Schreiben Article: My Bullied Life: Max Lee Moore's About Me

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My Bullied Life: Max Lee Moore's About Me

posted by iHelloUniverse

Hello to the cold world, I was named Max Lee Moore Von the parents who absolutely despise me. I am sixteen years old at the moment, will be turning seventeen on June 27th. But who gives a crud? Du know what I receive for my birthday every year? For how old I am, like sixteen. I get sixteen whips from a belt. My dad doesn't live with me anymore to whip me, so there's my mother. She gets a kick out of every whip. It seems to make her ecstatic. Each whip equals to one of her evil laughs. She whips me any chance she wants to. It pains me so much that I'm surprised I haven't committed suicide yet. Hell, I've been contemplating suicide for almost three years now. Du want to know the real reason why I haven't killed myself yet? The reason is, I have the hope of one Tag being able to speak to the girl of my dreams. Her name is Ally Nicole Vernon. I Liebe just everything about her. She's kind. She's beautiful. She's smart. She's funny. She's... perfect. She's not a beliebt girl, but it seems that everyone loves her. Ally treats everyone how she'd want to be treated. She's always helping out at school. I've loved her since she attended Pave View when she was in the ninth grade. I was at my locker with my Black Veil Brides bag over my shoulder. I heard a voice... so beautiful, so I turned. There she was... the most beautiful girl I've ever seen in my life. The thing is... she doesn't realize I exist. I'm invisible to her. We're in the same biology and drama classes, though she still sees right through me. It's like I'm nothing but air. When I'm bullied, it seems she notices me, but I'm not for sure. I'm still sure she sees right through me. Just wonders what the bullies are angered about. Getting to the bullies, well, they tape insults on my locker about me being Emo and a fag. That makeup is for fags. That I should kill myself and cut myself. And crap like that. I get beat up in the bathroom. Because they know the teachers never go in there. They just go to the teachers' lounge oder whatever the hell it is.

My life is pathetic. Don't feel sorry for me. I don't effin' deserve it.

I-Luv-L, rose12345 and 1 other like this

LaDispute AW. You write this kid Max really well, with good voice so it's not at all cliche like someone else would've made it. Your story is going to be awesome. ^_^

iHelloUniverse Thank youuuuu!!! :D You're so sweet!

GreenLight24 Yeah i used to get beat up. :/ but it was mostly because of me being so small and being bi. im glad somebody's got the courage to write this kind of stuff. :) I published two articles in my Blacktie series that have to do w/ a kid who becomes a supervillain after being bullied....check em out their on this club!

GreenLight24 and poor max....

Hidden Secret: Chapter 12

posted by DxCFan123

.. my little sister Leaisl. B-B-But the image wasn't from my eyes, no. From her eyes at my... my funeral

'Sam is very peaceful, Mama. I would Liebe to be like her' I said, twirling Samantha's hair around my finger
'Lea, she's-' sagte Kevin
'She doesn't know!!' Grandma hissed back
'Know about what?'
'That Sammie is in a state of peace. To be like her, Du must disconnect from the li- I mean, outside world. Are Du willing to do this?'

Godfather wolf stepped out of the shadows behind us and into the light. He stared at me with his one eye, the other bandaged. 'I-I-I am not sure. I will think about it,...

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Invasion-Chapter 1. "The Rebellion begins."

posted by dexisawesome

Jed was a part of the Rebellion against the Syndicate of Alien Beings (S.A.B.). oder like most enslaved races call them, the Monsters. In 2067, S.A.B arrived on Earth in Suchen of fuel sources for their machines, not expecting to find a whole planet that has been living for centuries unconquered. Caught unexpected, the S.A.B. slowly amassed their forces, while countries all across world united. North Korea, Russia, China, all those countries that were on the opposing sides during all the wars, united alongside all the other countries. With the whole world united, the U.W.O. (United World Order)formed...

Hidden Secret: Chapter 10

posted by DxCFan123

"Oh, Hey Sam!" I sagte as I found her in the hall while going to lunch. "How are you? Du seem upset. Something wrong?" I said. The edges of my rock floated up as I walked. Marie's jewelery jingled along my neck, ears, wrists and fingers. It really hurt to get my ears pierced, but the earrings are so beautiful!

"Nothing's wrong" she murmured and pulled her arms closer to her chest. She looked away from me, at the floor. "Ah, come on! Something's gotta be wrong! Trust me! I know! One time, my cousin, Valeria, accidently fell off her carriage and twisted her ankle. But, still, she told us she...

A Little Too Curious (part 11)

posted by noahnstar1616

My herz rate increased, causing my herz monitor to start beeping erratically. Not at the sight of Cameron, but at the sight of Mercury.

Cameron must've noticed because he ran up to me and said, "Vanessa, calm down."

I kept my eyes on Mercury. "What's she doing here?"

"You should be greatful that I came to see you", Mercury said.

"Mercury..." Cameron turned to face me. "She drove me here."

"After he hit you, the police too his car away", Mercury said, grabbing my Fernsehen vision remote and changing the channel.

"Hey!"

"Don't worry about the television, Vanessa." Cameron sat down on the couch chair...

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Death Targets Ch.4

posted by problematic124

**Thanks for the Kommentare and please don't copy**
Chapter 4
Light bills
It was a few days after the brownie incident, thankfully nobody knew who dropped the brownie but since it was on the floor the snack room was on lockdown for a few days.Today was the last Tag and people were jumping down in anticipation.
And I became one of the group when I was informed of a pizza/popcorn party I was invited to.
"It's on Friday night after school bring lots of Süßigkeiten and Filme and prepare for the worst" Tweety informed me
"The worst?"
"The weathermen say it might rain and maybe with thunder and lightning we might...

Invasion-Prolougue

posted by dexisawesome

Jed was running. Running from a dark figure a few feet behind. "You will never escape!", the dark figure from behind yelled. "yes I will", he thought. He ran and ran, until he reached the dark grey building in the middle of the field. He ran inside and slammed the iron door shut. A few bangs came from the other side, but they subsided quickly. He ran down the hidden staircase that was under a kiste in the small shack. He reached the bottom, and passed through the small passageway until he came to another door. He opened and entered the dimly lit room. Five other people were sitting around some...

Movie's on part two (look at Artikel below for part one)

posted by lovepop

"No,no,no! Ponny, you're supposed to sound scared. like this, 'AAAA! The Coopestells! They're back!'" Hilisia said. She sagte the line terrifiying. Ponya rolled her eyes. "If I say it any Mehr frighted, my eyes will pop out! And anyway, you're NOT the director. I'm doing it wrong when Mr.Figgsten says so." Ponya snapped back. "Ok girls, from the top!" The girls got ready. Then suddenly, Ponya stretched her arm out to Hilisia(Luci) And said, "Luci! LOOK OUT!" "What? What Brenda?" "AAAA! The Coopestells! They're back!" "EEEEEEK!" "RUN!!!" They both said. Then the scene ended as they ran off stage. "Perfect!" Mr.Figgsten yelled. Huffing and puffing, the girls came offstage. "Hey Du guys I know it's short notice, but we will have to shoot the rest of the film in New jersey

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What To Do When Du Get Writer's Block-Full Guide

posted by Okuni

Hi Fans of Writing! I bet we all experienced Writer's Block before, heck, all writers must have. It's frustrating isn't it? So I devised 5 steps to get rid of it and get rid of it fast. If it doesn't work, devise your own plan, but here's mine.
P.S. If Du don't know what Writer's Block is oder if Du haven't experienced it yet, I'm not giving an explanation so find out what it's like first!

Step 1: Don't Panic
-Panicking oder fussing over your running out of inspiration will just make things worse and definitly lead straight to mind blank mode. So just relax and do something else other than writing....

I need Du chapter 3

posted by hailieywithin

The amount of sleep I got was not alot. I was always getting awoken Von visions of Emily with other guys. I loved her alot. But I am not obsessed with her only a crazy person would. With her eyes and hair and mouth. Fine I guess I am obsessed a little. But she wouldn't go away. The fight over and over again.
August 12,2011.
"hey Emily look at this"! Emily ran to the Kay jewelry store at gasped at the new shipments of sapphire diamonds. "there pretty aren't they"? I asked her as she gasped at the colors. She nodded this time looking at me. "just like you". I said. She smiled and we kissed on the...

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I need Du chapter 2

posted by hailieywithin

I glanced at my digital watch. 7:48. Exactly 2 hours Vor Emily my girlfriend of 1 Jahr broke up with me right as I was going to purpose. Occasionally Darla the sexy girl behind me would talk to me about collage. She was going to learn about getting a PHD in Physics. Darla was actually quite smart. She had a letters to 8 major collages. Then she would ask about my life. My dad died when I was 6 and my mom Lost custody of me when I was 12. I quit Tagträumen and prepared my things to get off at the nearest motel. We would take off again tomorrow. At about 5 minuets from a Red Inn Motel. As we...

Remember Me

posted by hailieywithin

Du pull up to you're moms house after getting abused Von your father. Du limp inside as she is on the couch with vodka. "MOM"! Du shout at she sees Du looking at the bottle. "I'm so sorry-name-". She hugs Du as Du cringe because of a bruise on your arm. She is shocked when Du tell her what happened. Quickly she calls the police and they arrest him and bring Du for questioning. Du break down in tears as Du tell them Du are sexually abused every week Du are there. When you're father is put in jail for twenty years Du believe Du are at ease. Days after Du fall down your stairs at...

The Orient Train (Short Story)

posted by Aisuanime

This is just a Vorschau image of a lovely Gothic Lolita, but not the same outlook as the girl described in this short -short- story :)

This is just a preview image of a lovely Gothic Lolita, but not the same outlook as the girl described in this short -short- story :)

The Orient Train

The petite girl distraughtly writhed to straighten her black and red ruffled dress. Its somber frills drew abnormally eye-catching, causing her to sustain its contour along with every dainty ribbon and bow fastened. This became a slight drawback however. The black spitze patently entangled with her mundane russet luggage affected the handle tousled within some lust-red ribbon. The legendary train will arrive at any moment. She tugged feebly to jerk the spitze and adornment free. It finally gave out, with a soft muffled rip, disrupting the hushed atmosphere. No other person seemed...

Bored People: Schreiben Comp (Round 1)

posted by wolfclan121

Are Du bored? Despretly trying to find something on Google, but everytime Du serch something innoceont weird and gross stuff just overflows your computor screen? Well, Mitmachen this Schreiben compeition! I will Liste five Zufällig genres and themes I pulled from a hat and all Du have to do is write a short story from a genre oder theme of your choice but it has to be one of the five. The compeition will run from November 07 2011 - November 21. Voting will start from November 21 - November 31.

Genres:
1. Mystery
2. Fan Fiction (Lucky You!)
3. Sci-Fi
4. Children's
5. Drama

As I said, there random.

Themes:
1. Magic
2. Sacrifice
3. True Story
4. Childhood
5. Anime (For Fan Fiction)
Just Post Your Entry on Fanpop and ur good to go!

The winner will recive 10 Requisiten and 5 runners up will recive 3 props. :P

Dying Truth - Part one

posted by Harrypotter148

This Is A Story Story Based On A Couple I Am Schreiben In Another Story, I wanna see if I can Get The Chemistry Right. Kal Is A Healer, He Has The Power To Heal People And Is Connected With Heaven. Like An Angel – Jäger der Finsternis But Less Powerful. Aria Is Half Healer, But Mehr Powerful, She Could Even Be Deadly.

Part 1

Aria sat outside her house rocking back and forth on her porch swing, the only sound was the squeaking of the rusting chains. The sky was darkening into a peaceful cloudless night, and it seemed like the things around her, did not want to ruin it. She never moved her gaze from the small little...

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In The Eyes Of Death: Chapter 6

posted by wolfclan121

A tear ran down Jannet's pale cheek. David's footsteps echoed in the hall like a man's last words, and for Jannet, they were last words David will ever say to her. We never saw David again. Never. It's a hard word to handle when inlove.

"NOOOOOOOO!!" Mike screamed. The moment was so mindblowing, we forgot we were in Mikeal's orphanage. "She's not dead! She can't be dead!" The careers grabbed him Von the arms, threw him to the ground and beat him. "Mike..." Jannet whispered, wiping a tear away. "Mike!" She shouted "Jane, don't interfeare, please!" I begged. It didn't work. When a spirit is enraged they have Mehr energy, kinda' like an adrenaline rush.

"Jannet, where are you?!" Mike shouted. "She's dead! Get over it, boy!" The Head Misstrus boomed. "LEAVE HIM!" Jannet demanded. The women stared at her in disbelif.

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The Certainty of Life

posted by darkwave

"I forgave almost unforgivable mistakes ...
I tried to replace irreplaceable and unforgettable people forget ...
I've done things on impulse ...
I've never been disappointed with people when I thought let me down ...
But someone disappointed ...
Already embraced to protect ...
Since I could not laugh when ...
I made Friends for life ...
I loved and was loved ...
But I've been rejected ...
I loved and not loved ...
It screamed and jumped for joy ...
I have lived and made vows of eternal Liebe ...
"I broke the face" many times ...
I cried listening to Musik and viewing Fotos ...
Since I called...

Zufällig Short Story I Had To Right For L.A Class

posted by karlygirl26

Beginning of Prologue

I opened my eyes to the bright sun shining in through my window. It was too bright that I had to squint. I rolled out of bett lazily and went to my closet to grab my clothes for today. I rubbed my eyes and looked into the mirror and saw my messy hair, it looked as if it were medusas hair. There was a knock on the door and the familiar voice called out my name like honey. “Jamie? Are Du awake yet?” Nick asked through the door. Quickly, I ran to my bedroom door and flung it open and collapsed into...

Only Death Can Breathe~Part 1

posted by Kimi4312

(This is a beliebt online novel I had been posting on my Facebook account, enjoy! ^_^)

~Chapter 1: How To Save A Life~
Dawn was a beautiful young woman who recently caught her boyfriend cheating on her with another woman, Dawn wrote a suicide note to give to her Friends Jessica, Kristina, Alison and Madison, Dawn puts on her black dress and takes a razor blade with her, Dawn walks on her apartment housing roof that is 20 feet below, she sits there watching her boyfriend have sex with another woman, Dawn's dark eyes begins to pour out tears as her herz begins to break she steps on the edge of...

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Bare Bones chapter 2 part 3

posted by Lore_Master

These side affects were takeing a toll on the hero gradually wearing him down, the doctor took the hero in as his own careing for him and makeing sure he was brought up well, "Two year's have passed since that night." the hero thought to himself as he got up out of bett to start what seemed like a normal summer Tag "Boy where are Du it's time to start work!" excalimed the old man as he knocked on his door "Eh... I hate mornings." sagte the hero as he got up out of bett getting dressed to start another day. With the sun bareing down on them it seemed as if hell had found it's way to Siege "Are...

Bare Bones chapter 2 part 1

posted by Lore_Master

He couldn't stop stareing at his reflection "What am I? who am I...?" he asked himself looking at the black wings on his back, he took hold of his wings ripping them off violently howling in pain, massive amounts of blood were gushing from his back he began feeling weak soon falling to the ground into the puddle of muddy water he layed there lifeless he had completely gegeben up, he slowly faded out of consciousness as his blood slowly filled the muddy puddle he started to laugh feeling the madness took over his mind, he rolled over to look at the star's once Mehr before he was completely dead...