This is the first story i have ever let anybody read before. Some of my Friends have told me it was good and i need to gepostet it. so here it is i hope Du like it........
I was running through a pitch black tunnel, the cold wind whipping through my jacket. Then an evil voice said. “Run u pathetic, worthless, creature run!!!” then the voice would break out in evil laughter. Something grabbed my legs I fell face first on to the cold hard tile. The creature starting snaking up my body forcing the air from my lungs. I woke up screaming. I ran into the bathroom and splashed water on my face.
“Poison! Poison! Du ok?!” Nick yells running up the stairs to my room. He stopped in the bathroom doorway decked out in his usual black hair, black t-shirt, black pants, and combat boots. “Bad dream again?” he asked. I nodded. “You ever know what there about?” “Nope their a little different every night.” I sagte while drying my face. “Well get dressed I have your Favorit ready.” he sagte and disappeared down stairs. I put on whatever my hand happen to touch first. Which was my “vampires suck black t-shirt. I pulled on my black skinny jeans and combat boots and race downstairs. Nick was sitting on the navy blue couch in the living room drinking a warm cup of AB negative. “Ok where’s mine Mr. Pig.” I sagte smirking. “On the counter” he said. I ran to the kitchen, grabbed my blood and plopped down in my fuzzy black saucer chair. “By the way Poison I Liebe that shirt.” Nick said. “Why thank Du Nick. It is very hard being a vampire sometimes Du know what I mean right?” I said. “Yep no sunlight, no garlic I hate the smell of that junk. And the whole living forever thing.” Nick said. “Are we gonna meet Onyx and Romeo at the Blood Club tonight?” he asked. “I think so I’ll call Onyx later, u know how later see sleep in. “I said. “I’ll call Romeo after I’m done” Nick said. Suddenly I heard a knock on the front door. “I’ll get it” I sagte jumping up from my chair. Jagger was at the door. “After a century don’t u know u just can come in. “I said. “Well I didn’t want to be rude.” he said. “Whatever come in. Yo Nick its Jagger! Nick’s in the living room there’s some AB negative on the counter if u want it.“ I said. “Thanks but I just fed.” Jagger said. “So? I and Nick are going hunting in a minute. And I had some. “I said. Just then Nick walked in. “Your not flirting with my girlfriend. Are u Jaguar?” Nick said. “Nope not at all. Du to going hunting soon mind if I come?” Jagger said. “Sure u can come with us. “We’re leaving as soon as Poison gets ready.“ Nick said. “Girls and their make-up.” Jagger sagte rolling his eyes. “I’ll take long if Du too keep complaining” I said. “NO” they both sagte at the same time. “Ok then “I said. I raced up the stairs. I opened my black out curtains in my room and moonlight streamed in my room. I took out my signature black lipstick, eyeliner, and eye shadow and put them on. I picked out my fav chain and pinned it to my pants, and put in my fav bat earrings. I raced back down the stairs. “Gosh u look deathly!” Nick sagte wide eyed. “Well thank you, now come on you’re the slow pokes now. “ I said. “We can’t go yet.” Nick said. “Why not?” I asked. Du have to call Onyx first I’ve already called Romeo.” he said. “Oh ya” I raced off to call my friend Onyx. “Hello” she said. “Hey it Poison u up for the Blood Club tonight.” I asked. “Sure what time. Midnight?” She said. “Ok meet u there.” I said. “Ok bye Poi” she said. “Bye Onyx.“ We hung up the phone. I ran to the porch where the guys were waiting. "Where to?" I asked. "There’s a Goth club called the dungeon on 13th avenue" Jagger suggested. "Sounds fine to me" Nick said. "I heard the girls there are Hot." Jagger said. Nick grin. I hit him on the back of his head. “I mean not as hot as Du Poison" He stammered. We all started laughing, and started walking toward the Dungeon. We got there just before the crowd. "Every man for his own" I heard Jagger whisper to Nick, as he walked in. "You’re on." Nick sagte as he disappeared into the Dungeon. I walk through the doors. Musik was blaring through the speakers that were in the ceiling. I walked around for a few minutes, catching some guy’s eyes. Suddenly I ran out one of the side exits. Out of the corner of my eye I saw a guy follow me. I burst into a dark alley. It was dark and counseled un-wanting eyes. I slumped down the Wand and put my head on my knees, just before a guy burst through the exit after me. "Hey girl Du ok" he asked. I lifted my head and stared at him. “I sagte u ok" the guy sagte while helping me up. “I’m Jock I’ve seen u around here before. What's your name?" Jock asked. "Poison now what do u want?" I sagte luring him into my trap. “nothing really what's wrong with you." Jock asked me. I broke down in fake tears. "Everything! Abusive family, nobody cares about me! I’m an outcast toss out like I was never there!" I said. Jock pulled me into a hug and I started crying into his shoulder. "Sssshhh its ok Poison its ok." he sagte stroking my hair. I know what you’re thinking it’s stupid of me to just walk up to some stranger and let him hug me. Point is I could break his back in a Sekunde if I wanted to. I sent his mind some relaxing thoughts. He didn’t even flinch as I sunk my fangs into his neck. After a few Minuten he stopped stroking my hair and staggered. I released his neck and licked the blood away from my lips. Jock propped himself against a wall. “Gosh no girl ever before has made me lightheaded before." he sagte looking at me. “Well I’m a different girl" I sagte smiling. “Well I got to go. Nice meeting Du Poison." Jock sagte and walked off. I went back into the Dungeon and scanned the room for Nick. I spotted Nick attached to a girls neck in a far corner. To anybody else it would appear that they were making out. Nick sensed me and released the girl. The girl staggered a bit a lean against a wall. "Tasty" Nick sagte walking up to me. “Yep" I replied. "Where Jagger at?" I asked. “Look for the group of girls." nick replied scanning the room. "Over there." he said. Jagger saw us and pushed the mob of girls away. “ya’ll ready to go" Jagger sagte coming up to me and Nick. "Yep" “Lets sneak out the back door." I said. We head out the back door. We walked into the alley. When the guys went to turn eh corner, something schlagen, punsch me in the temple. I cried out in pain. I stood up into a fighting stance. Nick rushed back around the corner, followed Von Jagger. “What happen?!" Nick demanded. "Something hit me in the temple." I sagte rubbing my head. "I'll kill anyone who lays a finger on...." nick started to say before Jagger sagte "hit the deck!" and ducked behind a dumpster. Me and Nick hit the asphalt just as something sharp flew over our heads. Cold laughter filled the alley. Nick cursed "vampire slayer" he whispered. He jumped up with me right behind him. Jagger came out from behind the dumpster. Nick and Jagger step in front of me. “3 Vampire and 1 slayer that doesn't seem fair." the slayer said. "Fair for us" I spat. “How about I introduce my self cause it's the last thing you'll ever hear. I'm eichelhäher, jay of the 23 division of slayers. Now die creatures!” eichelhäher, jay sagte and he lunged at the 3 of us. “Poison get out of here we can take care of ourselves.” Nick said. I backed up and ran into somebody. Weiter thing I know there was a sharp point on left shoulder and warm blood running down my back. “I told Du eichelhäher, jay Du are not ready for this yet, leave this to the pros.” sagte a female voice behind me. eichelhäher, jay stopped in his tracks. “I know what I’m doing Nina.” He growled. “You do not. Go crawl back into whatever hole Du came out of.” Nina sagte sternly. “Now the youngster is gone where we were” Nina sagte laughing. Nina shoved the messer thought the back of my chest, it barely missed my heart. I fell to the ground clutching my chest. . “POISON!” Nick yelled at the slayer, then here lunged at her. Nina kicked my in the head. Pain washed through my body, I had starts in my vision from lack of blood. I was about unconscious Von the time Nick and Jagger had run Nina off. Nick ran to my side. “Poison? Poison? Poi?” nick sagte with concern. “We better get out of here before my slayers Zeigen up” Jagger sagte looking around for Mehr attackers. “Where do we go then? We can’t just go back to your house they might follow us.” I barely heard Nick say. “The……..vampire…….community” I barely whispered, while gasping for breath. “Hold on Poison. We’ll get Du to safety……….” I barely heard Nick sagte before I was surrounded Von darkness.
I was running through a pitch black tunnel, the cold wind whipping through my jacket. Then an evil voice said. “Run u pathetic, worthless, creature run!!!” then the voice would break out in evil laughter. Something grabbed my legs I fell face first on to the cold hard tile. The creature starting snaking up my body forcing the air from my lungs. I woke up screaming. I ran into the bathroom and splashed water on my face.
“Poison! Poison! Du ok?!” Nick yells running up the stairs to my room. He stopped in the bathroom doorway decked out in his usual black hair, black t-shirt, black pants, and combat boots. “Bad dream again?” he asked. I nodded. “You ever know what there about?” “Nope their a little different every night.” I sagte while drying my face. “Well get dressed I have your Favorit ready.” he sagte and disappeared down stairs. I put on whatever my hand happen to touch first. Which was my “vampires suck black t-shirt. I pulled on my black skinny jeans and combat boots and race downstairs. Nick was sitting on the navy blue couch in the living room drinking a warm cup of AB negative. “Ok where’s mine Mr. Pig.” I sagte smirking. “On the counter” he said. I ran to the kitchen, grabbed my blood and plopped down in my fuzzy black saucer chair. “By the way Poison I Liebe that shirt.” Nick said. “Why thank Du Nick. It is very hard being a vampire sometimes Du know what I mean right?” I said. “Yep no sunlight, no garlic I hate the smell of that junk. And the whole living forever thing.” Nick said. “Are we gonna meet Onyx and Romeo at the Blood Club tonight?” he asked. “I think so I’ll call Onyx later, u know how later see sleep in. “I said. “I’ll call Romeo after I’m done” Nick said. Suddenly I heard a knock on the front door. “I’ll get it” I sagte jumping up from my chair. Jagger was at the door. “After a century don’t u know u just can come in. “I said. “Well I didn’t want to be rude.” he said. “Whatever come in. Yo Nick its Jagger! Nick’s in the living room there’s some AB negative on the counter if u want it.“ I said. “Thanks but I just fed.” Jagger said. “So? I and Nick are going hunting in a minute. And I had some. “I said. Just then Nick walked in. “Your not flirting with my girlfriend. Are u Jaguar?” Nick said. “Nope not at all. Du to going hunting soon mind if I come?” Jagger said. “Sure u can come with us. “We’re leaving as soon as Poison gets ready.“ Nick said. “Girls and their make-up.” Jagger sagte rolling his eyes. “I’ll take long if Du too keep complaining” I said. “NO” they both sagte at the same time. “Ok then “I said. I raced up the stairs. I opened my black out curtains in my room and moonlight streamed in my room. I took out my signature black lipstick, eyeliner, and eye shadow and put them on. I picked out my fav chain and pinned it to my pants, and put in my fav bat earrings. I raced back down the stairs. “Gosh u look deathly!” Nick sagte wide eyed. “Well thank you, now come on you’re the slow pokes now. “ I said. “We can’t go yet.” Nick said. “Why not?” I asked. Du have to call Onyx first I’ve already called Romeo.” he said. “Oh ya” I raced off to call my friend Onyx. “Hello” she said. “Hey it Poison u up for the Blood Club tonight.” I asked. “Sure what time. Midnight?” She said. “Ok meet u there.” I said. “Ok bye Poi” she said. “Bye Onyx.“ We hung up the phone. I ran to the porch where the guys were waiting. "Where to?" I asked. "There’s a Goth club called the dungeon on 13th avenue" Jagger suggested. "Sounds fine to me" Nick said. "I heard the girls there are Hot." Jagger said. Nick grin. I hit him on the back of his head. “I mean not as hot as Du Poison" He stammered. We all started laughing, and started walking toward the Dungeon. We got there just before the crowd. "Every man for his own" I heard Jagger whisper to Nick, as he walked in. "You’re on." Nick sagte as he disappeared into the Dungeon. I walk through the doors. Musik was blaring through the speakers that were in the ceiling. I walked around for a few minutes, catching some guy’s eyes. Suddenly I ran out one of the side exits. Out of the corner of my eye I saw a guy follow me. I burst into a dark alley. It was dark and counseled un-wanting eyes. I slumped down the Wand and put my head on my knees, just before a guy burst through the exit after me. "Hey girl Du ok" he asked. I lifted my head and stared at him. “I sagte u ok" the guy sagte while helping me up. “I’m Jock I’ve seen u around here before. What's your name?" Jock asked. "Poison now what do u want?" I sagte luring him into my trap. “nothing really what's wrong with you." Jock asked me. I broke down in fake tears. "Everything! Abusive family, nobody cares about me! I’m an outcast toss out like I was never there!" I said. Jock pulled me into a hug and I started crying into his shoulder. "Sssshhh its ok Poison its ok." he sagte stroking my hair. I know what you’re thinking it’s stupid of me to just walk up to some stranger and let him hug me. Point is I could break his back in a Sekunde if I wanted to. I sent his mind some relaxing thoughts. He didn’t even flinch as I sunk my fangs into his neck. After a few Minuten he stopped stroking my hair and staggered. I released his neck and licked the blood away from my lips. Jock propped himself against a wall. “Gosh no girl ever before has made me lightheaded before." he sagte looking at me. “Well I’m a different girl" I sagte smiling. “Well I got to go. Nice meeting Du Poison." Jock sagte and walked off. I went back into the Dungeon and scanned the room for Nick. I spotted Nick attached to a girls neck in a far corner. To anybody else it would appear that they were making out. Nick sensed me and released the girl. The girl staggered a bit a lean against a wall. "Tasty" Nick sagte walking up to me. “Yep" I replied. "Where Jagger at?" I asked. “Look for the group of girls." nick replied scanning the room. "Over there." he said. Jagger saw us and pushed the mob of girls away. “ya’ll ready to go" Jagger sagte coming up to me and Nick. "Yep" “Lets sneak out the back door." I said. We head out the back door. We walked into the alley. When the guys went to turn eh corner, something schlagen, punsch me in the temple. I cried out in pain. I stood up into a fighting stance. Nick rushed back around the corner, followed Von Jagger. “What happen?!" Nick demanded. "Something hit me in the temple." I sagte rubbing my head. "I'll kill anyone who lays a finger on...." nick started to say before Jagger sagte "hit the deck!" and ducked behind a dumpster. Me and Nick hit the asphalt just as something sharp flew over our heads. Cold laughter filled the alley. Nick cursed "vampire slayer" he whispered. He jumped up with me right behind him. Jagger came out from behind the dumpster. Nick and Jagger step in front of me. “3 Vampire and 1 slayer that doesn't seem fair." the slayer said. "Fair for us" I spat. “How about I introduce my self cause it's the last thing you'll ever hear. I'm eichelhäher, jay of the 23 division of slayers. Now die creatures!” eichelhäher, jay sagte and he lunged at the 3 of us. “Poison get out of here we can take care of ourselves.” Nick said. I backed up and ran into somebody. Weiter thing I know there was a sharp point on left shoulder and warm blood running down my back. “I told Du eichelhäher, jay Du are not ready for this yet, leave this to the pros.” sagte a female voice behind me. eichelhäher, jay stopped in his tracks. “I know what I’m doing Nina.” He growled. “You do not. Go crawl back into whatever hole Du came out of.” Nina sagte sternly. “Now the youngster is gone where we were” Nina sagte laughing. Nina shoved the messer thought the back of my chest, it barely missed my heart. I fell to the ground clutching my chest. . “POISON!” Nick yelled at the slayer, then here lunged at her. Nina kicked my in the head. Pain washed through my body, I had starts in my vision from lack of blood. I was about unconscious Von the time Nick and Jagger had run Nina off. Nick ran to my side. “Poison? Poison? Poi?” nick sagte with concern. “We better get out of here before my slayers Zeigen up” Jagger sagte looking around for Mehr attackers. “Where do we go then? We can’t just go back to your house they might follow us.” I barely heard Nick say. “The……..vampire…….community” I barely whispered, while gasping for breath. “Hold on Poison. We’ll get Du to safety……….” I barely heard Nick sagte before I was surrounded Von darkness.
On a foggy Tag ,
Following the light ,
Running far away .
There was a little car ,
Driven Von two children ,
Made out of plastic and gum ,
With a fake license number .
And the car was the product
Of one’s imagination,
It was the guide through the forest
Of his life’s interpretation.
And the forest was dark
And hunted Von Wölfe ,
Full of tears and pain
And of smiles went to vain.
And this kid was an orphan,
Slowly rushing through life ,
Searching for his mother ,
Waiting to be held tight.
He is Lost and scared ,
Yet unstoppable ,
Cause all his life he’s spent
Walking through that forest.
We ain’t all lucky and rich
oder have families.
The truth is we only have ourselves,
To make our own journies.
This orphan’s an example
For those who don’t know ,
That that forest is the rode
We all have to go on .
First person Schreiben is when the characters is speaking directly toward another person(You). Du use words like "I", "Mine", "We", "Us." The character is telling the story to Du themselves.
Second Person
Third person is the exact opposite. Instead of the character talking to you, the narrator is talking about the character. Your main words are "You", and "Your."
Third Person
Third person is almost similar to Sekunde person. The narrator is talking to you, but instead they use words like "He", "She", "It", and "They." Third person Bücher often have the most detail.
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this my poem...I just wrote it randomly...Don't know if it's any good...what do Du think?
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If Du Liebe him,
Tell him so.
If Du Liebe him,
Tell him not to go.
The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
Don’t hide away,
Wishing all day,
Don’t hide away,
Just come out and say.
“Yes, I Liebe you,
I’ve told Du so.
And if Du Liebe me,
Please don’t go.”
“Yes, I Liebe you,
I’ve told Du so.
And if Du Liebe me,
Please don’t go.”
“Please, please,
Please don’t go.
Please, please.
Please, please don’t go.”
So, if Du Liebe him,
Tell him so.
If Du Liebe him,
Tell him not to go.
The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
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If Du Liebe him,
Tell him so.
If Du Liebe him,
Tell him not to go.
The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
Don’t hide away,
Wishing all day,
Don’t hide away,
Just come out and say.
“Yes, I Liebe you,
I’ve told Du so.
And if Du Liebe me,
Please don’t go.”
“Yes, I Liebe you,
I’ve told Du so.
And if Du Liebe me,
Please don’t go.”
“Please, please,
Please don’t go.
Please, please.
Please, please don’t go.”
So, if Du Liebe him,
Tell him so.
If Du Liebe him,
Tell him not to go.
The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
Little raindrops shiny,silver,
Dropping silently into the river.
A girl sitting quiet,alone,
Her smile is fading,her hope is gone.
It faded really long ago,
That sounds sad,i know.
She quickly wipes away a tear,
It's her secret so no one can hear.
She secretly cries every night,
It's her fate,so she cant fight.
She touches a raindrop and goes back inside,
She is so lost,she's losing her pride.
All she asks for is a friend,
Someone to be there and understand.
So help her to make her dream come true,
There's always something Du can do.
Dropping silently into the river.
A girl sitting quiet,alone,
Her smile is fading,her hope is gone.
It faded really long ago,
That sounds sad,i know.
She quickly wipes away a tear,
It's her secret so no one can hear.
She secretly cries every night,
It's her fate,so she cant fight.
She touches a raindrop and goes back inside,
She is so lost,she's losing her pride.
All she asks for is a friend,
Someone to be there and understand.
So help her to make her dream come true,
There's always something Du can do.
what I'm Schreiben isn't exactly an Artikel , but I hope Du will enjoy it ^_^ ..
Girl; Do I ever kreuz you'r mind ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Do Du like me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Do Du want me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would Du cry if I left ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would Du live for me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would Du do anything for me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Choose me oder you'r life ?
Boy; My life .
The girl runs away in shock and pain and the boy runs after her and says ....
*The reason Du never kreuz my mind is because Du are always on my mind .
*The reason why I don't like Du is because I Liebe Du .
*The reason I don't want Du is because I need Du .
*The reason I wouldn't cry if Du left is because I would die if Du left .
*The reason I wouldn't live for Du is because I would die for Du .
*The reason why I'm not willing to do Du anything for Du is because I would do everything for Du .
*The reason I chose my life is because Du are my life .
Girl; Do I ever kreuz you'r mind ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Do Du like me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Do Du want me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would Du cry if I left ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would Du live for me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would Du do anything for me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Choose me oder you'r life ?
Boy; My life .
The girl runs away in shock and pain and the boy runs after her and says ....
*The reason Du never kreuz my mind is because Du are always on my mind .
*The reason why I don't like Du is because I Liebe Du .
*The reason I don't want Du is because I need Du .
*The reason I wouldn't cry if Du left is because I would die if Du left .
*The reason I wouldn't live for Du is because I would die for Du .
*The reason why I'm not willing to do Du anything for Du is because I would do everything for Du .
*The reason I chose my life is because Du are my life .
inch Von inch
bringing me closer
to my doom
Schmetterlinge of
anticipation
flutter nervously
in my stomach
knuckles whiten
jaws clench
what have I
gotten myself into
the suspense
is killing me
I'm going to hate it
I'm going to Liebe it
I might lose my lunch
but I don't care
heaven help me
here it comes...
...
I hold my breath...
...
and then
I scream
my stomach
drops
my breath
is stolen
my heart
is pounding
adrenaline
courses
through
my veins
amid screams
of sweet terror
I fling up
my hands
and ride on
the wings
of Thrill!