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A shadowy figure silently brushed the silken curtains aside as she slipped through the open window and stepped into the dark chamber. Passing a small tabelle and a bed, the fuchs quickly headed towards a cabinet that stood against the far wall.
Beaded necklaces hung above a oval mirror that was set in the center. Her eyes rested on a miniature strongbox half hidden behind the mirror.
Paying no heed to the deafening clatter coming from the oblivious guest downstairs, she skillfully picked the tiny lock and raised the lid. It was hard to tell what was what in the darkness, so she emptied it into a sack, before replacing the strongbox on oben, nach oben of the cabinet.
Suddenly, the door burst open and two mice entered, dressed in servants’ clothing.
Lexi crouched in the shadows, pulling the haube of her blue mottled mantel over her head with one hand, the other resting on the hilt of her dagger.
The light from the mice’s lanterns cast a soft glow about the room as they sat at the table, chattering in lively tones. The Minuten slipped away, but they appeared to be in no hurry to leave. Lexi felt herself growing stiff and shifted slightly. And still the mice talked on, about everything from the winter weather to good old Willa’s pies. Who Willa was, Lexi had no idea.
Gradually, they lowered their voices, from time to time glancing around them.
The fuchs became increasingly curious. She understood a word here and there, but the subject of the conversation remained a mystery.
Then she heard a word, the name.
The world seemed to spin as she sprung up and crossed the room to stand between the servants and the door.
They let out a cry and staggered to their feet in shock at her sudden appearance.
“Now,” she said, her voice low. “What is it that Du were saying?”
“N-nothing.” the older maus stammered.
The fuchs took a step forward, her eyes locked on his face. “You sure about that, are you?” she asked.
He nodded hurriedly.
Turning to the younger mouse, she inquired, “What’s the news about Mirrikh?”
Fear flickered across his face. “What is it to you, thief?” he said, looking to the other maus for help.
“That should not matter to Du in the least. I’m not playing games, as Du know, I am between Du and your only way out. Now, tell me everything Du know.” Lexi said.
The young maus glanced to the older one for help before beginning. “Mirrikh and his army were seen departing from Mount Everen and word is that they are marching toward Zamari. Hundreds of solders, I have heard. All of the simple folk are leaving now. The king and his warriors are going to stay, but they have no chance of winning.”
“You can say.” she muttered.
“That’s all I know.” he promised quietly.
The older maus stepped forward. “Now Du tell me what you’re doing here, in the dead of night, lurking around in Sir Javan and Lady Salone’s bedchamber?” he sagte angrily.
“Just surviving.” she said, brushing past them. Reaching the window, she looked over her shoulder at the mice who were watching her every move.
“You will be hung.” The older maus said.
“We’ll see.” Lexi answered before disappearing out the open window.



Lexi made her way briskly through the nearly deserted alleyways. At midnight, most creatures were asleep in their homes; the few that were roaming the streets were most likely up to no good. The fuchs kept to the shadows, staying out of sight from any bypassers.
Soon she stood at the entrance of the Dancing Lilly, a small inn built at the end of Wind Street. Circling around to the back, she paused and let out three short whistles.
A moment latter, a knotted rope descended from the small attic window. She hasty climbed, the rope swaying beneath her, until she was able to haul herself through the window and into the loft. Aldah, a young rat, was coiling the rope with a questing look on her face. “So, how was it?” she asked.
Lexi walked past the old tables, chairs, and wooden crates that littered the attic floor. She opened a kiste to reveal a small pile of weapons, clothes, and a few other things , which was all that belonged to the fox.
“I’m leaving for Zamari tonight. Du can leave the rope hanging.” she responded, not looking up. “Tonight?” Aldah exclaimed, maneuvering around a broken tabelle to stand beside the fox. “Lexi, it takes a good week to get to Zamari. Why go now?” the ratte asked.
Lexi laid a folded map alongside a quiver of arrows on the table. “Because,” she answered. “Mirrikh will be there.”
Aldah eyes widened. “Mirrikh the wildcat? King Raja’s brother?” she asked.
“The very same.” Lexi answered, drawing the bow and adjusting the string.
“Then we should stay as far away as possible. Unless you’re thinking of joining his army.” Aldah stated. When Lexi didn’t answered, she asked, “You’re not, are you?”
The fuchs glanced up from her work. “No, I’m looking for someone, he should be there.”
“But do we have to leave now? Lets wait until the morning, that way it will be less noticeable.” she persisted.
“I don’t remember asking Du to come along.” Lexi said, laying the bow on the table.
“You didn’t have to.” the ratte said. “That’s what Friends do.”
Lexi smiled. “Ok. We will wait ‘till morning, no later.” she sagte as she gathered the rest of the stuff that she would be taking with her. She spotted a red hat that was laying under a chair.
“Where did this come from?” she asked, picking up the strange-looking hat. It was decorated with dried Blumen of many Farben and a large black feather in the center.
Aldah quickly snatched the hat from Lexi and delicately set it on her head. “How does it look?” the ratte asked, stepping back. “Found it in the back ally. Someone must’ve dropped it.”
“Well…it’s… it’s different.” Lexi managed to say.
Aldah took it off. “I’m glad Du liked it.” she huffed.
“That reminds me. Here’s what I got from Javan’s place.” Lexi said, reaching under her mantel for the sack. The ratte watched as she poured it onto the table. The many-colored jewels sparkled in the candle light. “I told you!” Aldah gasped, reaching for a ruby ring.
“We’re keeping all of these.” Lexi said.
They had a rule that anything they did not need would be gegeben away to someone less fortunate
then themselves. Now, with a long journey ahead, the fuchs was not willing risk any delays. At last, after two long years, she had a lead. A lead to the one who had killed her family and ruined her life.
If he was in Mirrikh’s army - if he was still alive - she would find him.
She had to. On that stormy night long ago, she had sworn to destroy him.
The one-eyed ratte would pay.
“I am coming, Aviso.” she whispered into the night.
posted by candyvtoby511
Tess’s parents were shot down right before her eyes, coming out through the side door of a theatre. She couldn’t understand why he had killed them and not her. The murderer was young, maybe even the same age as herself. He was disguised as an older man, but she could still tell he was quite young, 14 oder so.
Tess is walking late at night with her dog alone, thinking about her parent’s mysterious murderer; why didn’t he kill her as well? What motive did he have to kill them? She ponders over the words her mother spoke in her dying breath; what did she mean that I shouldn’t trust him?...
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 Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture Von Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture by Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Ray, Britain’s Fashion Icon of The Jahr 2011 (Fashions Finest Awards), successfully opened Fashion Week Gibraltar on 18 April 2012 at the Casemates Gallery in Gibraltar.
London – In front of an excited crowd Emmanuel Raygave a short speech thanking everyone who came to the opening, his publicist David J Mann, director ofHighmore PR, and Fashion Week Gibraltar’s organiser and fashion designer Reene Weston. He then proceeded to cut the red ribbon allowing everyone to start their Fashion Week experience.
Emmanuel had this to say about the opening,
“What an amazing experience it was....
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If i get enough Kommentare i will extend it.

It was damp, smelled of earth and pine, I heard leaves rustle, twigs snap as Tiere scurried in the baum tops. I wasn't supposed to be here, this wasn't my room, my bed. I was supposed to me in Von cottage on eagle lake. I was supposed to be asleep, oben, nach oben bunk with my younger brother Elliot on the bottom. I was supposed to be smelling fabric softener and hear the soft snore from little Elli, feel the heat of my cat sleeping on my chest. I opened my eyes and I could see the sky, black with soft twinkle of a million star, sterne and the florescent glow of the moon....
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posted by precious211
“Before we leave I must warn you. We are now entering alien territory, so be careful and considerate to you’re new surroundings. One stupid mistake can get you, and everyone around Du killed.”

The safety instructor’s voice boomed across the large, air conditioned spaceship. It sounded oddly cheerful for someone who had just told them that they could all die.
Everyone tried to see where her line of vision was pointing towards. It was aimed toward the windows.
Kendra glanced through them and, and gulped. They were about four thousand feet above sea level, and the Weltraum craft had just...
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Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if Du want to convey your thoughts accurately. Du also want your Schreiben to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is Mehr annoying than Lesen a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of Schreiben sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
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Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

2


Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...
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posted by cutiegirl01
(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...
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posted by NormalcyIsDead
Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap


Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock


One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat


Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As Du bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap
posted by dragonwriter
As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes vorwärts-, nach vorn the mind and body of an individual changes for either good oder bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years Vor Von a wise old man that fortold my future. He sagte "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's Lost Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him Mehr shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a safe, sicher distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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In this series of guides, I'll be Wird angezeigt Du the best techniques for Schreiben your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what Du may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, Du have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before Du decide on a plot, Du should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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posted by PhoenixRoyale
This is another poem that I have written. It was inspired Von some Kommentare about stuffed animals/plushies on Youtube being people's friends. Enjoy.
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The Stuffed Animal.
To some, they are stupid.
They are useless.
They are disgusting little balls of fluff.

Those people think that it's necessary
to pick on the innocence of others
for having a collection of their own.
They poke fun, they tease, they even insult.

They target that person's age.
Sometimes even their gender.
They think they need to grow up.
They think these fluffy plushies are meant for babies.

But to those innocent people,
the ones who are quite...
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posted by shenelopefan
La parte prohibida del parque

"La depresión es la que guía, la alegría es la que llega"

En la ciudad dónde yo vivía de niña, había un parque en dónde siempre pasaba las tardes con mis amigos. Éramos un grupito de niñas y niños que nos juntábamos a jugar en ronda, cantábamos canciones que no tenían sentido (casi nuestro propio idioma, de hecho) y recorríamos todo el parque jugando a las escondidillas.

Bueno, no todo el parque porque había una a la que los adultos no les gustaba que vayamos. Era un sector tan lleno de árboles que, desde afuera parecía una selva en medio de un parque...
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The room is silent, as always. Nothing can be heard, aside from the soft rasp of pencil on paper. Words take form, joining various thoughts into one whole. On the outside, nothing is different from the average writer. To find what sets me apart, we must look deeper than the surface.
Inside my mind, Bilder and ideas race about, sometimes colliding, sometimes not. This whirlwind is composed of everything I know, read, seen, heard, oder thought of. It is here that my greatest works begin to form.
To Zeigen how thw whiirlwind works, let us have an example. During practice for spring track, I noticed...
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If Du mates like it, comment, I'll make Mehr if anyone notices it =3

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''Oi, Du guys! What are Du doin'?!'' screamed a brown haired boy from the street.
''Mind your own business and go back under your momma's skirt, oder you'll get some too!'' replied the tallest boy on playground, probably the leader of the rest 4 boys.
5 of them were teasing one small boy, taking away from him candies and ruining his game on playground. The brown haired boy frowned with his black eyes and started walking towards them.
''You scum really have guts! 5 tall Hunde on 1 small...
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posted by dragonsmemory
The Eden Chronicles is the Fantasy series I am currently working on. As the series is in progress, I decided to add a club here, allowing you, Reader, to tell me your thoughts.
In Schreiben the series, I decided to document the entire history of Eden. I called this place Eden because it is where the spirits of dead Tiere and plants are taken. No humanspirit has ever been pure enough to come here. Eden is a true paradise.
The first book, A Little Bit Mehr Than Love, takes place toward the end of Eden's history. Later in the series, I hope to explain the past. Once I get caught up, I will then...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 3: Here It Goes Again.
Roxana woke up one night to hear a loud howl outside her window, she slided herself out of bett with her covers wrapped around her, she walked toward the window and saw a somewhat a large white wolf outside, watching her then it turned its head to hear other Wölfe howling, the white wolf runs off to follow the howl, Roxana felt like she knew that wolf for a long time, Roxana walked back to her bett and lies down, but she couldn't sleep, she kept tossing and turning but she couldn't sleep, she sat up, grab her wallet and pull out a Foto of a beautiful, pale-skinned,...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 1: Don't Change Me.
A young and beautiful succubus named Roxana opened her green eyes as she sees the sun flooded her dark room with lights from her windows, she sat up in her twin bed, the mattress was tan and her covers were Schokolade brown color, she pulled herself out of the bett and throws on her black tank top, then she slipped on her jeans on her long and beautiful legs, Roxana then walked in her bathroom and brushed her long red hair slowly as she stares at herself in the mirrior, she put her brush on the sink and walked outside, as she walks, she turns around as she feels like...
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We were builders. We were builders, fighters, scholars, but Mehr importantly, friends. When the Government took all our rights away, our food, money, our culture, we allied ourselves against it. But they had a machine. A machine that could sail the seas and air. It was called, The Oppresive. The Oppresive forced us underground, making us creatures of the very soil they walk on. But it is time for our revolution. We have a great machine, bigger than the Oppresive, and stronger than it. It will trample them like a boy tramples grass. No resistance at all, we are sure of it. We are ready. We have...
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posted by DarrenGruch
Ever since my family died down to be just me.... I`ve been alone since they died in a car accident. I got out fine (only with cuts and a migrane), but they died. I now live with my grandpa... but he doesn't get me..... I cut my self, dresss diffrently, and never really talk.

4 days after the funeral for my family.... I became Emo. But the Tag my Family died, something changed within me..... something good went rotten.
My Grandpa see's it, but ignores my pain and anger... only if that drunk driver that hit us was sober and never... spun out of control. Some Tag I hope his herz gives out and he dies in jail.

Does any one feel the same?
posted by noahnstar1616
"Are okay, V?" Francine was checking me for bruises.

"I'm fine."

"We're so telling the principal." Zoey grabbed my arm.

"No, it's okay. She didn't hurt me." I rubbed my arm where Mercury dug her nails in. She didn't leave permanent marks.

"What happened?" They both waited for my response.

I told them how Mercury knew that I felt something when Cameron was visiting me in the hospital. How she knew I was trying to get him back. How I saw her eyes glowing red, like a sea witch's eyes when angry.

"You know what this means, right?" Francine and I waited for Zoey's answer. "That Mercury is the sea witch...
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