yeah if you'd wanna be a dead man Vegeta would kill Du if he found out about how Du feel about me." I said. He shrugged. "I've been through worse with him yelling at me." The he leaned vorwärts-, nach vorn and kissed me.