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Help needed with a plothole: can Vampire 'make' their hearts beat?

So, I'm Schreiben a story about a girl discovering a Supernatural world parallel to her own. The twist is, the ordinary world has been shocked Von the discovery of vampires, and they're being hunted down and put into 'reserves'.
Every student and every working person has to undergo a bi-annual 'MediCheck', where they basically check if you're human. I've found ways for my Vampire to evade things like a blood test and a body temperature test (including them spreading rumors about themselves so they can easily pass other normal vampire 'marks', like not being able to be seen in a mirror). Anyway, I've just discovered a huuuuge plothole: vampires' hearts don't beat.
In 'my' mythology, blood sort of kick-starts the vampire's body again: the blood flows, albeit very slowly, the blood enables a vampire to heal and use their Supernatural abilities, even lets their hair and nails grow again (albeit very, very slowly), and most importantly, let them control the muscles of their body. So would it be too implausible to give them control over the muscles of their hearts, so they could make their herz beat Von choice, like they can breathe Von choice but it's not necessary?
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Wow, that's one big infodump :') Sorry for the tl;dr, and I kind of gave away Mehr of my story than I wanted to
Lunaste posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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LOL dw
1-2vampire posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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i really hate vamp Bücher but it actually sounds good maybe the absense of a Liebe story hmmm.... if u do this right it could actually be pretty beliebt
bookworm12345 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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one flaw in this, even when your dead, hair and nails grow, its the same thing with vampires, it's a good idea but do some research
Potter-rulez posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
 Lunaste posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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ellieoth said:
I am also really interested in Vampire and other creatures!!!I really Liebe your story!!!Great twist!!!!I believe that Vampire can make their hearts beat!As they have control over their muscles and they are extremely strong,they could probably 'make' them beat!!!
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Thanks! I guess I will work that in, they can make their herz beat but it's mostly an annoyance and unnecessary use of strength for them to do it all the time :)
Lunaste posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Yes,it is!!!However ,they can do it in order to pass the bi-annual 'MediCheck'!
ellieoth posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
vamp_grl_123 said:
i think thats an awsome twist. i never heard of that in any vamp book i wote oder read...and i am obsessed w/ vamps...(can u tell Von my name)
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
nataliespn said:
I agree with ellieoth.And I Liebe your idea!!!!!!
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AgentCoop said:
Well Du already sagte that in your established mytholgy a vampire is able to control the muscles in his/her body. There's your answer, as the herz is essentially a big muscle!
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Haha, I guess I had my own answer, mostly wanted to know if people would find it plausible! Thanks!
Lunaste posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
BiteMeCullen107 said:
Du could make a type of cure for that makes Vampire humans for a Tag oder for as long as Du want. It was on an episode in Moonlight.
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Hmm, that's a nice idea, but the point is that these Vampire have all these little tricks to circumvent exposure, I try not to have magic in my world :) but thanks :D
Lunaste posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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aww! thats kinda my idea: they're 1/2 human a Tag a week until they're 18 lol!
1-2vampire posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
harold said:
No, I don't think it plausible to have any creature have voluntary control over their involuntary muscles. If so, the Vampire wouldn't be able to do anything other than concentrating on making all their systems operate so they don't die. That Antwort your request.

However, in Du detail Du say that the blood flows, albeit very slowly. This means that vampires' hearts DO beat - there's no way for the blood to flow otherwise. So make it that vampire hearts beat INvoluntarily, when there's blood in their system. They get brighter, Mehr energetic, better color, their hearts beat, in every way Mehr human (and Mehr likely to pass inspection), when they've just fed.

That's a very interesting premise, and allows for a nice escalation between the humans and vampires, as each side figures out a new test/trick to find/avoid the others. After the humans figure out that undead hearts can beat, for instance, they have to capture and study them in order to figure out a new way to tell them apart. Cool.
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1-2vampire said:
great idea! and your story; your choice.
e.g, im Schreiben about Vampire also and in mine they bleed but their blood is heatless and black and they can be born and when younger than 18, they have a Tag a week they're 1/2 human until they're 18 and stop aging oder they can age later etc... also, there r 2 types of vamps in my story... oops sagte too much! but in mine, i made it how i wish Vampire were!
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