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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. Von no means am I forcing Du to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless Du truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before Du start posting. It can be as little as a bio, oder as big as an entire Artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no Mehr than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he oder she is in, can pull out another trick out of his oder her hat.
4. If Du absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his oder her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Zufällig and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when Du have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the Weiter Tag you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own oder is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the Kürzlich outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, oder claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If Du must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, oder so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if Du do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot oder stabbed in the heart, then pop up Minuten later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull oder flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to oder dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to oder dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created Von you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing oder potential character is a Mary Sue, oder if Du suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, Du can take link. If Du want, Du can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case Du were curious, which Du probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all Du want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, Von no means do Du have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by XxKFforeverXx
SERIOUSLY?!?!? All this stupid fighting is getting old. Du guys have seriously pissed me off, and trust me, it take ALOT for me to say something.
YOU GUYS ARE Schauspielen LIKE A BUNCH OF GIRLS I GO TO SCHOOL WITH! Seriously! I don't care if you're gay/straight/lesbian/or whatever! I'll still talk to you, I'm not going to blow Du off and block you, oder ban you. I think it's wrong, but that doesn't mean I'm going say anything to you. Du are who Du are. If Du make that choice, then SO BE IT! This rule stuff is getting old too, no matter where Du are, people are going to copy. Du people who make...
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posted by 66Dragons
"Quite impressive." A voice whispered in Revenge's ear. 

Revenge kept his masked eyes forward. "Yes. Quite. Du secured things on your end, partner?"

"Yes," 

"Good, now we let the two sides fight it out."


A transporter, van screeched up in front of Alpha Squad. Gas flew out of the transporter, van and in a few seconds, the entire team was unconscious. Masked men walked out and threw the teens into the back of the van.

Sam flew unconscious into the van. A shadowy figure landed Weiter to the men.

"Missed one." the female said.

The men nodded and got back in the transporter, van before driving off.
posted by Obscurity98
It was dark, i remember, but around me everything was moving i could hear it and feel it. The mask that i wore to keep me breath was the only thing that kept me alive. I could hear all the glass breaking, and suddenly i felt a stinging on my skin, as i looked up i saw chemicals, pouring into the test tubes. My water was infected. I needed to get out. My little five Jahr old fists banged on the glass tube around me, nothing was helping. I couldn't get out, suddenly a large movement occurred it sent my tank flying, and it crashed to ground and broke open, and i tumbled out, water gushed onto...
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Homework One-Shot

(This fanfiction may include SUGGESTIVE material not appropriate for younger people. Just a warning)




Sam had just come back from a diving mission in New York Harbor. His suit was soaked as was he. And he smelled like garbage. He was just about to step in the showers when his phone buzzed. Sam picked it up. It was a text message from Holly.

"Pls hlp w/ hmwrk"

Sam sighed and replied he'd be over in ten before stepping under the hot stream of water. He bathed quickly and dried off, slipping on a white lange ärmel hemd, shirt and a red button up that was left undone. He slid on jeans and...
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posted by MaiaYJ
OOC: Tell me if Du guys like it! I might just continue this if Du do! Key: Anything in italics is a flashback!



"They're in our forest!" Maia shouted angrily, throwing her quiver and bow to the ground. "Why are they in our forest? It's our home!" She glanced to her adoptive sister sitting lazily on the couch, petting the frettchen on her lap. "I don't know, maybe they live around here oder something? A new neighbor?" Ryder didn't take her eyes off the leather-clad book she was reading. "You don't get it! They're going to drive us off our own land and kill us! Just like they did with mom and dad!"...
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I wrote this before I was half done with RoR. It won't fit in the storyline now, but to avoid too many spoilers, this is your super preview. Oh BTW: RAVAGE PART II TOMORROW!!!!



"Where's stechpalme, holly and Artemis?" Revenge asked, swinging down Weiter to Nightwing and Batgirl.

"Here!" Artemis called, running up. "Holly's inside planting the explosives!"

"That's my girl." Revenge muttered.

His HUD flashed red thrice. A symbol he had hoped was an accidental set off.

"Evacuate the area!" Revenge yelled, firing his grappling line at the school and swinging off.

"You heard Revenge! Move!" Nightwing yelled. He ran...
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25 Ways to Survive your First Encounter with Red Revenge (Alive, that is)


1: Do NOT call him Samy, Sam, Dude, Bro, etc. Call him "Red Revenge" oder "Sir" (Double R is fine too.)

2: Don't make fun of the cape.

3: Don't make snide Kommentare about losers who don't have superpowers. (Last I checked, the guy is still in ICU)

4: Don't make remarks about him Schauspielen like Batman. (You'll wish Du were in ICU)

5: Don't mention the word "revenge" and "unnecessary" in the same sentence.

6: Don't make snide remarks about rich brats who buy friends.

7: Don't insult Holly.

8: Don't ask why he's partnered with a bunch...
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posted by Kenzie_KarmaYJ
Kenzie freaks out when Robin tells her that she's going to go insane if she stays with Brennan for too much longer. She watches the fight begin as Brennan picks her up and tightens his grip on her. Screaming, she accidentally freezes time. She then asks for an explanation from Robin, who tells her Fin's real story and who Kenzie was. Kenzie gets really upset Von this and time is unfrozen, but no one actually notices. Chelsea gets the upper hand and attacks everyone.

OOC: FINAL INSTALLMENT FRIDAY!!! 'bout damn time too...
HOLA!!!

So recently I have joined a new Young Justice Roleplay group and we need Mehr people to join! It's CANON ONLY! NO OCs. I know how much Du guys Liebe your OCs but we need people. So heres some info about the group. (At the end I will give all Links cuz Du need to read this IMPORTANT info on the group :D)

~It's on Tumblr- Du must have a tumblr account to apply. Then Du must make a separate account for the character

~We follow the show- Everything that's happened in the Zeigen we work off. It's based off the INVASION. So we have all new characters and all the old team members are all...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
These took me 2 weeks to finally finish -_- Gyah.
Name: Blair Wayne
Alias: Luna
Age: 17
Occupation: Hero
Relation to team: Bruce Wayne’s daughter
Powers: Blair is able to control all elements of the earth including “Air, water, fire, and earth “along with light, hand-to-hand combat, acrobatics
Past: Blair also knew her father was a Vigilante. Especially when he left one night, and didn’t come back until the Weiter week with broken ribs and scratches. She followed him one night, realizing her father was Batman, and that herself had gained powers
Notes: -Blair has a twin brother named Brett
-Her...
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posted by Robin_Love
She was running along the street, a blur to all. She did a few tricks over cars, going too fast for any one to appreciate them. She laughed, enjoying her fun. She skidded to a stop when she saw a blonde haired boy in a black trench mantel running away. She looked at him for a minute. Why was he running? She raced towards him.
“Hey softie!” she yelled teasingly.
The boy stopped, turning to her. He scowled.
“Shut up Erin!”
She stopped in front of him.
“Awww! C'mon Terror! I was just playing!”
“I don't give a care. Leave me alone!”
Terror turned to leave, but Erin grabbed his wrist. A...
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posted by Robin_Love
Only one thing to say this time. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!




“I've heard a few things. Whispers of conversations. But Du apparently had some kind of fall in with Bloodmist.”
Becca blinked.
“Why would I? I don't mind him being anywhere close to the team.”
“I know. That's why I'm confused.”
Becca nodded. She looked at her Angel – Jäger der Finsternis friend.
“Devin, what have Du experienced?”
“Becca, what I say Weiter can not be repeated.”
“I promise.”

“I feel bad for lying to him, Becca. But...I felt like I had to protect him.”
“From what Dev?”
“Myself. I don't know why but I felt this voice...
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posted by Scarlet_YJ
 Scarlet's new civvies
Scarlet's new civvies
Name: Scarlet Adenfeld
Alias: Ember
Age: 16
Power: witch who can control feuer and uses magic

Alliance: for right now I don't even care the line between villian and hero is basically non-existant so call her whatever Du want

Appearance: long orange hair (now tied up in either a ponytail oder pigtails), brown eyes, 5 ft. 8"

Personality: Calm, hot-tempered, withdrawn, loner(ish), serious, loud, trust issues (I might have mentioned this before but her trust issues have gotten worse), friendly, brave, strong (I mean emotionally strong), courageous

History: the only thing that's changed is that her father killed her evil grandmother then her father was murdered.

Other: Scarlet iherited her mother's immortal hunter gun called "Fire Crossing", she has some expierience in martial arts, and she has a dog familiar named Cole
 Scarlet's new mission outfit
Scarlet's new mission outfit
posted by Robin_Love
 Trevor-day
Trevor-day
I KNOW I make alot, but I Liebe them all so much!!!


Name: Trevor Wright
Alias: Secret
Occupation: Hero
Powers: Trevor posses different powers at different times of day. Day-strength, light, fire, wind. Night-speed, shadows, darkness, water. Trevor is also a master spy and trained extensively in combat. He has never been detected and has endurance that lasts twenty-four hours. Trevor loves to use a gun in the Tag and a sword at night.
History: Trevor was raised on the streets of London, England. He is, as far as he knows, an orphan. His powers manifest from his X-gene. He was taken in Von a sly shape-shifter,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 Bentley
Bentley
He sliced at a dummy with his sword making it fall apart and heard a little noise behind him and loooked from the corner of his eyes to see two attackers coming at him from both sides, he backflipped out of the way and took out his small daggers throwing them at the incoming dummies and made them fall apart aswell, he landed on his feet swiftly at ease and stood in a ready position with his regular sized sword breathing heavily with sweat running down his forehead, he heard clapping behind him and flipped his sword back into his side pouch and turned around smiling. The man who approached him...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
25 ways to piss off Fang.

1). Poke him and continuously and ask if he’s goth

2) Poke him between the wings then run away screaming “I TOUCHED A GOTH KID!

3.) Dye his hair rosa while he’s asleep.

4.) Lock him in a room with bright rosa walls. (And a barf bag)

5.) Take a toy messer and ask Fang if he’s Lost his.

6.) Tell Fang that Du Liebe him.

7.) Hack into his blog and change his status
update too “I Liebe Hannah Montana.”

8.) Touch his hair (only Devin can)

9.) Give him McDonald’s chicken nuggets and tell him he’s eating his mom.

10.) When Fang appears kick his shins and say Du didn’t...
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OOC: This is a re-pub of my very first story, Expectations. So basically, this happens before Fin is dead (that’s why Fin is in this. duh.) and it takes place right when Aisling joins the Team. So yeah. God, it was so long Vor that I wrote this! Well anyway, here it is..
I don't remember the Tag I found the Team. Those memories--all memories of my past--are gone, corrupted and removed; but Mehr on that later. I only know now what they told me, but from what I've heard, I picture myself as a kitten. A lost, scrawny, water-sodden kitten, that somehow dragged itself--myself--onto the doorstep...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Iraq
5 years later
"Soldiers! Du are not in combat training anymore! Welcome to the real war, the real thing. We have some returning veterans to the battlefield." The commander turned and held out his hand to point at Derek. "Soldier Adams, thank Du for returning to battle. Your assistance is much needed" Derek nodded once and shifted his sniper rifle. Soldiers starting running and grabbing Pistolen and ammo as the threat of a bomb filled the air from the radios. "ADAMS! Get to higher ground, use that sniper to take enemy targets down." Derek nodded and grabbed ammo and running out of the tent,...
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posted by Kenzie_KarmaYJ
After the large round of laughter and ironic applause, not to mention Robin nearly fearing for his life, the team looked over to Delta for an explanation, although someone had an inclination on what it might be about.
Batman, who had since dried himself off and calmed down, picked up Kenzie, looking very innocent, making Batman himself look innocent in a very scary way. Delta sighed and picked up the wilted rose, twirling its stem between her fingers.
“I’m not sure exactly how to explain this,” she began. “But I know this is Fin, I can feel it. I used to...” She gave a half-hearted...
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posted by Red_HoodYJ
My name is Red Hood. And here's a little information on me:

Gender: female

Alter Ego: Aeronwen Todd

Nickname(s): Red, Aeron, Aero (prefers Aeronwen)

Age:17

Known Locations: Gotham City, Blüdhaven

Personality: smart-ass, sarcastic, sly, intelligent, hot-tempered

Appearance: Black hair, green eyes, 5'10, 127 lbs

Civvies: black elbow sleeve boot neck shirt, black loose jeans, belt

Powers: trained Von Red haube to use firearms, knives and multiple other weapons, higher resistance to injury then the average human, perfect aim/never misses unless purposely

Weakness: Mehr untrusting then Batman, proud,

Story:...
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