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Should she say that she is pregnant oder should she keep it quiet for awhile before tellin him.

I'm Schreiben a story about a 16 Jahr old who was cheated on Von her boyfriend. Her boyfriend made out with the new girl. He tells her one Tag before getting on the bus infront of everyone on the bus. They both say they have to tell eachother something and then he goes first and tell her. So...should she tell him. (She gets depressed and doesn't talk to anyone for a while)
 ISeeTheFuture posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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harold said:
It depends on how Du want the story to progress. Is it Mehr interesting to Du to present how she copes with the anger and resentment in silence, oder with the scorn and shame of such a public humiliation? Do Du want to focus on how such a betrayal dashes one's expectations and leads to distrust of others in her life as well as possibly Schauspielen out in other ways, oder do Du want her to repress in a different way Von presenting a nonchalant reaction, admitting that she's pregnant after that bombshell?

Are Du interested in exploring how they would work on figuring out what to do with the pregnancy, oder is it Mehr interesting to have her provide some silly, spur-of-the-moment thing that leads him to wonder what she was really going to say? What kind of a reaction was he trying to get Von such a public declaration of infidelity - was he hoping to get back at her for something, oder to try (in a very broken way) to get her to commit to their relationship, oder is he depressed and feels like he can't talk to her about his feelings? The Antwort to all of these Fragen should inform your decision.
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sapherequeen said:
Well, I suggest that she doesn't tell him. The depression could help her not say anything about her having his child.
But I also want to tell Du that whatever Du feel should happen is the perfect way a story should go, because you're the author. No one else can say otherwise :)
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sweet_n_silly said:
That is a very interesting question. It will determine where the story goes from there and possibly how it ends. If he's gunna be a big part of how she deals with her pregnancy, then she will have to tell him, probably closer to the start of it, but if he's not, then it could go either way. since she is feeling so depressed though, it might make Mehr sense for her not to, at least at first. I think Du should have her struggle with the deciscion for a while, Zeigen her internal debate, and decide with her. That's what I did with my book when I couldn't decide whether oder not my main character would commit the murder of her best friend oder not.
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innerstrength said:
Make it to were its on the tip of her tongue then at the last Minute she changes her mind.
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dylin1 said:
Totally she should tell him!
Boy: I made out with another girl
Girl: Yeah, well while u were doing that I was dealing with being pregnant!
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