i would end up here with you
i was a restless wanderer on a distant path
Du were a lonely dreamer with a broken laugh
i would go anywhere the road would lead
my hopes and dreams is all that i would need
i don't need a house oder fancy cars
i would rather sleep underneath the stars
Du did'nt have much to call your own
but what a lovely smile on your face shown
Du sagte your chance at Liebe had past Du Von
i told i'm here so dont Du cry
our lives were like the pieces of a broken heart
now that we're together what a life could start
there was magic in the air that night
everything was moving at the speed of light
Du were like my juliet and i your romeo
Du Liebe me i Liebe Du thats all i need to know
no longer will Du dream of Liebe thats true
no longer will i wander my Suchen has led to you
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd Liebe some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
Du are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as Du lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are herz at name.
Du may notice that only the Sekunde verse rhymes, this is an attempt to Zeigen the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
Du are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as Du lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are herz at name.
Du may notice that only the Sekunde verse rhymes, this is an attempt to Zeigen the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
