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posted by StarPotterRings
How's it going do Du think?
Milgas walked Home deep in thought. How am I going to tell everyone?
He walked on the ground so he could think without falling out of a tree. He knew though exactly where he was. All the houses in the trees glowed with the faint light of candles. It’s getting late, Milgas thought. He could tell because one Von one the houses extinguished into darkness.
Milgas finally came to his parent’s house in the branches of an old oak. The lights were still on. He climbed the low branches and finally reached the door. He could now see the features of the house. It was small with one floor, three rooms, and a cozy look to it.
He drew in a sharp breath and opened the door. His parents were sitting in chairs at the fireplace. Milgas had his father’s hair and his mother’s eyes. They both had smooth faces that had a concerned look.
His siblings were sitting at the feet of his parents’ chairs. His older sister, Neala was built like him with dark blonde hair, blue eyes, and a rigid face that showed no emotion. His younger brother and sister, Siam and Haras were stockier with green eyes. The only difference betweem them was their hair, Siam had Neala’s and Haras had Milgas’s.
Then there was Latane who was pacing. She had beautiful brown hair with hazel eyes. There was worry in her smooth face. When she saw him in the doorway she gave a relieved laugh, he loved her laugh.
“Milgas we were getting worried, why were Du out so late?” asked his father.
“We thought something had happened to you, don’t scare us like that.” sagte Latane, and she came over and hugged him.
“I’m sorry but I…. got caught up in something.” sagte Milgas.
“What was it?” asked Siam.
“Please sit down.” sagte Milgas. He beckoned them to the chairs. They sat down. “I’m going to….to journey out and….make peace with the other races.”
Everyone stared in shock. Finally his mother spoke up. “What, why?”
“Men have come back.” sagte Milgas.
“What, Du must be joking.” sagte Siam.
“No I’m not, and they brought terrible things with them. The council has gegeben me a chance to call for aid. I will leave in a week.”
The tension was so thick in the room Du could almost see it. Then his mother said. “No, you’re not going I won’t allow it.”
“It’s all set in stone already. I am going.” Milgas said.
“No your mothers right you’re not going.” sagte his father forcefully.
“I am going, I need to help this world.” sagte Milgas in as strong a voice as he could.
“No Milgas we have made our decision Du are not going.” sagte his father in an even stronger voice.
The little voice in the back of Milgas’ head came back again. Du must go, Du need to help! It said. Finally Milgas burst out as he had at the meeting in the field.
“No! I am going, even if Du don’t approve it! Du cannot control me, I will save this world! I will not be a coward and hide behind these trees anymore! Goodbye,” his voice became softer, “I hope I will see Du again.”
With that Milgas walked across the room and slammed the door at his back, leaving a few shocked faces.
*
The Weiter few days were spent collecting supplies and making a plan. He got enough Essen for two weeks and enough water for three weeks.
He had avoided his parents during this time. Although he often saw his siblings oder Latane walking through the trees oder on the ground.
On the final night before he would venture out he met with Rama in a small hidden house.
“Are Du sure Du want to go?” asked Rama
Milgas had been having Sekunde thoughts, he was scared of what would lie beyond. But he swallowed his fear and said. “Yes.”
“Okay then.” He looked outside a window and nodded.
“I will give Du time to say goodbye to your family in case…. Well, Du won’t see them for a while so, just say goodbye for now.” Rama said, than left through the door. Just then Milgas’ father came in carrying a long wooden box.
“I’m sorry, about the other night.” sagte Milgas.
“Don’t be, I should be the one sorry. I was just worried about you.” sagte his father. “Anyway, since you’re going on this quest I thought I’d give Du this.” He opened the box and pulled out a long curved bow.
This was not any ordinary bow though. It was his families bow, passed down from generations. His grandfather had always told him how the ancestor who created the bow had killed a bulkeido (a wildebeest two times in size with a horn sticking out of its head) from a mile away. Milgas never knew if this was just a legend oder if it was true. And he never found out.
“Thank you.” It was all Milgas could say. To own this bow was a huge honor in his family.
“I think it will serve Du Mehr than it ever did me.”
His father stuck out his hand, and Milgas shook it. He pulled his father into a hug.
“Be careful.”
“I will.” replied Milgas. With that his father left to be replaced Von his mother.
“I’m s-”
“I know, dad already told me.” Milgas interrupted.
His mother drew him into a hug faster than lightening.
“Promise me you’ll be careful.” she sagte teary eyed.
“I will.” he said.
“Take this.” she sagte holding out a cloak. “It belonged to your grandmother. Use it wisely.”
Milgas didn’t understand what she meant when she sagte use it wisely but he sagte “Thank you.”
When she left his siblings came in one Von one wishing him good luck and telling him to be careful. Eventually Latane came in
Faster than his mother, Latane pulled him into a hug.
“I’ll miss you.”
“Me too.”
She let go. “You’ll be careful?”
Milgas could never lie to her so he said. “I’ll try.”
She quickly kissed him and sagte “Goodbye.” before fast-walking to and out the door. Leaving Milgas alone in the room.
He looked out the window and saw the sun disappearing over the distant mountains. He covered his eyes and thought. What am I doing? I can’t help, I’m just an elf.
“Milgas, Du should get some rest before Du go.” sagte Rama bringing Milgas out of his thoughts.
“I can’t do it, what was I thinking?” sagte Milgas sadly.
“Milgas look at me.” Rama put his hands on Milgas’ shoulders. “You will do it! Du will succeed. Du have what others here do not, a willing heart.”
Milgas could feel his courage stirring inside him again. He looked into Rama’s face and nodded slightly
“Now go, get some rest. Du will leave early tomorrow.”
Milgas bowed and walked back to his house. He jumped up onto his small porch and opened the door into his cozy two room house.
I better get to sleep now. Milgas sagte to himself. He walked into his room, got softly into bed, and slept.
*
Hatred, fire, death, darkness, monstrosities. Milgas woke up gasping, he had been having a nightmare that he agreed to go on a quest to journey into all those things. Thank goodness it was just a dream, he thought relieved.
He started making eggs for himself when a knock came on the door. Milgas quickly opened it.
Rama was standing there. “Milgas you’re going to be late, get ready quickly!”
So it hadn’t been a dream. He got dressed. He felt inside him a mixture of fear, excitement, and sorrow.
He walked outside and jumped to the ground.
“Here is your supplies.” sagte Rama handing over a pack. “Are Du ready?”
Milgas went through his supplies mentally and remembered. “Wait I will be right back.” he said. He jumped and ran back inside. He grabbed his cloak, put it on and jumped out.
Rama looked confused for a moment then said. “Okay let’s go.”
They walked silently to the northern border of Ralgoth. The silence gave Milgas time to see the features for what might be the last time. He saw the Blumen on the edge of the hidden roads. The trees so thick they hid the houses from view.
Finally they got to the edge. The trees stopped suddenly, and there was mostly grassland beyond. In the distance Milgas could see the mountain range called Penkal.
“Ready?” asked Rama
“Yes.” replied Milgas with as much courage as he could muster.
“Then go now Milgas, and the best of luck to you.”
Milgas stepped outside the forest edge, and started to walk. He looked back one last time, but Rama was gone. He was now leaving his Home behind. He turned back to the north and walked out into the world beyond.

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