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posted by HaleyDewit
Think Du got me good
Throwing rotten eggs
And trying to make me fall
But I got news for you
Your limited vocabulary
Won’t damage me at all

So keep doing what you’re doing if it gets Du through the night
But deep downs inside Du know I’m right

Get your head out the clouds
Keep your feet on the ground
Your words mean nothing to me
I don’t care what Du have to say
Save it for another prey
You’re the master of moronity


Can’t reason with you
Any argument I give
You simply blow away
But that won’t change the truth
You better grow some brain
‘Cause you’re giving stupid a bad name

I’d say open...
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Here, where the world is quiet,
Here, where all trouble seems
Dead winds' and spent waves' riot
In doubtful dreams of dreams;
I watch the green field growing
For reaping folk and sowing,
For harvest time and mowing,
A sleepy world of streams.
I am tired of tears and laughter,
And men that laugh and weep
Of what may come hereafter
No growth of moor oder coppice,
No heather-flower oder vine,
But bloomless buds of poppies,
Green grapes of Proserpine,
Pale beds of blowing rushes
Where no leaf blooms oder blushes,
Save this whereout she crushes
For dead men deadly wine.

Pale, without name oder number,
In fruitless...
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Broken wings;
sitting there crying,
is an Angel – Jäger der Finsternis dying,
clutching her broken wing,
whilst trying to piece together her broken ring,
why has she been chosen for this fate,
this angel, does got not appreciate?
her heavenly tears flowing,
as she can feel her life is going,
her herz is hurting,
she feels she hasn't done enough for gods earnings,
drip drop, drip drop,
her tears come to a sudden stop,
shes gegeben up on her halo,
shes gegeben up on her wings,
if this is gods will,
she will force herself to fulfill,
in life and death this is what she choose to follow,
and now she will wait until tomorrow,
she knows what...
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I look back on all those memories,
and wonder, what did this all mean to me?
i new there where feelings,
i loved you!
i loved you!
i cant deny that i didn't,
but now i think back and once again wonder,
what is it that i fell for,
your controlling,
your exhausting,
i cant trust you,
i cant be around my own friends,
guys oder girls,
you just don't let,
Ive finally come to realize,
that none of this is my fault,
it wasn't me who tore the hearts,
it was you,
your ripped,
you tore,
you broke,
you yelled,
and Du screamed,
you caused me all of this misery,
you brought these scars upon my wrists,
and Du punched the hole in...
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posted by Cinders
 Larry the kürbis
Larry the Pumpkin
The kürbis Poem
I shall call it the kürbis Poem
Because it is short and fat, like Larry
Who also looks like a pumpkin

When I was a junior in high school, I tried to gather together 365 poems together so I could make a calender. Actually, my target was at least four hundred, so I could weed out the bad ones. I Lost the introduction that I wrote for my teacher, but these poems are based on Zufällig thoughts I'd have at one point oder another throughout the day. Most are funny, some are not. Generally, it's kind of how I like to see life. Happy, amusing, but very precious. So I present to Du the Unfinished...
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I stumbled upon link a while Vor and decided that some of the points I made in a very long-winded Kommentar on her poem were valid for the population of writers here on Fanpop, especially but not only beginning writers and those just venturing into the fascinating world of the written word.

I advised dear greek to use Mehr concrete Bilder in her Poesie to better express her mostly abstract ideas. (And greek, I hope Du do not mind me using Du as an example. If Du do, please let your offense be known). She had written a lovely poem and titled it "My Life" and while the concept was genuine and...
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posted by HaleyDewit
What’s wrong with me
I no longer seem to find a reason to be happy
Trying to hold back the tears searching their way to my cheeks
Swallowing the scream that’s trying to escape my throat
What wrong with me
Wallowing myself in the darkness that’s consuming me
Hoping there’ll be a Tag where I can see things clear
Hoping one Tag I’ll find my way back home

You better run, run, run, rus as fast as Du can
Before I drag Du down

I’m a pile of misery
I’m a tormented soul
I’m a prisoner of loss
Captured between my walls
I beg Du nice from my knees
Take away this agony
I’m a wreck
‘Cause since you’re...
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posted by _Blackhearts_xx
Black roses;
They became the Rosen that where once red,
They became this Black when my herz bled,
They Represent my Sorrows,
They represent the path my herz follows,
Black roses;
the symbol of my heart,
this is what it became, once i fell apart


Black roses,
there's a beauty hidden in this Darkened rose,
as it Stands innocently Maintaining its pose,
A beauty that Attracts those who have gone astray,
it frees them of thier hearts pain,
Black roses;
So beautiful Du are,
Your as raidient as a shining star

Razor blade roses,
free me of your grip,
as your sharp ends are causing my skin to split,
Theres nothing like this pain,
but for this moment, i will let the blood rain,
the beauty pours from its core,
Spreading eagerly across its Petal covered floors,
Pain becomes pleasure,
As this rose is tempting me with its beauty,
free me from your grip,
and let the blades slip



i hpoe Du like them (:
posted by HaleyDewit
This is my first rap song. It's about my co-worker. It's not very nice. Also, somewhere there's the line 'i don't mind being the hottest chick around' I usually don't say those kinds of things. She just really pissed me off.

Talking shit like a twit
That’s all Du can do
But when it comes down to it
Nothing gets through to you
You’re all big talk
But Du got no game
And this poor me crap
Is really fucking lame
Who the hell are you
To play victimized
We’ve all got issues, bitch
But I guess yours are worse than mine
If you’d be the honest person
You claim to be
You wouldn’t talk third
person singular...
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posted by HaleyDewit
I might be addicted to you
To what your absence has put me through
Since you’ve been gone, I’ve been a mess
That’s okay, ‘cause when I’m happy I’m useless

So whenever I get the chance
I’ll go back to where we first met
And I’m back at where I started
I’m nothing, if not brokenhearted

I’m digging myself a grave
Will Du push me down in it
Not wanting to be saved
I’ve really just had it
I’m not wishing for goodbye
Just never thought Du would leave me behind
So Du can save your breath
I’m already death


Do Du ever think about me
When Du reminisce about the times that have been
Do you...
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I had to do this for creative writing, and since this site is severely lacking, I figured I'd give it a shot.

For my Creative Schreiben Class

The Faith Healer

He sagte to her, “I can cure you.”
Wide eyed and desperate, she believed him. She had been to doctors, and hospitals, and oncologists galore. And his hands were soft, and his eyes inviting. She trembled in his embrace as he tried to soothe her aching fears.
“I’m tired of waiting,” she breathed, her chest rattling with effort.
He kissed her forehead and stroked her hair, holding onto her as if his own life depended on it. She pulled her...
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This is a play I wrote.
There are three acts.
I'll add the Weiter two later.

(scene 1)
(enter Gabby and Conner, who appear to be arguing)
Gabby: For real, Conner, I really don't trust Anna. (shakes her head)
Conner: Really, Gabby, her parents founded the church. How can Du not trust her?
Gabby: Steve and sherry helped too.
(enter Anna)
Gabby: (death glares at Anna, but goes unnoticed)
Anna: So, Conner, are Du talking to yourself oder something?
Gabby: (clenches her fists, runs silently out of the room)
posted by edward-lover456
The Golden Tear part seven
please tell me if Du want me to continue in the comments! enjoy!
I waited and waited and I thought the hole thing was a prank
but then Kyle finally can in the room and sagte "I'm sorry Eva there
was a million paschen's Du must of thought I stud Du up" I said
"yeah I kinda did but it's okay your here now" and then my mom
and Molly and David walked back into the room. Molly sagte "Mama
Eva we got Du an ice cream!" and David sagte "yeah if grandma didn't
eat it all" and Mom sagte "ha ha very funny the only thing missing is
the cherries David and Molly" David sagte "Mama Eva...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Another DE song :) This time from Damon's point of view.

This is quite extraordinary
Never thought this could happen to me
Not after what happened last time
I gave my herz and Lost my mind
This could be the new beginning
Of a story with a happy ending
Will Du not mess with my head
I don’t want to regret falling in Liebe again

So, won’t Du stay
To brighten up my day

‘Cause Du lift me up to another dimension
When you’re around it’s heating the passion
You make me want to change
And all I want to do is make Du happy
‘Cause you’re bringing out the best of me
For Du I’ll try to change


This...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Four months gone, but still so vivid
Feels as though I actually lived it
Can’t get it out of my mind
Though God knows I’ve tried
Save my poor soul
You slip back into my head at any unguarded moment
For Du to come back is all I ever wanted
I long to be Weiter to you
But that won’t do me no good
Save my poor soul

And now I can’t breathe
Oxygen left along with you
Fear’s coming over me
Because I can’t seem to get through

Hear my silent cries
Help me face the night
Show me how to be strong
And save my poor soul
Decrease my suffering
Give me strength to begin again
Light find my way back home
And save my...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Out of your mind
You wave with your scepter
Completely blind
‘Cause Du think you’re so much better
You say we should fall off our high horses
But when I do I’ll take Du down with me

Started the feud
But Du still play innocent
Your bitchy attitude
Is not gonna get Du any credit
You say you’re the one being picked on
But you’re not getting any sympathy

If manipulation was a crime
You’d be sentenced for a lifetime
I’d make sure Du wouldn’t make it through the day
If hypocrisy was an award
You could use it as a substitute heart
But know Du won’t always get your way


You’re making it hard...
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posted by HaleyDewit
When Du bleed Du can start dying
You can finally stop denying
There's no reason for Du to keep on trying
Just admit that you've been lying
You better find a place to play hide and seek
'Cause the things I'll do will make Du weak
Remember all the things that Du have said
'Cause I can't get the revenge out of my head
Soon you'll be dead

One Tag I'm coming back
I'm getting ready for the attack
I'll fight Du like before
You won't hurt me anymore
You better start to run and find a place
'Cause a lying hündin like Du has no saving grace
Remember all the things that Du have done
'Cause my revenge will give...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Du use the word slut when Du don’t know what it means
Maybe Du should ask your mom when she drops down to her knees
And maybe I’m a bitch, but at least I’m one with style
I don’t need to pick a fight, unlike link
You write everything in Auszeichnungen and Du can scarcely spell your name
You hurt the ones I Liebe and for that I’ll make Du pay
And Du can ignore this, Du can keep going on
But don’t start crying when Du end up all alone

You can laugh this off
You can call my bluff
But it’s one for all and all for one
You can throw with rocks, Du can try to play dirty
But if Du get to my friends,...
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posted by AnaHallam
Never before in the short time Cassie had spent on this earth, had the desire to escape burned so brightly within her. The damp soil clung to her delicate toes as she scampered through the wild, untamed grass. Such that it was miles high. oder so it appeared to her tiny form and limitless imagination. In truth the gras, grass merely tickled her knees as it reached up towards the sky in a desperate attempt to grasp just a single strahl, ray of sunlight. Not a blade prevailed.

The sky remained as dark as ever, the sun was not coming today. It rarely did in winter; it simply shrouded itself in rainclouds and...
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posted by Booyahboy
I wrote this poem, its not very gd, but i wanted some criticism, so i figured...well, here goes



Skeletal Kiss

Kisses from a skeleton.
A hand that cannot touch.
A nose that can't pick up the scent
Of perfumed skin, as such.

Sweet nothings from a skeleton,
Inspired Von sightless eye.
Words tainted, Von the rotted lips
Through which they must pass by.

Embraces from a skeleton.
The fault of broken heart,
Which used to rest in marrow cage
But now is gone, in part.

Liebe comes not from a skeleton,
From death, from lack of life.
It only lives in memory
Which lives through after life.




Ok, be honest, What do Du guys think?