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Be a crazed hermit oder an underground invincible fighter... who is also crazed, LOL

My main character has two personalities and he is in an inner battle with himself at the moment. His family and Friends are dead thanks to an explosion that destroyed his entire hometown and he has no one else in life, which of course, makes him both angry and sad. So there are two paths i like for him, 1 become a hermit that talks to himself in a cave at his destroyed home, oder 2 become hateful and use his phenomenal powers that he received from his teilt, split personality to win in underground fights around the many cities in his world (who also fights inwardly as he constantly is berated Von his other personality).
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if u can explain this well it sounds pretty good
bookworm12345 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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felineattack said:
i think he should go the hermit route for a while, but then something will happen to remind him of his anger and he goes and fights

probably a really unoriginal and obvious answer... but i think it would be cool :)

this story sounds EPIC btw
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ryans_love said:
I like the idea of an underground invincible fighter, but it sounds too much like the mercenary Tony Almeida has become on 24. I think it could work, if Du give him a really deep character and a personality others can relate to.
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TOKIO said:
I HATE BOTH OF THEM NO OFFENSE I THINK Du SHOULD MAKE HIM LIKE GOOD AND THEN PUT LIKE PEOPLE THAT BOTHER HIM IN IT AND THEN HE TURNS BAD
SO LIKE HE IS GOOD THEN BAD :)
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that wouldn't make sense in the story. read the Frage again and know that he is the main character and is inherently good but his other personality is trying to take control of his body and that personality is inherently evil, though that doesn't reveal itself till the very end chapters of the story
Travalino00 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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