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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. Von no means am I forcing Du to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless Du truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before Du start posting. It can be as little as a bio, oder as big as an entire Artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no Mehr than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he oder she is in, can pull out another trick out of his oder her hat.
4. If Du absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his oder her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Zufällig and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when Du have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the Weiter Tag you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own oder is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the Kürzlich outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, oder claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If Du must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, oder so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if Du do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot oder stabbed in the heart, then pop up Minuten later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull oder flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to oder dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to oder dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created Von you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing oder potential character is a Mary Sue, oder if Du suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, Du can take link. If Du want, Du can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case Du were curious, which Du probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all Du want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, Von no means do Du have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by Robin_Love
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Becca. No need for more.
Reason oder meaning of name: It's just a short version of my real name..
Eye Color: Brown. Like...dark almost black..
Hair Style/Color: Black. (Like her soul!) Hey!
Height: Um I'm about 5'9”
Clothing Style: Depends on the mood
Best Physical Feature: My what? (Her legs. She has dancer legs)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Thunderstorms
Your Guilty Pleasure: Beating up the bad guys
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Idiots. (Uhh...)
Your Ambition for the Future: To live?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Why am I up?
What Du Think About the Most:...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Shane Parker
Reason oder meaning of name: I'm not sure, honestly.
Eye Color: My mother used to tell me that they were an smaragd green.
Hair Style/Color: It's blonde, and kind of shaggy.
Height: I'm right under 6'0, like 5'10, 5'11
Clothing Style: I like to be comfortable, in summer i'm always in cargo shorts and nike Tennis shoes
Best Physical Feature: I- (His eyes)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Uncertainty.
Your Guilty Pleasure: Oh god, Du really don't wanna know.
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: When people chew obnoxiously, I swear I wanna schlagen, punsch Wally for it.
Your Ambition...
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posted by SilverWings13
 Octavia Rurik
Octavia Rurik
Name: Octavia Rurik
Age: approx 227; looks 22
Species: warlock (born of warlock parents)
Specialties: healing and defense spiritual magic
Weapon: none
Likes: swimming, singing, lanterns
Dislikes: disease, tyranny, spiders

Name: Dmitri Rurik
Age: approx 180; looks 18
Species: warlock (born of warlock parents)
Specialties: defense and elemental spiritual magic
Weapon: a long black scepter topped Von a glowing crystal orb (colors shifts with type of magic used)
Likes: birds, playing the violin, headphones
Dislikes: a lot of things

Background: Dmitri and Octavia are the youngest children of Wilhelm Magnus and...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Sorry this took so long to get out, college is really kicking my behind with all the work I have to do. And I didn't realize how short it was...


"How do we know it's not a clone?" Tobias asked, tapping his fingers on his chin. "The scars on him are accurate, bruising around his face from the last fight.. but.." Chris muttered and walked, peeling off the monitors and lifted Fang up into a sitting position, his eyes going wide. "Wing has been replaced with an artificial one.." He sagte and slowly unfurled the metal wing, looking over it before letting out a low whistle. "Man, that's some fine work.."...
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It helps if Du sing along: link

Lexi, and her struggles of being a teenage girl, and her developing powers...

If Du weren't born with it
You can buy a couple ornaments


Lexi stared into the full-length mirror, hands resting Von her sides before she placed them on her hips, letting out an annoyed sigh, catching Jamie’s attention as he passed Von her room. The teen backtracked and slid into his sister’s room. “What’s up?” He asked and sat at the edge of the bed, sipping from a straw. “Can’t decide.. Help meeeee!” Lexi whined out and pulled her uniform’s rock down, staring at her...
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posted by KatRox1
((BEFORE Du READ THIS: Be warned that it is a lot of stuff in a little article. I found it while Lesen through some old documents, and realized I haven't really gepostet anything on Bella before she joins The Team and becomes Mercy. So if Du want Mehr on her pre-superhero life, let me know! KISSES!))

October 31st, 2011
Gotham, USA

There isn't much I remember about the accident. It all happened so quickly.
There was blood- a lot of blood. It was on the windows and the airbags and our clothes.
And there was screaming, but it wasn't coming from my mouth, oder Gavin's. Gavin wasn't even moving. He just...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Ebonique
Ebonique
I apologize in advance for the background. Consider it a rough sketch of sorts till the holidays are over. I'll get it edited and cleaned up after then. Again, sorry.

Name: Ebonique
Alias: Eboni
Powers: agility, speed, manipulates light, night vision, voice that cause sleep.
Occupation: Not disclosed
Weakness/Limits: Not disclosed
History: Ebonique was an ancient Egyptian priestess of the Egyptian goddess Bastet. Her village was raided, and the people slaughtered. She was taken and sold as a slave. After years of torture and hard work, she was bought Von another man. Her work was not as hard and...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Trystan kept a close tab on the fox, watching as people began to clear the streets. Within a few Minuten he was greeted Von Alex and Chris. The oldest of the three looked up at the sky and then back at Scotty who had stopped in his tracks. The fuchs hybrid turned his head and stared down an alleyway, tilting his head back as bullets went whizzing Von his head. Alex's eyes widened and she ran forward, standing in front of Scotty, holding his her hands straight out and then jerking them back, pulling Pistolen from the perpetrators' hands. Chris and Trystan ran forward, looking down the alleyway. "That's...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Scott "Scotty" Clancy.
Reason oder meaning of name: I actually have no flipping idea, to be honest.
Eye Color: Blue!
Hair Style/Color: It's white and...... jagged?
Height: Uhhhhhhh, 6 foot something, not that much shorter than Fang. (You're 6'1, Scotty.) Oh! Okay, I'm 6'1 apparently.
Clothing Style: I really like flannels.
Best Physical Feature: My unusual hair.

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Losing people I'm close to.
Your Guilty Pleasure: ...I eat icing from a tube....
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: PEOPLE WHO TAKING FOREVER IN LINE LIKE Jesus CHRIST PEOPLE.
Your Ambition...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
FAMILY

-Mother (name): Diana Rouge
-Relationship with her: None, dead after Phoebes birth

-Father (name): erpel, drake Rouge
-Relationship with him: None, dead after Phoebes birth

-Siblings: 1
-Birth order: Elizabeth
-Relationship with each: None, dead after Phoebes birth
-Children of Siblings: None
-Extended family (aunts, uncles, cousins, etc.): All dead
-Close to family? No, all are dead

CHILDREN

-Does character have child(red)? Yes
-How many? 1, Jayson
-Are all children with the same partner? Yes, Dylan

-Character's most Favorit memory of his/her child(ren)? First time she showed Jayson her piano
-Character's...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
I found this large chart about character descriptions and I have been wanted to fill it out for ages. This is gonna end up in 5 parts I think but if Du want to dive in deep into your co's the chart is here: link

-Character's Full Name: Pandora Elizabeth Diana Ruby Rouge-Spade
-Reason oder meaning of name: Pandora is her birth name but she changed it after discovering how her family died Elizabeth was her sister, Diana was her mother and Ruby was her birth middle name.

-Nickname: Phoebe
-Reason for nickname: Zero was her first friend, he told her of the rarity of her name so she became worried about...
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posted by SilverWings13
This is based off an RP with RL's characters, but I just wanted to write soemthing on these two characters that get too oftenly drawn and too rarely written. Just a heads up: there's a tiiiiny mention of rape, but nothing explicit oder graphic.

The cold wind whistled through the Frozen forest. Most every other sound was muffled Von the snow: weak branches falling, Merida - Legende der Highlands rodents hopping over the white blanket. Bigger Tiere were prowling the forest as well. The Siberian could hear it all, accustomed to the world of white like the one where he had been born.
After an Stunde of sprinting, the man gave...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
BC I NEEDED SOMEWHERE TO PUT THIS AND THE Weiter CHAPTER IS NOT A GOOD PLACE OKAY

Scotty sighed as he stared at the computer, leaning back in the hotel chair. "This is definitely the building.. The tracker attached to the transporter, van says so, and from our scouting.. there are way too many guards to even attempt this.. " He dropped his head into his hands, letting out a frustrated groan. Chris leaned over his shoulder, tapping his chin. "Cadaver has been working with the Injustice League for a while, we've been keeping tabs on him for months.. maybe he thinks that this is the best place to keep him in...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 I drew him because I felt like it
I drew him because I felt like it
Name: Michael Fanton
Alias: None
Occupation: Guitarist and Singer, Civilian
Age: 19
Personality: Michael is a very positive person, who often weighs others problems on him as support than solve his own. It's very unlikely to catch him in a bad mood.
Appearance: jade green eyes, he is a natural brunette but for the moment has his hair dyed black. he has freckles and barely leaves anywhere without wearing some type of hat ( usually snapbacks). He is 6'0 ft tall.
Relationships: He is a good friend and bandmate to Bentley.
History:Michael grew up having an ordinary life,minus his parents divorcing and his mother taking custody of him at the age of 8.
Notes:He met Bentley at a bar, and since have known each other for almost a year. It wasn't until recently him and Bentley got in touch again.
 I found a cute lil pic of him when he was little with his dad
I found a cute lil pic of him when he was little with his dad
posted by Robin_Love
 Notte
Notte
Name: Dylan Spade
Alias: Notte
Occupation: Hero
Powers: Flight, shadows, dark energy, telekinesis, hand-to-hand combat, scythe
History: Dylan was born a mutant; oder so he was told. He had white wings and as a neko. He lived in an orphanage and grew up there. Those times were not happy and he found ways to keep himself from harm. He was taught many things, one of those being how to defend himself. Dylan was an expert with a scythe, a master in hand-to-hand combat, an ace flier, and able to control his powers at all times. When he was ten, Dylan fled. There were so many against him and his kind that...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Sorry for posting so much, but this is it for another two oder so weeks.

Ayo, so, I'm back.. Which Du probably gathered that.. Well, a few characters need to go, and I'll add a few, only because they're important. I wanna write this huge Fan fiction with many chapters, but idk how everyone would tie and just- ((Whitney.) nevermind. Here's the Liste of who stays, who is going. Anyone who isn't listed is terminated, unless I forgot someone who was meant to live.

Staying:
•Fang (bio completed and updated)
•Jaime (updated, needs posted) Jaime's kids, Parker and Finnian are also staying, but do not...
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posted by ComicSans
-I stahl, stola this outline from some past Artikel i found on here. Uhh, i'd Liebe to RP with some of Du bros and broettes. woo.-

Name: Malachi (Mal-i-kai) Reiner

Occupation: He's an ex-hero

Hero Name: Jasper

Age: 19

Date of Birth: November 3,1996

Nationality: Canadian-American

Hair: Undercut style. He has dark brown almost black hair

Body: He's about 6'2" but he's lean and toned, strong and lanky. SO WooO. He also has gages and a tattoo between his shoulder blades that had his gf's name but now says "Tolia, The Queen Bitch" since they broke up.

Eyes: Forest Green

Powers and Ability's:
Through growing up...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Fang sat tapping his fingers on the computer, staring up at the monitors as his dark eyes scanned over them. "This is useless, there's nothing even going on.." He sighed out and leaned his head on the keyboard, hitting his head against it a few times. He only rose at the sound of Batman entering the cave, but not looking from the monitors. "He's ready, Bats. Whether Du see oder it not, I'm taking him out into the field." Fang stood and turned, crossing his arms as he earned a scowl. "It's been six months, Fang. Six. Might I remind Du it was on purpose, not some accident." Batman sagte and locked...
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posted by SilverWings13
 Zufällig foxy!
random foxy!
Creature: Kitsune

Origin: Japan ("kitsune" means "fox" in Japanese)

Type: mythical

Lifespan: immortal (technically)

Weaknesses: icy weather oder water saps their energy, high metabolisms (meaning they must consume Mehr Essen than most humans to stay healthy)

Strength is drawn from: other kitsune, heat, red meat (so... not really vegetarians)

Common traits: quick tempers (especially when around other kitsune), glowing irises at certain times

Summary: First documentation of a kitsune was in the 4th century A.D. as creature of myth in Japan. Full blooded kitsune have the ability to shape-shift into any...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Amal's Lamp (her necklace)
Amal's Lamp (her necklace)
Hey. I know. "Oh great. Another one!" Well...I have plans for them all so I want to introduce this one to you.


Name: Raja Owens
Alias: Amal (“hope; aspiration”)
Powers: Ultimate Cosmic Powers
Occupation: Genie
Weakness/Limits: Can only use powers when summoned oder wished upon.
History: Amal was created out of hope in the ancient times. She lived for years on end till her physical body was unable to carry her and was dissolved in chaos. Since then she has been embodied into multiple bodies every century. She chooses a different name each time, something close to her own. Amal takes on different...
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