This is a start of a story that won't get published ever due to use of the kind of alchemy described Von the Manga Fullmetal Alchemist written Von Himaru Arakawa. It combines the wonder of sci-fi with the fast pace of martial arts.
This a story something i came up with in dream i am Schreiben this to Veröffentlichen so be very hard on me and my story please tell me what Du thing things Du would change