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Critical Analysis of Twilight Frage

I've been thinking...

I am currently an English-Creative Schreiben major in college, and I've been turning over an idea in my head for a while now. I want to practice on my own first 'novel.' I'm aware of copyright infringement and all that (I'm going to put a disclaimer XD), but I was thinking of rewriting Twilight. In my own way. Not as a parody, but with developed characters and a good storyline and plot. I think that Twilight had some potential in the hands of a capable author, and from what I've heard, I'm a pretty good writer.

I was going to write it as a fanfic on fanfiction.net. What do Du think? I'm still on the edge of deciding whether I'll do it oder not. If Du like oder dislike the idea say so, but just be polite please. And if Du have ideas for it FANTASTIC! :D My E-Mail address is ladyvampresslilith@yahoo.com; please send me your ideas. It could be about anything to do with Twilight to make it better.

Please tell me what Du think! Thank you!

LadyLilith (aka LadyCat aka Shelby) ♥
 LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Twilight_Dream said:
well, thinking that its a bad story is YOUR opinion. not fact. so please dont make it like it is. and what do Du mean in the hands of a good d author? twilight was Stephenie Meyer's idea. no one els's. otherwise it wouldn't BE twilight. and rewriting it saying that YOU'LL make it better like your some accomplished Autor makes it seem like your really full of yourself. so i would say no. im sorry if i haven't been polite but its just i got really ticked off seeing this question.
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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I apologize that it made Du angry, I was simply asking a question. No, I am not full of myself; I am actually the exact opposite. It took many other people saying that I was a good writer to consider this, and I still don't wholly believe them. I am no accomplished author; I never sagte it once. It's a fanfic, so I can write it if I decide to do so; I will put the disclaimer on it saying that it is Stephenie Meyer's work. It would simply be an experiment of my abilities as an author. I personally think Ms. Meyer is not a good author, and I think that she could have made Twilight into a way better, Mehr well written series than what it is. I am curious as to what my version would be like.
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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but how could that offend someone so much? it seems childish.
Twilight_Dream posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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can Du please take one Sekunde to stop being rude and sarcastic?
Twilight_Dream posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
friendsfan101 said:
Well, I'd Liebe to see a story!
Even though I'm a Fan of Twilight, I don't think that SM is the best writer, now that I look back on Twilight, it kind of...sucks. (No offense, Twilight_Dream, I know Du Liebe Twilight!) I think that it'd be cool to read a re-write of it. I don't think that it would be too bad, because there are a large numbers of Aschenputtel re-writes and nothing bad's happened. I'm all for it!
Of course, you'd have to write that Du don't own Twilight if Du put it up online, and I'm guessing that Du would have to tweak some of the names and some aspects of the plot if Du ever Veröffentlichen it, but I'd Liebe to read a story! I hope Du write it, and please, tell me when Du do! I'd enjoy Lesen it. =)
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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^-^ Thank Du for your support! I'm thinking I may; once I've written some of it, I will post up a link. :)
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Cool! I can't wait to read it. =)
friendsfan101 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
Queenoftard said:
Personally, I think it's a brilliant idea. I've been toying with the idea myself.
I don't really have any specific ideas yet, as I'm pretty occupied with other projects, but I would Liebe to read your version.
Will Du tell me if Du do decide to write it? oder maybe Du could just give me your Nutzername on fanfiction.net?
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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My Nutzername on fanfiction.net is AikaOokami, and I might post a link to the first chapter up on the spot as well, if Dearheart doesn't see an issue with it. If Du come up with any ideas for character oder story development, please E-Mail me oder message me and let me know and we can discuss it. People have sagte that I'm a decent writer, but any help I can get is much appreciated. :)
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
Dearheart said:
It's very true and very tragic...Twilight had a LOT of potential, but it was squelched and turned into a teeny-bopper drool fest. In the right hands, it could've turned out to be a genuinely great series.

If Du want to rewrite Twilight "LadyCat style", then Von all means, go ahead. As long as Du don't try to Veröffentlichen oder sell it, I don't think you'll run into any trouble. And I think it could be a fun and interesting way for Du to exercise your Schreiben skills. However, I think it only fair to warn that link has already been done. So make sure your version stands out from the others people have done.

And hey, if Du get creative enough with the plot and the characters, maybe Du could change their names and Veröffentlichen it as an original work someday! ^__^
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Ah ha, LadyCat style. I like that. :) Thank you. As I said, if Du got any ideas for character changes/flaws oder ideas for the storyline, please contact me and discuss it with me. Any help I can get I will gladly take. :)
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
mandapanda said:
Hmm. I'm actually very interested in Lesen your version. I know Stephenie Meyer has some *cough*many*cough* grammatical errors in the books, however, maybe it was because of her lack of Schreiben experience? We can't really be sure. I've heard The Host is pretty well written. LOL sorry. I'm getting off topic :)

As Du know, I'm a huge Twilight fan, and I'm very curious as to how Du will write your Twilight story. Will Du be changing the main storyline? And will Du add Mehr time and developement to characters Du feel had been cheated? And will Du be Schreiben New Moon and the other Bücher if your story does well? Mainly, I really want Breaking Dawn to be REDONE! LOL I've found some rewrites, but not the way I wanted it haha

I Liebe Twilight because it is personal. Dearheart had sagte above that making your character a blank is not something Du want as an author... however, I Liebe that. There are alot of stories that have characters who are relatable and have relatable traits, but being able to become the character and how the story is told through the vessel (Bella), it further engulfs Du and encaptures you. It's one thing to be captured and completely wrapped up in a book, but it's a whole different feeling when Du feel like Du are the character and Du are in the story... My apologies if I sounded really corny there. LOL

And, I will be honest. Some of the points that Du had sagte in your introduction irked me a little, just because I think Twilight has a good storyline and plot, but I KNOW that it wasn't your intentions :) Anyways, yes! I'm interested in Lesen what Du would have liked Twilight to be :) Hopefully Du don't get chopped for this question. I already see some opposing and defensive answers. But I Liebe Du and Du have my support :)
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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X3 I Liebe Du too, mandapanda! Thank Du so much for your support. Ha, Breaking Dawn sounds like a great challenge. If I do well with Twilight, I would Liebe to rewrite Breaking Dawn. I'm sorry that what I sagte offended you, just my opinion as an English major. :) I definitely want to refine and develop the characters. The Debatte in my mind is what should stay and what should go as far as the story of whole goes. I want it to remain true to the original storyline, but there are some things I would like to alter as well. Anyways, thank Du so much again. If Du have any ideas at all about changes in the storyline oder in the characters, please let me know. :)
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Oh and about Stephenie Meyer, I think that she may be a good author. All I have read of hers is the Twilight series, and in my opinion she rushed through it and got it published without properly going back on it and editing it to improve her basic ideals. I believe that all writers should do that before presenting a finalized piece of work, and I just don't think she did.
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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No need to apologize! Opinions are great! LOL and yes. Breaking Dawn will be a hefty challenge! haha I will input on Breaking Dawn if Du decide to re-write it! haha I have been told a few times that I have a future as a writer (LOL, i don't think so), and I was thinking about Schreiben Breaking Dawn the way I wanted it, but I think it'd be too much! And I would constantly Bearbeiten my work. Haha I always do that! But good luck with your story! I look vorwärts-, nach vorn to seeing how it differs from the original!
mandapanda posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
this-is-my-name said:
Sounds like an interesting idea... I'd Liebe to read your version if Du decide to write it.

Just please, for the Liebe of god, fix Bella!
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Oh, that's DEFINITELY happening.
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
violetbabe said:
Yes! Du should definitely do it. I know that if a capable Autor rewrote Twilight, it would be excellent. :)
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Yes, I believe so too. :) Not saying I'm that author, but I'd like to see what I can do with it.
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
snoznoodle said:
It is a great idea! I used to like the book and if it wasn't for this spot and the twi-hards I probably still would. If it was written Von someone who knows what they're doing I think it would solve my issues with it :)

Get to work! :D
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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XD Yes ma'am! *Salute* And I'm touched that Du have so much faith in me! I'll try not to let Du down!
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
MadamOcta13 said:
I think that's an amazing idea! I would so read it if someone else redid it! I'd Liebe a good vampire Liebe story (not a bad Meyerpire lust story)! Du should make Bella have so much Mehr depth and personality...I'm actually thinking about this now...I'm tempted to do the same (but I probably won't).
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Well any ideas Du got, Du can throw at me. :) I might make a Forum on here where people can give me ideas and we can all discuss it together. Bella is definitely something I plan on working on.
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
hpfreak14 said:
Du rewriting it reminds me of something that happened today.

In english my teacher sagte "I have to read Twilight for my descriptive Schreiben class. (yes teachers go to school to learn how to teach)The first few pages were descriptive. If it was written with less pages Von a better Autor i think i would enjoy it more"

basically every twilight Fan was really annoyed. Not many students in my class like him now but others adore and respect him.

The thought of Du rewriting it brought that up in my mind.

I would read it also if Du did
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Well I'm glad the whole world's not going to hell. No offense intended towards Twilight oder Stephenie Meyer. XD Thank you!
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
sleazy_weasley said:
@Twilight_Dream: Du were incredibly rude to Lady Lilith; she gepostet a perfectly good question, and Du just accused her of being up herself, which she was not. She was merely stating her opinion on Twilight, and how she would like to recreate it.

In my own opinion, I think it is a brilliant idea! It would be interesting to read Twilight in a well-written form with developed characters - seeing as Meyer failed to do so.

Can't wait to read it on Fanfiction! :D Good luck! xox

P.S. When Du finish it, send us all a link!
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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X3 Thank Du very much, sleazy_weasley. I will definitely let Du know when the first chapter's out.
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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see, this is what happens any time i try to post MY opinion. i get jumped on like a pack of dogs.
Twilight_Dream posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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i didnt mean it literally. and Du know that.
Twilight_Dream posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
italiangirl976 said:
I think it is a bad idea. It was Stephenie Meyer's idea. Not yours.
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Understandable.
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
bookworm12345 said:
Twilght hAs no potinetial I wouldn't bother trying make ur own I'd rather read ur orignial ideas
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Hmmm, I don't agree with the first part (even as anti Twilight as I am). But I'm pleased that you're interested in my other works. :) I have gepostet a lot of Poesie on my deviantart account in the link here if Du would like to read it: link
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
rachaelwsz said:
I'm actually kinda curious how your version will turn out... so I say: Do it. =)



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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Oh and I forgot to mention... Breaking Dawn! I think that's a challenge... So a rewrite should be interesting... =)
rachaelwsz posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Ohhh yeah. *Cracks knuckles* Breaking Dawn should be something. LOL
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
MrazBell10 said:
Well....I think... it's a good idea...
I want to see how it turns out...
I'm a little offended because...you see...I'm a Twilight fanatic...and...I read the Twilight Saga over and over again...
but I want to see it with other's point of view...
As a bookworm...
PLEASE!!! IF Du FINISH THE WHOLE TWILIGHT SAGA PLS. E-MAIL IT AT MY ACCOUNT IN YAHOO: mraz_bell10@yahoo.com

Thanks...
♥ ya'...

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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Hey, Du know what? It's perfectly understandable that you're a bit offended, and that's just fine. I think it's really, really great that you're a Twilight fanatic, but that you're civil to the people who don't like it. That's Mehr than I can say for other Twi-fans I've run into. So keep it up! You're awesome! (Bookworms FTW!) =)
Dearheart posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
katiecain said:
DO IT AND DON'T MURDER JACOB'S CHARACTER LIKE STEPHENIE DID, LADYCAT. KTHX? :) ♥
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XDDD That's one of the things that will change. As GrintCat sagte somewhere else...he won't be humping Renesmee's leg Von the end of it. oder something like that, it was funny. XD
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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ya atleast make him imprint on a human please.i am begging u
14jcub posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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'he won't be humping Renesmee's leg Von the end of it' HA HA HA HA HA.
rachaelwsz posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
Matsy23 said:
cool!!!!! thats a pretty good idea!!!!! ^^
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Book_freak said:
It could work, just try to do it better than the origonal. Not that it could be worse :P lol
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snusnu13 said:
OMG when are Du going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws!

I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool.

I think it would be way awesome and please leave a Kommentar on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net.

And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it.

JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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 OMG when are Du going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws! I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool. I think it would be way awesome and please leave a Kommentar on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net. And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it. JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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XDDDD Omg. I'm majoring in English, so 'unpossible' cracked me up. I feel like such a dork lol. But yes, I will certainly let Du know. ^-^
LadyLilith posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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thanks, i really hope Du do it
snusnu13 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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