sorry it's so long let me know if Du like it
We’re finally out of the house and coughing I looked at my ivory skin marked with ashes I looked at jose same thing. “jose do Du have the money and your clothes?” I ask “yes do Du have the Essen and your clothes?” my little brother asked I can explain the bags we wanted to run away because our parents were splitting up.“Of course oh my goodness look at Domingos’ house” I say. It is also on feuer we see one person stumble out “jose we need to see who that is.” I say. He already was running to see who it is. “Thank goodness we need to get out of here” I know that voice its Domingo. I pull him up he has a bag too “Domingo where are we going to go?” I ask “I have an idea but, first lets get out of here think of what the cops will think of three kids two houses on feuer and we have bags filled with stuff we’ll need” he says. “Lead the way” kyan says. We all schlinge our backpacks on our shoulders and walked.
*
About four hours later we found a cheap motel called “seashore palace”. Our room number was 184. We opened the door it was ……different the walls were baby blue with a wave pattern on it sea shells hung every where the beds were bright red the sheets were rosa and the couch was tan. “It looks like a monkey blindfolded picked it out” I said. jose and Domingo chuckled. “Luna that’s an insult to monkeys” Domingo said. I turned around he was closer then I thought. I blinked and sagte “what’s your idea?” I asked. He looked down at me smiling I couldn’t help but smile back and look at his gray eyes. Then jose cleared his throat and sagte “your plan.” Domingo look at his backpack and unzipped it then pulled out a folded map. He unfolded it on one of the bett and sagte “if we thru Galveston island we can go here that should be an abandoned house oder camp I forgot.” he said. “Why is it abandoned?” I asked “it might be I meant” he sagte reassuringly. “Luna, Du and jose sleep on the beds I’ll sleep on the couch.” Domingo said. “Are Du sure Du could sleep on a bett I’ve shared a bett with jose before.” I babbled. “No, Luna its ok I wouldn’t be nice to have Du and kyan crammed in one bed.” he was so thoughtful. “Okay” I finally agreed.
*
That night I woke up to the sound of jose crying I got out of bett and ran to wake him but instead ran into something solid. Arms caught me before I fell. “Good morning Luna” Domingo sagte “Um we have to wake up jose he’s crying” I stuttered. “Yes would Du like to do that and I’ll turn on the lights.” he says “o-okay” what was wrong with me I’ve known him since I was five I’ve never acted like this. He puts me on my feet I walked to joses bett and sat down where he’s not lying down and gently shook him. “jose wake up.” I say nicely then the lights go on and he wakes up drying his eyes then he sees Domingo and turns and dries he eyes completely in his blanket Domingo has always been joses’ role model “ It’s seven o’clock why are we all awake?” jose asked. I looked at Domingo letting him know to lie. “I couldn’t sleep.” was my lie. “I rolled off the couch and fell” was his. “They have free breakfast here so let’s eat and we’ll be on our way.” he sagte in a calm voice. We all walked to the office to eat our breakfast and drop off our key we had our backpacks on our shoulders thou Domingo insisted on carrying one of mine but I sagte “Nope” then he smiled and sagte “then I’ll have to take it Von force miss Luna” he playfully tackled me in the sand in front of the motel and tickled me. “Stop” I sagte laughing “give me the backpack then” he sagte playfully. “Fine” I sagte still laughing he lifted me up and took my other bag. Then jose finally came to us and sagte “I’m full” I ruffled his hair then Domingo sagte “cool then lets go”
*
About seven hours of walking we found an abandoned house. “Domingo is this the place Du were talking about?” I asked a bit creped out. The house was painted black and the windows were broken the door was painted bloody red so were the stairs. “No” he answered calmly. jose was suddenly clinged to my leg I twisted his shaggy hair in my fingers like I normally do when I’m nerves. Doming glanced at us and sagte “let’s keep moving” he lead the way once again. He lead us to a camping ground then I noticed something on his shoulder he had a mark it looked like a bird “Domingo I think Du accidentally burned yourself look at your shoulder” I sagte he looked at his shoulder “looks like I Did” he sagte like he’d been planning that. “jose and Luna get some sleep hand me a sleeping bag please Luna.” I handed him the bag. I had I weird dream that night. “Luna!” a voice I knew that voice it was joses. I looked for him. And when I found him he was scared like he’s been that way for hours. When he saw me he ran to me. “jose what’s wrong?” I asked. “Doming-go w-” that’s all he sagte before someone woke me up. The sun was high in the sky. “C’mon we need to get going if we-” Domingo got cut off. When I yelped. “Luna what was that for?” Domingo asked his voice full of concern. All I did was point to what I saw I don’t know what people called it because my brain wasn’t working then, it was human oder it looked that way but it had hooves and goat horns on its head. Then it hit me satyr that’s what they called them in Greek mythology. Then I thought I’ve gone mad. “Well, well how are Du Joe? It has been awhile.” Domingo said. “Why?” was all the satyr called Joe said. “Let’s not talk about that now I’m taking them to the RIGHT camp.” domingo said.
"you mean the-" joe got cut off Von domingo "you don't deserve to say his name!" domingo shouted. "let them chose son of Athena" joe said. wait did he just say Athena thats it i've Lost it. "NO!" domingo said. then he grabed mine and my brother upper arms and jerked us away when we were 2 feet away three people came out of the woods that suronded us. a girl with short bronse hair and a blue hemd, shirt that sagte "camp demigod" she had a messer pointed at domingo. two boys had the same hemd, shirt but had swords. i blinked in shock what kind of camp lets kids use those. the first boy was quite cute black hair like mine but less pale and had light brown eyes. the other boy had red hair and blue green eyes. were they here to kill us?
We’re finally out of the house and coughing I looked at my ivory skin marked with ashes I looked at jose same thing. “jose do Du have the money and your clothes?” I ask “yes do Du have the Essen and your clothes?” my little brother asked I can explain the bags we wanted to run away because our parents were splitting up.“Of course oh my goodness look at Domingos’ house” I say. It is also on feuer we see one person stumble out “jose we need to see who that is.” I say. He already was running to see who it is. “Thank goodness we need to get out of here” I know that voice its Domingo. I pull him up he has a bag too “Domingo where are we going to go?” I ask “I have an idea but, first lets get out of here think of what the cops will think of three kids two houses on feuer and we have bags filled with stuff we’ll need” he says. “Lead the way” kyan says. We all schlinge our backpacks on our shoulders and walked.
*
About four hours later we found a cheap motel called “seashore palace”. Our room number was 184. We opened the door it was ……different the walls were baby blue with a wave pattern on it sea shells hung every where the beds were bright red the sheets were rosa and the couch was tan. “It looks like a monkey blindfolded picked it out” I said. jose and Domingo chuckled. “Luna that’s an insult to monkeys” Domingo said. I turned around he was closer then I thought. I blinked and sagte “what’s your idea?” I asked. He looked down at me smiling I couldn’t help but smile back and look at his gray eyes. Then jose cleared his throat and sagte “your plan.” Domingo look at his backpack and unzipped it then pulled out a folded map. He unfolded it on one of the bett and sagte “if we thru Galveston island we can go here that should be an abandoned house oder camp I forgot.” he said. “Why is it abandoned?” I asked “it might be I meant” he sagte reassuringly. “Luna, Du and jose sleep on the beds I’ll sleep on the couch.” Domingo said. “Are Du sure Du could sleep on a bett I’ve shared a bett with jose before.” I babbled. “No, Luna its ok I wouldn’t be nice to have Du and kyan crammed in one bed.” he was so thoughtful. “Okay” I finally agreed.
*
That night I woke up to the sound of jose crying I got out of bett and ran to wake him but instead ran into something solid. Arms caught me before I fell. “Good morning Luna” Domingo sagte “Um we have to wake up jose he’s crying” I stuttered. “Yes would Du like to do that and I’ll turn on the lights.” he says “o-okay” what was wrong with me I’ve known him since I was five I’ve never acted like this. He puts me on my feet I walked to joses bett and sat down where he’s not lying down and gently shook him. “jose wake up.” I say nicely then the lights go on and he wakes up drying his eyes then he sees Domingo and turns and dries he eyes completely in his blanket Domingo has always been joses’ role model “ It’s seven o’clock why are we all awake?” jose asked. I looked at Domingo letting him know to lie. “I couldn’t sleep.” was my lie. “I rolled off the couch and fell” was his. “They have free breakfast here so let’s eat and we’ll be on our way.” he sagte in a calm voice. We all walked to the office to eat our breakfast and drop off our key we had our backpacks on our shoulders thou Domingo insisted on carrying one of mine but I sagte “Nope” then he smiled and sagte “then I’ll have to take it Von force miss Luna” he playfully tackled me in the sand in front of the motel and tickled me. “Stop” I sagte laughing “give me the backpack then” he sagte playfully. “Fine” I sagte still laughing he lifted me up and took my other bag. Then jose finally came to us and sagte “I’m full” I ruffled his hair then Domingo sagte “cool then lets go”
*
About seven hours of walking we found an abandoned house. “Domingo is this the place Du were talking about?” I asked a bit creped out. The house was painted black and the windows were broken the door was painted bloody red so were the stairs. “No” he answered calmly. jose was suddenly clinged to my leg I twisted his shaggy hair in my fingers like I normally do when I’m nerves. Doming glanced at us and sagte “let’s keep moving” he lead the way once again. He lead us to a camping ground then I noticed something on his shoulder he had a mark it looked like a bird “Domingo I think Du accidentally burned yourself look at your shoulder” I sagte he looked at his shoulder “looks like I Did” he sagte like he’d been planning that. “jose and Luna get some sleep hand me a sleeping bag please Luna.” I handed him the bag. I had I weird dream that night. “Luna!” a voice I knew that voice it was joses. I looked for him. And when I found him he was scared like he’s been that way for hours. When he saw me he ran to me. “jose what’s wrong?” I asked. “Doming-go w-” that’s all he sagte before someone woke me up. The sun was high in the sky. “C’mon we need to get going if we-” Domingo got cut off. When I yelped. “Luna what was that for?” Domingo asked his voice full of concern. All I did was point to what I saw I don’t know what people called it because my brain wasn’t working then, it was human oder it looked that way but it had hooves and goat horns on its head. Then it hit me satyr that’s what they called them in Greek mythology. Then I thought I’ve gone mad. “Well, well how are Du Joe? It has been awhile.” Domingo said. “Why?” was all the satyr called Joe said. “Let’s not talk about that now I’m taking them to the RIGHT camp.” domingo said.
"you mean the-" joe got cut off Von domingo "you don't deserve to say his name!" domingo shouted. "let them chose son of Athena" joe said. wait did he just say Athena thats it i've Lost it. "NO!" domingo said. then he grabed mine and my brother upper arms and jerked us away when we were 2 feet away three people came out of the woods that suronded us. a girl with short bronse hair and a blue hemd, shirt that sagte "camp demigod" she had a messer pointed at domingo. two boys had the same hemd, shirt but had swords. i blinked in shock what kind of camp lets kids use those. the first boy was quite cute black hair like mine but less pale and had light brown eyes. the other boy had red hair and blue green eyes. were they here to kill us?
I wake up. It's early in the morning. A cool wind blows Von my face whispering sounds i don't understand. I look up at the sky and notice that it is a light blue color and it makes me feel that there is no problems in the world. Looking around i get a different story.
Blood everywhere. Bodies over bodies and not a living soul in sight. Who could have done this? My head starts to spin and my vision is going blurry. A creature appears from the wind that was flying Von my head earlier.
This creature starts walking torwards me speaking in a language that I have never heard before. I go to reach for my gun and find a giant hole in my right leg. It continues to get closer and closer and is staring at me as if to be a hunter and I am it's prey.
Knowing that this is the end I look up at the sky. Beginning to close my eyes the last of my sights are focused ont he Blue Skys.
Blood everywhere. Bodies over bodies and not a living soul in sight. Who could have done this? My head starts to spin and my vision is going blurry. A creature appears from the wind that was flying Von my head earlier.
This creature starts walking torwards me speaking in a language that I have never heard before. I go to reach for my gun and find a giant hole in my right leg. It continues to get closer and closer and is staring at me as if to be a hunter and I am it's prey.
Knowing that this is the end I look up at the sky. Beginning to close my eyes the last of my sights are focused ont he Blue Skys.
Sky turns black. Memory fades. through all of this tragedy fate has taken my memories from me. No other thoughts. herz pounding. Blood racing. No Mehr time for thinking. Think quick and on my feet oder death will surely get its grasp on me. As my enemy approaches i draw my sword. Once the tip of the blade is out of the sheath i hear it hit the ground as i feel a warm liquid pouring out of my open chest as blood gushes out of the wound. As i struggle to take my last breath i wake up screaming relieved that it was just a DREAM.
I have this image in my head of a girl who spent the first 17 years of her life being loved. Loved Von her parents, her brother and sister, and everyone in school. She doesn't know the meaning of hate. Then this mysterious guy come to her school. He doesn't say much and the only person he notices is her. But he is different then the other guys at her school he is too sexy to be real. They fall madly in Liebe but what she doesn't know is that he has been alive for the last 268 years. He is no vampire but something that can scare the helll out of you. And he has a immortal enemy, and that enemy is the boy who is filled with so much hate all the immortals call him...The deffinition of hate(his real name being Marcus) And the girl so finds out that Marcus will stop at nothing to take her away from him and Zeigen her what it's like to be hated