I'm kinda new to writing(well sorta. I'm Schreiben a book in the Teen Titans club) So I decided to see if I could write a good story. So here's a prologue and please tell me what Du think of this so I can see if I should start Schreiben the story oder not.
Four Hundred years ago, a girl named Akari Kokawa lived in a small village in Japan. She lived alone with her Father, . She never knew her mother for she was killed Von her husband's brother. Akari's father was a cruel man. He beat his child and would often sell her body to men for money. She had enough of his torture and stabbed him to death in his sleep. She fled her Home and moved to Hong Kong, China where she became an orphan and lived with an elderly woman named Chan-juan. Akari took care of Chan-juan and thought of her as a mother. But, five years later on Akari's 16th birthday, her father's brother found them and killed both her and the elderly woman. When their souls reached purgatory the elderly woman went to Heaven, but Akari's was forbidden from BOTH Heaven and hell. So her soul wondered into space. She started to steal the souls of those living in suffering and take them for her own so they will never have a chance at reaching Heaven. Her soul still walks the earth today, and she still takes the souls out of the living. But legend has it, that one day, one person with a pure spirit will be born with the duty of vanquishing Akari and freeing the spirits so that they may final rest at peace.
Four Hundred years ago, a girl named Akari Kokawa lived in a small village in Japan. She lived alone with her Father, . She never knew her mother for she was killed Von her husband's brother. Akari's father was a cruel man. He beat his child and would often sell her body to men for money. She had enough of his torture and stabbed him to death in his sleep. She fled her Home and moved to Hong Kong, China where she became an orphan and lived with an elderly woman named Chan-juan. Akari took care of Chan-juan and thought of her as a mother. But, five years later on Akari's 16th birthday, her father's brother found them and killed both her and the elderly woman. When their souls reached purgatory the elderly woman went to Heaven, but Akari's was forbidden from BOTH Heaven and hell. So her soul wondered into space. She started to steal the souls of those living in suffering and take them for her own so they will never have a chance at reaching Heaven. Her soul still walks the earth today, and she still takes the souls out of the living. But legend has it, that one day, one person with a pure spirit will be born with the duty of vanquishing Akari and freeing the spirits so that they may final rest at peace.
Introduction
Everybody has a friend. Someone to talk to, to share your secrets with. Someone in this cold cruel world that Du could trust. A friend doesn't exactly have to be a person. It could be a pet, a journal-sometimes a banana-or even a rock. A friend doesn't have to be real, either. A character from a story oder movie, perhaps? But that's still something everyone can look at, hear, oder feel. Well, some of those make-believe friends, not actors, are things only you can look at, hear, and feel. Now those are called imaginary friends, as Du probably know. Imaginary Friends can be anything Du want them to be. An animal, a creature Du made up, a monster, oder just another human being. There are rare cases when special people have imaginary Friends that...are not exactly in the afterlife. But, no matter what, whatever kind of friend it is, that one true friend will always be there for you.
Always.
Always.
Always...
Everybody has a friend. Someone to talk to, to share your secrets with. Someone in this cold cruel world that Du could trust. A friend doesn't exactly have to be a person. It could be a pet, a journal-sometimes a banana-or even a rock. A friend doesn't have to be real, either. A character from a story oder movie, perhaps? But that's still something everyone can look at, hear, oder feel. Well, some of those make-believe friends, not actors, are things only you can look at, hear, and feel. Now those are called imaginary friends, as Du probably know. Imaginary Friends can be anything Du want them to be. An animal, a creature Du made up, a monster, oder just another human being. There are rare cases when special people have imaginary Friends that...are not exactly in the afterlife. But, no matter what, whatever kind of friend it is, that one true friend will always be there for you.
Always.
Always.
Always...
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It was the Weiter day. I got dressed nervously, had Bruno thought I was a helper? I put on a blue hemd, shirt that sagte "Do I Look Like I Care?" and skinny jeans. I ran outside to look for the bus, it wasn't there. I waited and waited, but it never came! I ran to school. I finally got to school no one was in the halls. I realized everyone was in class. I wrote a fake note in cursive the best I could. When I walked into class I gave the teacher the note. She read happily. Not looking angry at all, she sagte "Oh! I didn't give Du a note. It was saying the bus driver was sick and there were no subs availble. Sorry!" I replied with " It's fine"