Does this sound ok?

Sorry for any misspells. My iPod has a mind of it's own.

I quickly crossed the grassy field,not looking both ways. Today had been terrible. Well,more terrible than usual. There's the usual; my mom doesn't wake me up on time and even though every night I set my alarm,it still never goes off,didn't have enough time to eat breakfast,and then left something at Home and had go drive back. 
  But something was off today. The way the air had turned suddenly hot in the middle of winter. The way my teacher sat and stared blankly at her desk. The way every person I passed seem to have their eyes glued to me. 
  I was too busy with Lesen to notice a guy that was running straight towards me. He slammed into me and I wobbled back on my heels. Luckily I have always had pretty good balance so I stayed upright while he fell vorwärts-, nach vorn just to the side of me,a football rolling across the field. 
  He jumped back up and pressed my fingers into a now sore spot. 
  "Woah! I'm sorry. Are Du ok?" 
  I winced at the sore spot but I nodded and looked up. 
  "Um,yeah. I'm fine. Thanks." The boy standing in front of me had erdbeere blonde hair and eyes the color of the sea. 
  He grinned and said,"Oh,that's good. I'm Pier-"
  "Yo! Pierce c'mon! Pass the football."
  He shrugged and picked up the football. When he got about half-way back to his friend I yelled out,"Narella! My name is Narella!"